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Dr. Self Destruct

Oh no I can't do that beat b/c I can't stay serious. It's like a wa-wa to my ear and then I just ahhh no I can't. *is becoming delirious*

haha xD

This is what I listen to when I write sex scenes. I guess that's where all the dirty talk comes from. :/

10/13/2011 #2,731
lookingwest

Emo vampires make me think of Lestat or Louis from Anne Rice's stuff. I haven't really read much of her books, though.

holy. shit. Louis NEVER STOPPED WHINING dear GOD it was annoying.

Ugh. He was such a baby the whole time. Lestat was like: YOU NO LONGER HAVE A DICK, GET. OVER. IT.

Louis: waa waaa waaaa. I hate rats.

Seriously. The Vampire Lestat = sweet book Interview With a Vampire = lamest book on earth

10/13/2011 #2,732
Dr. Self Destruct

But anyways, I need to go to sleep. I'll stop distracting you. ;D

You can do eet, I believe in you!

10/13/2011 #2,733
lookingwest

okay!

bybyee! night!

10/13/2011 #2,734
Jealous Rage

Evening, Globe.

10/13/2011 #2,735
Dr. Self Destruct

yeah, I know, rats? wtf. and then he ate poodles too.

such a baddie.

Legacy of Kain has some really cool vampires, though they're more fantasy based than real-life based. But still, their hierarchy is really cool, not like anything I've ever seen before. Puts a neat fantastical twist on vampires, and it gave them some interesting weaknesses. Plus Kain is a fucking badass mofo who kills EVERYONE.

Anyways! nighty night. c:

10/13/2011 #2,736
lookingwest

hey don!

10/13/2011 #2,737
Jealous Rage

Hey, Emily. How's it going?

10/13/2011 #2,738
sophiesix

well, don't know that i can help. Nora and Alexei were not exactly smooth. Katya jumps Nikolai once, but he totally freaked out, so in a way it was almost like she raped him. But not.

is char or jude going to lead things or is it just sort of going to happen, or are you going to have a 'pusher', something that pushes them into it: a cold night, falling into teh river, a freak out... XD?

10/13/2011 #2,739
lookingwest

is char or jude going to lead things or is it just sort of going to happen, or are you going to have a 'pusher', something that pushes them into it: a cold night, falling into teh river, a freak out... XD?

kind of in between. i've been building tension for the past like, seriously, four chapters, maybe. and they haven't had a chance to be really alone yet.

except for now.

XD

so i guess char's going to uh, try to seduce him or something(?) that's what's going on right now. i don't really think she needs to, though. she's more so convincing him it's a good idea in a very provocative fashion, XD he's being skeptical, which i do'nt really think is fitting his character right now--i think he's just moreso me. since i'm in his pov. i'm being skeptical about writing it, XDD

10/13/2011 . Edited 10/13/2011 #2,740
sophiesix

mm, yes, maybe jude freaks out over something.. losing his magic or something and Char has to physically restrain him from havng a fit and then.... um.... pff... they chat some... and she kisses his ear or something.. gah i dunno XD

10/13/2011 #2,741
lookingwest

also i had never planned for whose POV this would fall under.

i mean obviously not kit, ha!

but i didn't plan it out for either of them. so...we'll see if this works...haha

10/13/2011 #2,742
lookingwest

mm, yes, maybe jude freaks out over something.. losing his magic or something and Char has to physically restrain him from havng a fit and then.... um.... pff... they chat some... and she kisses his ear or something.. gah i dunno XD

XD i'm so happy that i'm getting help for this seriously i am at a loss

but no that's a good idea, i've read up on sex scene writing and i guess to do it tastefully it has to kind of advance the plot or characters or something, i mean...so...putting in something importnat might be good

10/13/2011 #2,743
sophiesix

-i think he's just moreso me. since i'm in his pov. i'm being skeptical about writing it, XDD

haha so true. jude would be gagging for it, but nervous too. not wanting to push char too far or too fast, not really sure if seh likes him , all that... but girls have to take lead with witches, don't they? does Char know? did kit tell her, lol?

hmm, i don't see char being heaps provocative unless she's drunk or hit on teh head or drugged up or something... dunno...

10/13/2011 #2,744
sophiesix

it advances the plot because you've been building up to it like forever ;) maybe jude (or his magic?) tells char about her first concetr, and Char suddebly realises how long he's liked her for, and jumps him?

