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Jainblu

I just don't get it, and i am starting to get a little desperate. I need feedback. I realise that i am not the greatest author that ever lived. In fact i accept that. No i embrace it, and therefore crave criticism. Anyone willing to criticise my work please do so.

Controlling Anger and Keeping Pace ยป His life is in pieces, and he's trying to keep a grip on his temper; She's starting to get angry about the lack of peace in her life... yeah, it's not the best time to put them together for a 'project'. The balance is about to tip.Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 11 - Words: 19,988 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 5-30-09 - Published: 6-17-08

6/3/2009 #1
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