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Happy fourth of July everyone! ^-^

I reviewed

Agent.Frappuccino- Remain Sane! (All 3 chapters)

Snake fang- Fables of Fantasy

Looking west- I never said I was brave

YasuRan- The chill

Experiment101- Cyn black Goddness

Andheavenfell- The unwanted

Weary writer-Villain

Dreamers-Requiem-Minor talent

Marcie13-Snow flakes

Electronicheart- Creatures (both chapters)

Melody-kun- A princess Dethroned

Adonnen Estenniel- Silver Glass (both chapters)


PrissyNovelist- Schizophrinia

Melissa Norvell- Bloodstained Noble

(Some of the reviews I did was from last week, but I forgot to post it on here .) So umm reviews for Chains of Hell will be lovely, I will update it soon! =D And um... please look at my poll! Thank you n.n

7/4/2010 #3,001

After writing some, creating graphic art, getting a sore throat, watching an hour of Supernatural, and reading, here is my second update today. Will be my last, by the way, until I can recover from Strep Throat. Weeeeee.....

Reviewed: (Ones who owe me)

Like Vintage Wine by Robt Emmett

Earlier Today: Shadows by Lianoid

Ones I Owe: (AT THIS TIME)

Mr. Ragna Badguy

Rayne The Writer


Coffee, Embrace and Another Love Story by MeAsIAm [Ch. 1]

My Review Style: Character Insight, Story Style (pretty much talking about the story plot, etc), and small Grammar (if there is much wrong and no one has put notice to it) My Story Open For Reviews: Creatures | Summary: In the middle of a human war, one girl runs away in her Father's command, but when she is near death, she meets a Creature, and her world is literally turned upside down as she meets another world, Human Earth. She also finds love and war.

I think that is all. I am really confused. How do you people keep up??!! I'm going to go sleep. *swallows* Owww.

7/4/2010 #3,002

Is anyone else getting this Error 503 thing?

7/4/2010 #3,003

On some forums. It's annoying

7/4/2010 #3,004


What are you trying to click on? I've gotten it a few times today on the "Review Game" forum, but not on the Bar...

~Avid. :)

7/4/2010 #3,005


Happy 4th of July everyone!! BANG BOOM POW WOW!!!! The sounds of fireworks~ Not to mention hints of alliteration and rhyming X) X3 XD

Today I am asking for reviews on "Satsimran" for I have uploaded the second addition =D Yay! Also, the first five people to review it will get TWO returning reviews!!!! *le gasp!* =O

Besides that, I will be returning reviews ^-^ Thanks for all your support!



Hmm, no I haven't. Is it for uploading or something??

7/4/2010 #3,006

Reviewed. Constructive criticism regarding easy fix (spelling and grammatical errors) for Cruelty much appreciated, though I'd love to know everyones thoughts on it.

If already reviewed, please Review Farmville, vice versa.

Summary, Cruelty: What great lengths to go to, just to fulfill such wishful hate. A oneshot written for July's Writing Challenge Contest. v. o1

EDIT:::Does anyone know if it's cheating to ask for spelling errors and grammatical errors fixes for WCC entry's?

7/4/2010 . Edited 7/4/2010 #3,007

Is anyone else getting this Error 503 thing?I was getting it, but it's gone away already.

7/4/2010 #3,008

Hello Roadhouse!

The entire country is on a strike today and tomorrow the palkhi comes for its annual pilgrimage in my city (I have mentioned it in my piece Empty Core :) ). So I am absolutely free for two days! Yay!

Ta-ta, going reviewing! :)



The Library: ch 1 to ch 4

Devil's play : ch 2


Satsmiran : ch 1 and ch 2

Creatures : ch 1

That is all for now, folks!

Will be back in the evening if I complete my studies. Really have to work on physics have a test this thursday.

Reviews for Coffee, Embrace and Another Love Story will be hugely appreciated! :D

7/4/2010 . Edited 7/4/2010 #3,009
Just posted Chapter 7 of A Princess Dethroned. Will repay all reviews.
7/4/2010 #3,010
this wild abyss

There was a major thunderstorm last night, so I couldn't get online without risking getting fried and whatnot. So I'll post what I reviewed

Farmville by Frets

Chapter 9 of I Never Said I Was Brave by lookingwest

Chapter 2 of 27 Club by Experiment101

Chapter 2 of Light in the Darkness by Darksmiter


Reviews for Silver Glass (and all my other stuff) are appreciated. All reviews are returned, of course.

