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1/28/2009 . Edited by Chasing Skylines, 3/11/2009 #1
William McKinney

Name: Lucy

Story title: Genetic Revolution, still writing it.

Brief summary: The story follows Lucy and her five friends as the run from a group with governement ties known as the organization. she and her friends are all genetically augmented supersoldiers.

Phys. Appearance: Lucy is about five foot seven inches, thin and has almost pale skin. she has grey, thoughtful eyes and red hair cut short. she has an almost muscled look to her.

Basic personality: Sarcastic, Cynical, and completely loyal to her friends, she can be cold and ruthless at times when it comes to dealing with agents of the organization.

Brief backstory: Lucy was created in a lab in an undisclosed location. she was expirmented on multiple times, and was trained with over the top means to create a super soldier. she once tried to commit suiced so things would just end, but the expieriance was so unpleasent that she vowed to never do it agian. she and her friends escaped when lucy was fourteen and they were on the run for the next two years until they ended up where they are now. Chicago.

3/29/2009 #2
The Perfect Soldier

Name: Brother Maevon, 5th patriarch of the Order of the New Yevetikos (Maevon Surtoga)

Story Title (with link if possible):None yet... perhaps Inspiration shall spring forth?

Brief Summary: Maevon Surtoga began life on the ship "Far Strider". Born in space on a pirate ship that knows no dock, Maevon had no home port until the Order took him in. After being abandoned (so he believes) by his parents, The Order of the New Yevetikos took him into their fold and began his formal education at the age of 13. Hard pressed to catch up to the children around him, he pushed himself to his intellectual limits, eventually pulling ahead of many of his teachers. After his graduation, he decided to stay with the Order, finally donning the Yellow robe of an Initiate. Working his way up, Maevon has become one of the heads of the Church, and uses his influence to shape the world around him.

Physical Appearance: At the age of 40, he began to lose his hair, now at the age of 45, it is almost completely gone, leaving a tonsure like a white crown upon his head, Like the monks of Old Earth. His frame is thin, almost frail, but the power shining in his blue eyes belies a knowledge that few have obtained.

Basic Personality: Shows a kind, almost grandfatherly face to the world. However no man, not even one raised by the Order, is above the sins of this mortal coil.

Brief Backstory: Humanity has branched out after achieving interstellar flight. Slower than light travel still hinders most space jumps, so long journeys are one ways, however this has allowed the human population to blossom from it's cradle world into the cosmos, allowing each tendril of life and exploration to be largely uninfluenced by the others, even in relatively close vicinity. In the part of the galaxy that Maevon calls "home", science has progressed to the point where genetic manipulation is prevalent, to the point that an entire religion has sprung up from the reverence it's power over life elicits. The Order of the New Yevetikos is this religion, having a large power base in the political and economic structure of the worlds surrounding their central point, the planet Ambrigal. Genetic Manipulation is common place, however it still remains extremely difficult and unsafe to do after birth, leaving such procedures to wealthy risk takers and the like. Maevon is one of the few "Pure bloods" in the Order, owing to his odd birth circumstances. Pure bloods are those that have no genetic enhancements and while it's not overt, are subconsciously treated as second class citizens, pitied and passed over for promotions and other benefits.

(damn....now I kinda want to write his story... :-D)

7/6/2009 . Edited 7/6/2009 #3
Nikaty

Name: Balentine/Bale. Story Title: Balentine and Valentine. Brief Summary: Chimera Corp. are famous for their work on genetics; saving species on a daily basis. No one believed they were using people in their work, they had no reason to. So no one suspected a thing when two young Detectives with almost superhuman agility and intelligence arrive at a crime scene one day with connections to a victim who does not exist in any system. Physical Appearance: About 5"2, short fair hair and devious blue-grey eyes which always hide a secret. Pale skinned and had an eccentric way of dressing. Basic Personality: Manic depressive, childish, crafty, quite possibly evil and had abandonment issues. Brief Backstory: Balentine is different parts of several girl' DNA combined, and was raised simply to work for the government as a weapon. She has only ever had two friends, one of which being Valentine, and suffers anxiety attacks if left alone for two long. She was abused by the very scientist who created her, so is slighlty afraid of a lot of men. She wants to help people not because she was made to do so, or because she is kind, but because she wants people to remember her.