10/13/2011 #2,745
lookingwest

*FACEPALM*

Ephraim is just like.

Hanging out in a tree.

WATCHING THEM.

GET OUT OF THIS SCENE EPHRAIM OMG. U R SUCH A CREEPER.

10/14/2011 #2,746
lookingwest

haha so true. jude would be gagging for it, but nervous too. not wanting to push char too far or too fast, not really sure if seh likes him , all that... but girls have to take lead with witches, don't they? does Char know? did kit tell her, lol?

Yep, I took care of that in a previous chapter, so she does know to an extent. Which is good. haha

10/14/2011 #2,747
lookingwest

tells char about her first concetr, and Char suddebly realises how long he's liked her for, and jumps him?

You just gave me a BRILLIANT idea.

8D

10/14/2011 #2,748
lookingwest

This just got worse.

Now Ephraim is shouting directions from the side lines.

XDDDD

10/14/2011 #2,749
lookingwest

"NO. NO THAT'S NOT WHERE YOU PUT THAT, DEAREST. OMFG. DO I NEED TO GET DOWN THERE AND DO IT MYSELF?!"

JK.

but for real I need to throw a shoe at him right now.

10/14/2011 #2,750
lookingwest

that was almost a virgin.

10/14/2011 #2,751
lookingwest

well.

well well well.

it's 3AM and I'm still up with this, lols.

10/14/2011 #2,752
lookingwest

i haven't used the word dick once.

i'm not sure if i can. and it's not a principal thing, it's just that i really don't know if it actually fits the tone. but how would it not fit the tone, you ask? i have no idea. i'm going to have to say it some time, geesh.

10/14/2011 #2,753
lookingwest

op' okay i have one naughty word so far but it isn't dick, that's funny.

guess i am a feminist

LOLS

oh my god i need to sleep.

10/14/2011 #2,754
Jealous Rage

I don't think I used 'dick' in the first non-pornographic sex scene I wrote either.

10/14/2011 #2,755
lookingwest

yeah, this is...extremely clean.

but it's really weird because it's also not clean? like they're not just having plain old sex. they're kind of encompassing some other elements, XD

so it's kind of bordering a line here.

like i feel like my younger readers are going to think this is way crazy and WAY in depth, I've written...785 words so far. On this scene alone. XD But then my older audience is going be like: PFFFFT. That was nothing. XD

10/14/2011 #2,756
Jealous Rage

Yeah, it's a balancing act. But the thing is, it'll be like that no matter how clean or dirty you make it haha. There are always gonna be readers who think you went too far, some who think you nailed it, and others who think you didn't go nearly indepth enough. Just gotta go 'til it feels right haha.

Like I'm reading the sex scene I mentioned and it's fucking terrible haha. It was the first one I'd written after I stopped writing porn, and I can clearly see where I held back way too much just to try and have it not come out like porn haha. If I'd written this for something that people were actually reading, they would have laughed their asses off haha.

10/14/2011 #2,757
lookingwest

Like I'm reading the sex scene I mentioned and it's fucking terrible haha. It was the first one I'd written after I stopped writing porn, and I can clearly see where I held back way too much just to try and have it not come out like porn haha. If I'd written this for something that people were actually reading, they would have laughed their asses off haha.

XD but, ahem, oh no :[

I've only ever written one other sex scene. It was god awful, and it was before I'd even had sex. So it was more like "guess-work". Not that people who haven't had sex can't write sex scenes, I definitely think they can. I'm just not one of those people. Clearly. Looking at that scene that I wrote, XD.

Otherwise I always did a fade to black or just didn't do it at all.

BUT IT IZ GETTIN DONE NAOHW.

10/14/2011 #2,758
lookingwest

I love magic and vampires.

These things are going together so well for me.

Like. Wow. After the idea Sophie gave me--I'm really liking this 8D

10/14/2011 #2,759
Jealous Rage

Otherwise I always did a fade to black or just didn't do it at all.

I've done the fade to black before as well. That's what I've always done in stories that I actually posted. I had them in both stories I had posted on FP way back when. It was just easier than doing the sex scene haha. I'd probably write the scenes now though. Back then, I actually cared about updating regularly, and since it tended to take me awhile to decide whether or not the sex scene was good or not, I'd just skip it. Now I don't give a shit haha. We'll see how it goes in South of Heaven.

I love magic and vampires.

Yeah, those are cool things haha.

10/14/2011 #2,760
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