7/5/2010 #3,011

RIGHT! I have a goal~ I will try and review about ten stories today. Let's see if I can. *cracks knuckles*

Creatures by ElectronicHeart

The Poetry Of Logical Ideas by Deefective

Pillowbook of Poems by waitingforwhatever

Persephone's Flight by AvidWriter-92

Satsimran by Piptik

Farmville: First by Frets

A Princess Dethroned by Melody-kun (2 chapters)

A Ranger's Tale by Mr Ragna Badguy

Children of Winata by Narq

Raindrop by Adonnen Estenniel

Silver Glass by Adonnen Estenniel

Oh my. That took me four hours.

Anyway, reviews for The Unwanted will be greatly appreciated and returned tomorrow~

Summary: Everyone knows that Gwendolyn is a heartless queen but somehow, Caleb manages to change her ways. Meanwhile, all Lucrecia does is pity herself. Throw her into a mad journey of curses, betrayal and tragedy, and she might just change...

Genre: Fantasy/Adventure/Romance

Hmm... I want to start a new story, actually. I might start writing it in the summer holidays. Basically, it's an Alice in the Wonderland story, but with my own plot and stuff... Check the future stories part on my profile if you're interested~

7/5/2010 #3,012

I owe these:

Silver Glass by Adonnen Estenniel

The Unwanted by andHeavenfell

Owed to me:

Farmville from Piptik

Edit: Totally forgot, Farmville from LookingWest, also.

7/5/2010 . Edited 7/5/2010 #3,013

Hey, Roadhouse. :)


Silver Glass [Chpt 2] by Adonnen Estenniel.

Raindrop by Adonnen Estenniel.

To Be Still, [Chpt 5 & 7] by Adonnen Estenniel.

Underground Crusade, [Chpts 3-4] by Cybernetic Crusader.

Animosity, [Chpt 1-2] by Cybernetic Crusader.


That's all that I can do tonight! :D Will try to hit some more tomorrow. :)

Requesting reviews for: Confessions (For July's WCC) or Persephone's Flight. :)

Thanks, and I'll repay your reviews as soon as I have time. :D

~Avid. :)

7/5/2010 #3,014

If anyone wants to read something funny, my friend and I wrote a story about the Trix rabbit getting his vengeance on the children that deprived him of the delicious story. It's called Silly No More. Review it if you read it and I'll get back to you. :)

7/5/2010 #3,015

Hi everyone! Okay here's what I've got so far:

Read and Reviewed

Things that go Bump in the Night by Netty-chan214

Heart to Heart by Agent.Frappuccino(Chapters 1 and 2)

Shadows by Lianoid

A Princess Dethroned by Melody-kun


Coffee, Embrace and Another Love Story by MeAsIAm

A Ranger's Tale by Mr Ragna Badguy

Minor Talent by Dreamers-Requiem

I'll review more late if I can but this is all I got for today and yesterday. I know its not that much but my power went out twice today so I didn't get to read as many stories as I wanted to. I'll continue tomorrow and if I can I'll squeeze in a few before I go to bed. In the meantime any reviews for Untangling the Web would be greatly appreciated.

Summary: For me dreaming is anything but harmless. I never saw it coming in the beginning. Imagine a world where the blissful feeling that comes whenever you lay down and close your eyes at night never comes. Now imagine they slowly sink to reality.

Kay I'm going to try to catch some sleep, if I can't, watch out for reviews from me (:

7/5/2010 . Edited 7/5/2010 #3,016

Wow, I realised that I have 3 practical sheets to submit today and I have not written even a single one. And the practical is like, 3 hours later. :(

Will review something this evening.

Meanwhile, reviews for Coffee, Embrace and Another Love Story will be appreciated and returned at the earliest!

7/5/2010 #3,017

Reviews given:

Silver Glass [Chapter 1] - Adonnen Estenniel

The Unwanted [Chapter 1] - andHeavenfell

Confessions [Chapter 1] - AvidWriter-92

Please, reviews only to Cruelty and Farmville :)

7/6/2010 . Edited 7/6/2010 #3,018
Sakina the Fallen Angel

*sneaks in*

Uh, do any of yous remember me?


Guess not...

Anyhow, I've returned after a veeeeeeeeery long hiatus with a new chapter of Soul Catcher.