3/29/2010 #4
BenYearwood

Name: Martin Core

Story Title: Defiance (I'm still writing the story)

Brief Summary: The story follows the journey of Martin Core. He begins as a 2nd Generation Superhuman who has the ability to control a strnage energy; he works as a super powered bounty hunter and hunts down other suoerhumans for money. After he learns that the superhumans he has been tracking are being used for brutal and inhuman experimentation he breaks away from his employer and forms a resistance to fight against his evil former employer.

Physical Appearance: Martin is tall and muscular, though he is only eighteen; he has black hair and light blue eyes; he has a long scar from a sword wound from his waist up to his chin.

Basic Personality: Arrogant, but friendly; very loyal to those who hav earned his trust; he is very hard to get close to; he struggles to discern right from wrong.

Basic Backstory: He was given up for adoption when he was three by his parents becausethey didn't want a superpowered child as it would lead to many complications. He wasadopted by a superhuman bounty hunter and his wife and trained in the same business as his adoptive father. He and another adopted son, who is also a 2nd Generation Superhuman, were trained for fifteen years to use their powers to benefit only themselves. Martin brilliant in both armed and unarmed combat and in the use of his powers. He is beginning to wise up to the ulterior motives of his employer through years of experience and is learning secrets that should have remained hidden.

11/1/2010 #5
autumn-leaves192837465
Name: Melissa Hargrave Story Title (with link if possible): I have yet to pick a title for this story as the first chapter has yet to be fully writing and posted. I am doid thus so my character can be strong from the start. Brief Summary: Melissa has been readin books on government conspiracies since she could remember but not ones did she ever excpect that the Canadian government, her father included, would ever be one. But that ended when she met Dominick, on of the governments experiments. Physical Appearance: Melissa is 5 feet even she weighed around 110. She has brown hair with natural brown streaks. She has brown eyes and very pink lips. Basic Personality: Melissa is secretive, trustworthy, smart and adventurous. She loves action. Brief Backstory: Melissa lived a pretty basic life. She went to school, hung with friends and read her books she never really ever had any close friends. Her father was the head of parliment. Her mother never worked instead she spent all the money she could get.
12/7/2011 #6
autumn-leaves192837465
Name: Melissa Hargrave Story Title (with link if possible): I have yet to pick a title for this story as the first chapter has yet to be fully writing and posted. I am doid thus so my character can be strong from the start. Brief Summary: Melissa has been readin books on government conspiracies since she could remember but not ones did she ever excpect that the Canadian government, her father included, would ever be one. But that ended when she met Dominick, on of the governments experiments. Physical Appearance: Melissa is 5 feet even she weighed around 110. She has brown hair with natural brown streaks. She has brown eyes and very pink lips. Basic Personality: Melissa is secretive, trustworthy, smart and adventurous. She loves action. Brief Backstory: Melissa lived a pretty basic life. She went to school, hung with friends and read her books she never really ever had any close friends. Her father was the head of parliment. Her mother never worked instead she spent all the money she could get.
12/7/2011 #7
ladyunelovestreize
Name: Anei Tashita Story Title: Strike Pilots: Raiden Brief Summary: Anei Tashita is one of the Elites, the sister of General Mareo Tashita. Physical Appearance: Dark brown hair, brown eyes, about five feet three, slender Basic Personality: Quiet, determined, loyal. Brief Backstory: Anei had the typical rich-kid life under her uncle's care.
4/9/2012 #8
PhonixBird

Name- havent figured it out yet

gender- female

Appearance- unknown

Backstory- doesnt have one, making her mysterious

story-

a girl lives on the top floor of a victorian house with no windows. Since she cannot see the outside world, she believes that she is living in her own world, where she is ruler. Her subjects? Dolls. She makes them every day, they all have names and houses, and they all must obey her or thy are punished. She is insane, and thats all i have so far.

10/28/2012 #9
zombsigner

Name: Jo-Jo (Joseph Johnson)

Story Title: After Amnesia...Then What? (not posted yet)

Brief Summary: Jo-Jo is called Joseph in this story, where he grows to become a traitor to the elves that took care of him after his mysterious parents gave him away before suddenly disappearingand was forced to join a vastly growing conquering group called the Apostles. And in secret drags the entire armies of the Apostles through a casted spell ensuring to kill all he targeted. But he was the only one that survived and was pulled into a vaccum link between his world and a different dimension- oh yeah and he has amnesia due to the aftershock of the spell.

