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ranDUMM

THIS IS NOW A REVIEW EXCHANGE THREAD. You must review the previous person's work before asking for a review for one of your own. Please also state this at the beginning of the post, so I don't have to chase you up. If you haven't reviewed the previous person's work in a week, I will delete your review request.

You are allowed to request reviews for the same story twice, as long as you have reviewed another person's story. You may not use the same story twice to get reviews. For example:

THIS IS NOT ALLOWED:

Person 1: I reviewed chapter 3 of Example 1. Please review Example 2.

Person 2: I reviewed Example 2. Please review chapter 3 of Example 1.

Person 1: I reviewed chapter 3 of Example 1. Please review Example 2.

THIS IS ALLOWED:

Person 1: I reviewed chapter 3 of Example 1. Please review Example 2.

Person 2: I reviewed Example 2. Please review chapter 3 of Example 1.

Person 1: I already reviewed chapter 3 of Example 1, so I reviewed chapter 4 instead. Please review Example 2.

IF THERE ARE ANY PROBLEMS OR QUESTIONS, PLEASE DIRECT THEM TO THE SUGGESTIONS/PROBLEMS & QUESTIONS THREAD. This includes if someone has broken any of the above rules, or anything against the general rules of the forum.

THE FOLLOWING IS THE FORMAT FOR POSTING:

I have reviewed so-and-so's story. Requesting reviews for:

Prose/Poetry: State whether it is Prose or Poetry.

Title [with hyperlink]: Please state your title WITH a hyperlink.

Rating: Please state the rating.

Summary: This is where you would write a short summary of your piece.

8/1/2009 . Edited 8/1/2010 #1
ranDUMM

Prose/Poetry: Poetry

Title: Stapler

Rating: M

Summary: He hurt her, he drove her to the limits. So I give him a piece of the pain he gave her; by using the stapler.

8/1/2009 . Edited by Fleur-de-lis Evans, 7/25/2010 #2
Raingypsy

I reviewed Stapler by RanDUMM. I am requesting reviews for:

Prose/Poetry: Poetry

Ttitle: The Special Two

Rating: K+

Summary: A short poem about a love lost.

8/1/2009 . Edited by Fleur-de-lis Evans, 7/25/2010 #3
Fleur-de-lis Evans

I reviewed Stapler by RanDUMM and The Special Two by Raingypsy.

I request reviews for the following co-authored piece:

Prose/Poetry: Prose

Title: Whipsers of Rebellion

Rating: T

Summary: What is it like? Hiding from day to day, hiding your identity from those who seek to harm you. It's even hard to receive help from those who call themselves your friends...Chapter 6 is finally up!

8/3/2009 . Edited 7/25/2010 #4
YFIQ

I request reviews for:

Prose/Poetry: Prose

Title: Michael and the Black Eyed Kids

Rating: T

Summary: After learning the mysterious death of his friend, Michael decides to take matters into his own hands. Took place few years before "Finding Hoffa."

8/5/2009 . Edited by Fleur-de-lis Evans, 7/25/2010 #5
Raingypsy

I reviewed Micheal and the Black Eyed Kids by YFIQ.

I am requesting reviews for any of my stories.

8/7/2009 . Edited by Fleur-de-lis Evans, 7/25/2010 #6
Said Author

I reviewedMr. Rightby Raingypsy.

I am requesting reviews for:

PROSE/POETRY:Prose

Title:Rewrite

Rating:T

Summary:Rosa was ready to jump off the tower, to end her life. But out of nowhere a random stranger calls her. What happens when he saved her life once, he just keeps calling her to maybe...save her life again? [Or is there a catch?] But why can't she find out who he is? Why can't she find out whosheis? And why do pigeons keep coming up? No, really. I don't know either, I have this fixation on pigeons in this story... :\

~ NOTE: Said Author has removed this story, and is keeping the submission space up in case a repost of the story occurs.

8/7/2009 . Edited by Fleur-de-lis Evans, 6/9/2011 #7
Raingypsy

I just posted a new story. I'm not to sure about it. But would love some feedback. It's called, Surviving Saint Marys.