Potential new readers, not sure if you wanna read it or not? No one told me about this but I got nominated for Round 9 of SkoW and also for La Campanella. Eh. Oh well... :3

Finally, if anyone here still remembers me then you guys will know how much of a reviewing machine I am. All reviews will be returned (PM me for reviews I owe you from the last time I was here cuz let's be fair, my memory ain't that great anymore).

Peace out ^^:;

7/6/2010 #3,019


Father's Day by ZyggyGirl

4th of July by ZyggyGirl

The Witching Hour by Xenolith

Right Hand, Left B*** by Adrenalin (For WCC)

God Gave Us Free Will by Lea Ai (For WCC)

Confessions by AvidWriter-92 (For WCC)

Promises Broken, Promises Kept by (For WCC)

A Ranger's Tale by Mr. Ragna Badbuy Chapters 1 & 2

Happy New Year, Zooey Harris by la bonne annee Chapter 8

Lou and Nico by lookingwest

Vampire and The Romantics by lookingwest Chapters 5

Blackbeard's End by Sercus Kaynine

For The Love of Shakespeare by Sercus Kaynine

Dolls & Cages by Sercus Kaynine – New favourite

Whimsical by Sercus Kaynine

The Devil May Care, But I Don't by Sercus Kaynine

Smooth Jazz by Sercus Kaynine

What You Can't See by Sercus Kaynine

Minor Talent by Dreamers-Requiem Chapter 15

Creatures by Electronic Heart Chapter 1


I Still Owe

Sercus Kaynine – 8 (I'll be reviewing The Wildest Tales next)

Electronic Heart – 1

Frayling – 1

Idareutoguess – 1

Hayley – 1

Sophie – 1

The Wings On Her Back - 1

If I owe anyone else any reviews, or if the amount I've posted is incorrect, please PM me the specs.

7/6/2010 . Edited 7/6/2010 #3,020
this wild abyss

Sakina! I remember you!

Anyhoo, good morning all. I'm still looking for reviews on Silver Glass, which will be returned promptly.

Peace out...(boy did that sound weird.)

7/6/2010 #3,021

Oh my god Sakina:O I remember you!

Anyway i'd love some reviews on Derek.

7/6/2010 #3,022
Sakina the Fallen Angel

Timmeeeee? O_o

And Adonnen Estenniel, I remember the penname ^^:;

7/6/2010 #3,023

Yup. I changed my penameXD

Um sorry about spamming review board.

7/6/2010 #3,024

hey i've just gotten back into my niche of writing.

can i get some reviews on Swalling This Bitter Pill?

i currently have none :O

it's a drama/friendship/angsty/hurt-comfort kinda novel.

(you don't have to read if it's not your type of book.)


7/6/2010 #3,025

Hello, people. I really should stop the alerts from this forum. Roadhouse tends to get busy a lot these days.

Anyway, I reviewed:

Infernobella's Adventures:Quest for the Holy Grail by Mataoaka

Silly No More by RentBoheme

Thats it. *Sigh* Im in a depressed mood... Not the best moods to review in.

Reviews for The Unwanted will be returned tomorrow, as always.

7/6/2010 #3,026

Hi! I would love a nice tall glass of review, and a packet of pork scratchings.

In particular any feedback anyone wants to offer up on any of my Tales From Avalon series, as that the biggest creative writing project I've ever got my teeth into, and it is also woefully inprogress

7/6/2010 #3,027

Reviewed Also

A Puppet in the Hand by sophiesix Chapters 1 & 2 - Damn good story, btw.

One plus one by gonnadielafing Chapter 5

Delusions by Wings On Her Back

For Shame, Ares by thewhimsicalbard (For WCC)

7/6/2010 #3,028

Oh my gosh! its sakina!!!

Thought I would pop in to take a peek, finally have some time off work, A WHOLE DAY, CAN YOU BELIEVE IT? any reviews would be appreciated maybe I'll write something.... do I owe reviews? PM me!

Reviewed: Tales From Avalon ch1, PapaMike

7/6/2010 . Edited 7/6/2010 #3,029

Quickly, QUICKLY, my darlings! I've just uploaded my submission for this month's Writing Challenge Contest. I'm still a bit iffy about it and I need some serious feedback. I have until midnight on the 7th to edit it. After that, everyone votes. Please review and tell me what you think! Reviews are returned, as per usge.

WCC Submissions: July: Conference with the Fiends

7/6/2010 #3,030
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