Physical appearance: Naturally white-gold hair and red tips, gray eyes,regular built, 6'5", slight tan,usually seen with a serious expression. When shape shifting to his high-level elven-like stage- Hieght 12', Dark gray skin, Albino hair with pink-red tips, big blind-green irises occupying most of the 2 eyes,thin but somewhat built, emotionless face. His beast like form- 13', Black-Green Skin, a slight slouch, scaley skin, Amber-slitted eyes, chiseled form, somewhat sharp nails, a lizard face, big ears and a human hand's length of horns swept back behind the ears, spiny-feathery black head crest scaling from the forehead to the midsection of the back of the neck. In animal form eyes are gray-amber irises lined with jungle green.

Basic Personality: Helpful, Smart-mouthed, Calm, Tempermental when it comes to friends, Calculative, Mysterious(obvioiusly), always there when needed, Feline kind of personality and methods,gives rare contact with any strangers(background-kind-of-guy)

Brief Back Story: His parents are of rare magical creatures (small-tribe-like population), human like in appearance and evolved in the sciences of healing and sorcery is his Mother taller than the regular man, and his father a demonic creature also evolved like his mother but much more gruesome and rely on elemental powers (shape-shifting),strength and speed; and most of all the 2 rare beings hated each other- not them but their species are in full hate of each other, (bit like romeo and juliet moment there but they all die off). The moment he was born it started an uproar between both beings and eventually killed themselves. Josephs parents planned ahead and sent Joseph off to the elves doorstep before being discovered by their own kinds and killed with the rest of their species. His life as an elf only lasted when he reached puberty and started to gain his inherited powers but on his own he had a unique capabilities: he could fly/float, he could use telepathy at will, and could use all the parts of his brain. Not when he turned 21 did he realize he was immortal.

11/3/2012 #10
zombsigner

Have you considered her to be lonely? Or in contrast needs more subjects. And by insane do you mean critical-insane, emo-insane,or talking-to-a-doll insane?

Yeah, she's more likely fragile, being trapped in her own world, where (if books are in her room) are her only way of knowing how the world works; and also gets her ideas on ruling a kingdom.

11/3/2012 #11
wowlijetgold

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12/11/2012 #12
currently inactive

Name: Roderick Seifred Hirsch

Story Title (with link if possible): The Split Earth (http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3104921/1/The-Split- Earth)

Brief Summary: A 32-year-old scientist. Was researching disease cures until he was arrested for illegal medical practice. Had and unofficially-adopted daughter named Violet.

Physical Appearance: Tall (about six feet), golden blonde hair and faint beard, blue eyes. Dresses up (dress shirt, tie, dress pants and shoes and a tweed coat.)

Basic Personality: Sympathetic and caring. Very sensitive and usually worried as well.

Brief Backstory: Not much is known about Roderick's pre-American life. His parents were both full German, and it is his native language. The scientist often makes proud references to his German heritage. He came to America when he was 31 years old to pursue a career in law (which he later dropped) and has adapted somewhat well. He keeps his journal in German in case anybody finds it.

4/7/2013 . Edited 4/7/2013 #13
GenerationBright

I'm not sure if I'm posting properly so I apologise in advanced.

Name: Karinth Etha

Story Title (with link if possible): She will eventually appear in this story-http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3143751/1/Use-your-i magination - though I'm not entirely sure how, yet.

Brief Summary: Beautiful and confident, she's not afraid to show off but often alienates herself from potential friends due to this.

Physical Appearance: Long black hair, bright blue eyes and pale-milky coloured skin. She's 5"6 and usually walks around in wedges because she likes feeling tall. She has slim but athletic body, she's not particularly well endowed though and she has large feet for a girl her size.

Basic Personality: Karinth is reserved around strangers and acquaintances, often seeming near stoic in nature but never shies away from a challenge of strength. Around her few friends she's very witty and outgoing. The general opinion of her though is that she's hot, talented, but too cocky. She's well spoken but very ill mannered (for the most part) and doesn't acknowledge her own limits.

Brief Backstory: In Karinth's respective world, she's a highschool student aspiring to become a political figure. She possesses great genetics gifts such as ideal beauty, a convenient build with which she has built masterful strength and a near-flawless singing voice. Because of this she has always assumed she was special in some way and that she will change the world because of these advantages. She refuses to accept that she has limits and has injured herself a lot in the past. Because of this she has evolved a very impressive pain threshold. Karinth has an unbelievable 8 sisters of whom she is the eldest.

8/13/2013 #14
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