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Lee's ghost re-born

"You gonna need to wear more then that," he teased as he tugged om his clothes.

:O Me like it very much! Keep writing. Why not fictionpress though? I'm gonna read it agin lol :)

1/8/2010 #661
Zina Nevirone

"I knew there would be a catch." She laughed.

((I find dA easier to use. When I've got more written I'll put some on here, but for now I'm not gonna.. ..))

1/8/2010 #662
Lee's ghost re-born

He kissed her forehead. "We all must make surfaces in life."

(One thought: I think it would be more damaging if she told Jack it was his baby. It would suck dying thinking you have a son, and you really don't. But you are the author and I am the insane fan :) *hugs*

1/8/2010 #663
Zina Nevirone

((That would make sense, as he'd be the person she'd tell everything to.. .. ..What did Jack look like at 16?? I need exact details. **hugs**))

"I suppose I must." She kissed him softly again.

1/8/2010 #664
Lee's ghost re-born

After a few more passionate kisses he went to warm up the car.

(Hmm, 5'7 with short blond hair, light blue eyes, very thin but he has muscles in his arms to make up for it. I feel bad, I changed your story :(

1/8/2010 #665
Zina Nevirone

((No, you did not ruin it. You made a suggestion, which I am going to use.))

Joey went to find some clean clothes and got changed before going out to him.

1/8/2010 #666
Lee's ghost re-born

(Whoohoo I made a contribution! :O)

They drove to get their son.

1/8/2010 #667
Zina Nevirone

"Do you think he had fun?" she asked quietly.

1/8/2010 #668
Lee's ghost re-born

"Oh I'm sure," he smiled. "He adores that neighbor girl."

(Any more story info you need and or ideas?

1/8/2010 #669
Zina Nevirone

She smiled and stared out the window.

((Not right.. ..I don't think so.. ..I'll let you know.))

1/8/2010 #670
Lee's ghost re-born

Theu pulled in front the house where he was waiting.

1/8/2010 #671
Zina Nevirone

She got out the car quickly and scooped Colin up and whirled him round. "Hey baby. Did you have fun?"

1/8/2010 #672
Lee's ghost re-born

He giggled and nodded.

(Have fun writing :)

1/8/2010 #673
Zina Nevirone

((Thanks))

"Did he behave?" Joey asked the neighbour.

1/8/2010 #674
Lee's ghost re-born

(Move it along until they're driving again. He has something say :)

1/8/2010 #675
Zina Nevirone

((Fine..lolz.))

Soon they were on their way home again.

1/8/2010 #676
Lee's ghost re-born

"Mama, she kissed me,"" he said. "Like you and Daddy," he puckered his lips showing the motion. "Only she said not to tell." He made a :O relzing he had just told.

1/8/2010 #677
Zina Nevirone

Joey laughed softly.

1/8/2010 #678
Lee's ghost re-born

"Is that good, Mommy?"

1/8/2010 #679
Zina Nevirone

"I thought you said kissing was "icky"."

1/8/2010 #680
Lee's ghost re-born

"Not with Lilly."

1/8/2010 #681
Zina Nevirone

Joey smiled softly. "If you say so.. .."

1/9/2010 #682
Lee's ghost re-born

Jack was doing his best not to laugh.

(I was thinkin jack should die while Joey is in labor, like he runs a red light trying to make it to the hospital, so he never sees the babay so there's never any doubt its not his. Cuz Luc has red hair right? And the both would have to make love to her around the same time so he would think its his.)

1/9/2010 #683
Zina Nevirone

((Luc has brown hair.. ..but yeah, that makes sense.. .. I'll make it fit.. .))

Joey turned to Jack, "What?"

1/9/2010 #684
Lee's ghost re-born

"He already has a girlfriend at 5, oh boy!" he smirked.

1/9/2010 #685
Zina Nevirone

"Yeah, we've got a tricky one here." Joey grinned back at her little boy.

1/9/2010 #686
Lee's ghost re-born

Their son smiled back.

1/9/2010 #687
Zina Nevirone

He's growing up fast.. ..Joey thought to herself, almost sadly.

1/9/2010 #688
Lee's ghost re-born

Jack kissed her cheek. I know.

1/9/2010 #689
Zina Nevirone

Eyes on the road, you. Joey smiled at him.

1/9/2010 #690
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