~ NOTE: This title no longer is on Raingypsy's account.

8/9/2009 . Edited by Fleur-de-lis Evans, 6/9/2011 #8
HighOnBrokenWings

I am requesting reviews for:

Prose/Poetry: Poetry.

Title: Live In The Day

Rating: K+ (I think)

Summary: Because his breath won't be coming back in the morning.

8/9/2009 . Edited by Fleur-de-lis Evans, 7/25/2010 #9
PoetryQueen

I reviewed Live in the Day by HighOnBrokenWings.

I am requesting someone to read:

Prose/Poetry: Neither

Title:My profile

Rating: N/A

Summary: I am trying to get in shape and am writing about my work out day by day. Today is day 7, and I write a paragraph a day. A reader would give me motivation to keep going.

8/12/2009 . Edited by Fleur-de-lis Evans, 7/25/2010 #10
ranDUMM

I read your profile RodeoGirl :) You won't lose weight in just one week. And if you do, you'll put it back on faster than you can say the East Australian Current. Just continue working out, maybe cut the junk food intake :) Keep doing it, I'm reading it!

8/12/2009 #11
Shepherd Nerd

I am requesting reviews for:

Prose/Poetry: Poetry

Title: lolly

Rating: K+

Summary: The musings and thought processes of a small boy as he licks a lolly pop.

8/12/2009 . Edited by Fleur-de-lis Evans, 7/25/2010 #12
PoetryQueen

Thank you so much for reading my profile! It is great knowing I have a reader. Remember I probably won't have the chance until Monday to write in again. I'm heading to my dad's soon. I am going to keep it up. Thank you!

Oh yeah, I forgot to say in my review on, "Bored," I don't know if you would or not, but please don't send a review reply or what ever it's called. My e-mail has been acting really weird and I don't want to get any e-mails for a while, until it starts acting right.

8/13/2009 #13
Raingypsy

I reviewed Lolly by ShepheardNerd.

I am requesting reviews for:

Prose/Poetry: N/A

Title: At First Sight

Rating: T

Summary: He notices her, she notices him. Is this the start of something real?

8/13/2009 . Edited by Fleur-de-lis Evans, 7/25/2010 #14
YFIQ

I am requesting reviews for:

Prose/Poetry: Prose

Title:Boston Bob

Rating: T

Summary: What if John Henry went Steinbrenner after Theo Epstein left?

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8/15/2009 . Edited by Fleur-de-lis Evans, 7/25/2010 #15
ranDUMM

NOTE: On behalf of sexymama235 review are requested for the following story, which does not have a link and hasn't been posted yet.

Prose/Poetry: Prose

Title: The Unknown Lover

Rating: N/A

Summary: N/A

sxymama235 would like a review for her story 'The Unknown Lover'.

[no link as of yet, please search for the story]

8/22/2009 . Edited by Fleur-de-lis Evans, 7/25/2010 #16
ranDUMM

I am requesting reviews for:

Prose/Poetry: prose

Title : Betrayal

Rating: T [

Summary: The last thing that I thought about before I hit the ground was the short note that I had left him, which I hoped would torment him for the rest of his life.. I was never good enough, and now, I never will be. T for implied suicide.

9/4/2009 . Edited by Fleur-de-lis Evans, 7/25/2010 #17
Raingypsy

I am requesting reviews for:

Prose/Poetry: Prose

Title: Case of the Ex

Rating: T

Summary: He was my first everything. First kiss, first love and the first guy to ever break my heart. I thought I'd never see him again. Apparently he had other ideas. Now he's back and he wants something I'm not willing to give.

Chapter Two is up! Hint Hint :D

9/4/2009 . Edited by Fleur-de-lis Evans, 7/25/2010 #18
Unique1952

I am requesting reviews for:

Title: Slave

Rating: M

Summary: Olivia has been kidnapped and is now a gift for 2 18 y/o guys. She has no hope of escaping and is constantly told to - "make the best of it" & despite living in their mansion, it's not that easy. She's not just a gift, she's their Slave. Please R&R.

