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Tekla

so, uh, dialogue!

help me out.

8/6/2010 #2,041
Tekla

he wanders in.

she attacks him, cos she thought he was someone else.

she's all, who's side are you on?!

him: no one's! I'm my own side!

she doesn't like that and wants him to pick a side.

8/6/2010 #2,042
Tekla

so how does he answer that?

just a, I'm on your side! :D?

or, a defiant "I'm my own side!"?

tricky business, this.

8/6/2010 #2,043
Tekla

ahaa, and the plunnie says to let him kiss her to make her trust him.

haaa, that's more of a move for a girl.

*high-five to the face*

8/6/2010 #2,044
Tekla

I could always do the, "I wanna be with youuu"

*cue romance scrooge*

but that would be even more tricky to work out

8/6/2010 #2,045
Tekla

blah.

I think I need to back up and redo this dialogue, cos it's not working XD

8/6/2010 #2,046
Tekla

okay, omit the "you need to chose NAOW"

and go the original route, and be more defensive...

8/6/2010 #2,047
Tekla

okay. start over.

he walks in, she attacks, apologetic but still wary.

she asks who's side he's on, he'll say nobody's.

she'll brighten a little, and start talking about her lifestyle (cos that's what she does)

and then offer for him to go with her

8/6/2010 #2,048
Tekla

oh snap.

that might work.

8/6/2010 #2,049
Tekla

spam

8/6/2010 #2,050
Tekla

sing to me, O Muses...

8/6/2010 #2,051
Tekla

yessss.

that keeps with the characterization!

thank you, BR! *smooches*

8/6/2010 #2,052
Tekla

aaaand on to the fight.

... tomorrow.

8/6/2010 #2,053
Chasing Skylines

*brick* (Not to be confused with brick'd)The stars actually look like pompoms.

8/7/2010 . Edited 8/7/2010 #2,054
Chasing Skylines

this'll be difficult to do without using character names.

Come up with nicknames? 8/7/2010 #2,055
Chasing Skylines

but then she realized it was an RGer and didn't feel as sad XD

'Cause Review Loveā„¢ from RGers are especially blessed by Reggy.

8/7/2010 #2,056
Chasing Skylines

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1hvaeHllwtw&feature=topvideos

At first, I couldn't tell if this was real or not.

That is the state of American politics.

8/7/2010 #2,057
Chasing Skylines

That reminds me. I gotta finish my APUSH summer reading.

8/7/2010 #2,058
Chasing Skylines

Time to clock out.

'Night, BR.

8/7/2010 #2,059
Tekla

Come up with nicknames?

or just stick with vague pronouns.

8D

8/7/2010 #2,060
Tekla

Sesshy, how come you're not coming on during the day?

8/7/2010 #2,061
karma-dollie

*tackle glomps BR*

This chapter is coming along slowly, but it's a big action chapter so I suppose that can be expected. There's a lot to change from the previous version.

8/9/2010 #2,062
Tekla

posty post.

hi BR!

8/9/2010 #2,063
Tekla

FYI, folks!

the forum below us is gaining on teh post count...

8/9/2010 #2,064
Tekla

short chapters, yay?

8/9/2010 #2,065
karma-dollie

:D :D :D

I fixed the next transitional section that needed hardcore rewriting! *pompoms*

Time to get them to a new, unintentional place on the other end of the door. :)

8/9/2010 #2,066
karma-dollie

Hmm...I didn't want to move that ending bit to the next chapter, but maybe I should. That's a lot of jumping around through space after all the action the kids just went through.

But it's also a nice little reconciliation. I want to keep it where it is. I plotted it that way for a reason.

8/9/2010 #2,067
karma-dollie

At the end of this chapter's first rough draft, it is 21 pages and 10,700 words. o.O

8/9/2010 #2,068
Chasing Skylines

Lots of music links.

8/9/2010 . Edited 8/9/2010 #2,069
Chasing Skylines

- chose this at random -

8/9/2010 . Edited 8/9/2010 #2,070
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