9/15/2009 . Edited by Fleur-de-lis Evans, 7/25/2010 #19
KelaBelle

I am requesting reviews for:

Prose/Poetry: Prose

Title : The Nanny Sister's Club

Rating: T

Summary: Paige Darling gets a new job as a nanny, to the spoilt and naughty Armanda twins. One of the worlds richest families going. Too add to her misery the bad boy of there brother who they haven't saw in years finally decides to show up again.

9/21/2009 . Edited by Fleur-de-lis Evans, 7/25/2010 #20
ranDUMM

I am requesting reviews for:

Prose/Poetry: Poetry

Title: Race

Rating: K+

Summary: I trained and trained to win this race, but a cruel twist of fate prevented me from doing so.

9/26/2009 . Edited by Fleur-de-lis Evans, 7/25/2010 #21
Mandisaurus-rex

I am requesting reviews for:

Prose/Poetry: Poetry

Title: Tears

Rating: K

Summary: He is saying, "Here are my tears, your final goodbye."

9/27/2009 . Edited by Fleur-de-lis Evans, 7/25/2010 #22
Angsty Bohemian

I reviewed Race by ranDUMM and Tears by Mandasarus-Rex.

I am requesting reviews for:

Prose/Poetry: Poetry

Title: Protection

Rating: T

Summery: Flickers of moonlight in the storage room window. It was only us, and we were safe

9/27/2009 . Edited by Fleur-de-lis Evans, 7/25/2010 #23
Mandisaurus-rex

I reviewed a few stories posted above.

I am requesting reviews for:

Prose/Poetry:Semi- Prose

Title: Sunset Game

Rating: K+

Summary: A quiet beach. Warm sand. Soft waves. An inviting sunset. Or not...

9/27/2009 . Edited by Fleur-de-lis Evans, 7/25/2010 #24
HighOnBrokenWings

I am requesting reviews for:

Prose/Poetry: Poetry

Title: Ghost

Rating: K+

Summary: ...And are the sounds that you're hearing really all that real...?

9/27/2009 . Edited by Fleur-de-lis Evans, 7/25/2010 #25
Angsty Bohemian

I am requesting reviews for:

Prose or Poetry: Poetry

Title: Free As A Bird

Rating: K+

Summery: A hundred feet up, I'm flying.

9/28/2009 . Edited by Fleur-de-lis Evans, 7/25/2010 #26
Raingypsy

NOTE: This story is no longer available on FictionPress.

I am requesting reviews for:

Prose of Poetry: Prose

Title: The Art of Sacrifice

Rating: T

Summary: Ruby Hunter thinks she's hit the jackpot when she meets Steve McDonald. Steve's the perfect catch;money, charm and a promising future. Why then,after moving in with him does she feel she's made a terrible mistake? Is it his mood swings, his expectations or his constant reminders that she is his 'trophy girlfriend'? A chance meeting changes Ruby's world and she is forced to make a choice between her own happiness or the future of a loved one.

Reviews and Suggestions would be much appreciated!

10/3/2009 . Edited by Fleur-de-lis Evans, 7/25/2010 #27
Raingypsy

I am requesting reviews for:

Prose/Poetry: Prose

Title: Her Story, His Story

Rating: T

Summary: An innocent incident leads to a domestic dispute.

10/3/2009 . Edited by Fleur-de-lis Evans, 7/25/2010 #28
KelaBelle

I am requesting reviews for:

Prose/Poetry: Prose

Title: Barbie Gets Kidnapped

Rating: T

Summary: One minute I was standing on the curb waiting for my father, the next I was getting pulled into a car, with a whole load of scary people, WAIT there's a hot buff guy.

10/4/2009 . Edited by Fleur-de-lis Evans, 7/25/2010 #29
ranDUMM

I reviewed Her Story His Story by Raingypsy and Barbie Gets Kidnapped by KelleBelle.

I am requesting reviews for:

Prose/Poetry: Poetry

Title [with hyperlink]: One Day

Rating: K+

Summary: One day, maybe I will be considered my own person, maybe one day, I will be myself.

10/8/2009 . Edited by Fleur-de-lis Evans, 7/25/2010 #30
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