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lookingwest

IT IS COMPLETE.

8D

Now to finish the chapter, yaaay.

10/14/2011 #2,761
lookingwest

oh dear lord now it's like cute-o-rama 1000% over here and it's now 5AM.

10/14/2011 #2,762
Jealous Rage

Over here, I'm watching Criminal Minds and people are being burned alive.

10/14/2011 #2,763
lookingwest

OH. MY. GOD.

Okay.

So I FINALLY FINISHED THE CHAPTER T_T

I have not written this much on this story in forever, tis' like old times.

but no.

I must wait to post this. I can't update right after I updated.

MUST. HAVE. CONTROL.

But I am REALLY excited and happy about the result of this. It is way better than I expected.

The beginning sucks, so I think I need to work on that--but the end. Holy shit. Favorite thing I have written in a LONG TIME.

sorry for rant. Just really excited.

Okay. It's now past 5AM. They've started playing morning cartoons on the telly.

But I'm going to read through this chapter and then finally go to bed, XD

So excited! 8D

10/14/2011 #2,764
S.R. Revel

I miss the days, when now, I'd be heading to bed.

I am the opposite, I am waking up.

Damn.

10/14/2011 #2,765
A. Gray

Blah 4 1/2" Pages of backlog. I must admit I gave up reading that.

I am doing the crochet because it is getting on winter her, and with the eating less I get hungry. In the winter I get bored, and haven't been able to sit at my comp to play 6 hrs of wow, now LoTRO. So I get bored and wat to eat so I started making jelwrey again and crocheting to keep my hands busy. Makes me not snack when i can't stand to be at my comp anymore. Plus we are going to buy a house and the blankets will come in handy! Black and burgandy all the way.

Morning globe.

10/14/2011 #2,766
Dr. Self Destruct

i haven't used the word dick once.

i'm not sure if i can. and it's not a principal thing, it's just that i really don't know if it actually fits the tone. but how would it not fit the tone, you ask? i have no idea. i'm going to have to say it some time, geesh.

In my latest one I think I used it twice, but once was her calling him a dick because he was teasing her. Oh, and then i used cock twice. Not sure which is more offensive, but that's what happens when your main character is a crude pervert. :S

But I guess people should be used to seeing the words dick and cock by now. xD

Yeah, it's a balancing act. But the thing is, it'll be like that no matter how clean or dirty you make it haha. There are always gonna be readers who think you went too far, some who think you nailed it, and others who think you didn't go nearly indepth enough. Just gotta go 'til it feels right haha.

^ this. remember though, it's rated M. I know you probably did that more for language and violence or whatever... but meh. Sex is everywhere, put on some sunglasses and tell them to 'deal with it' if they don't like it. Who cares about kids anyways? x) All that should matter is if you enjoyed writing it and reading it.

The beginning sucks, so I think I need to work on that--but the end. Holy shit. Favorite thing I have written in a LONG TIME.

Seeeee. :D

Not gonna lie. I'll probably skip to the chapter when you post it and read it without having read the others. I am very curious and guilty.

10/14/2011 #2,767
Dr. Self Destruct

Morning, AJ!

Ah shit. I have a guy coming over later, I need to clean EVERYTHING.

I hope he doesn't think I'm a whack job when he sees my room. Fuck...

Yeah, he's definitely going to think I'm a whack job, you know, considering I collect pointy-things and have four swords on display hanging on my walls.

Oh lawdy.

10/14/2011 #2,768
Dr. Self Destruct

I don't think I used 'dick' in the first non-pornographic sex scene I wrote either.

I want to read Don's porn.

10/14/2011 #2,769
Dr. Self Destruct

You know, now that I'm thinking about it, after only one scene in TAK (which is really a day dream/fantasy), I don't use missionary. Ever. They're usually pushed up against something. o.o

He likes to hold them from behind. Much more personal that way. xD

Is this really the shit I think about when I just wake up? If I was a dude, I would totally have morning wood like all the time I bet. -_-'

10/14/2011 #2,770
Dr. Self Destruct

Ooooh boy. I get to post one of my fav TAK chapters today. :D

Ugh, it's a long one. :S 6,300 words. I wonder if I should cut it in half... but I hate doing that because I can never find the perfect spot to do so. And then they have to wait another week to read the second half.

But if I do, it'd be a mean cliffhanger, because there's obviously the promise of some hoochy-coochy just around the corner.

Halp.

Maybe I'll cut it in half and post both parts the same day.

10/14/2011 #2,771
A. Gray

Morning! I just signed up for the trick or treat.

My husband lets me buy swords. to date I have a katana set, a glaive, like 6 daggers, a ninja sword... I forgeting something I know it. pointing things are awesome.

10/14/2011 #2,772
A. Gray

if it were my fave I would cut and post same day.

10/14/2011 #2,773
A. Gray

fml i just got a bug bit on the back of my hand and it itches like mad!

10/14/2011 #2,774
Dr. Self Destruct

My husband lets me buy swords. to date I have a katana set, a glaive, like 6 daggers, a ninja sword... I forgeting something I know it. pointing things are awesome.

AJ, I think you are my soul mate. 8D

Yeah, I think I found a good spot about halfway through where I can cut it. Think I'll post the first half this morning, then the second half a few hours later.

Need to do one last read-through first.

10/14/2011 #2,775
Dr. Self Destruct

fml i just got a bug bit on the back of my hand and it itches like mad!

The worst is when you get them between your fingers or toes. Dx

Like paper-cuts.

10/14/2011 #2,776
A. Gray

Oh yes! I hate that but as I am typing its all red and tempting me to scratch it. I WON'T GIVE INTO YOU! MOOAHAHAHAHA!

Yesterday I got all my work done, and now I have nothing but filling- created by the devil I know it- to do. I think I moght try to work on my continuation of Clan. I also need to look for a beta too so Don doesn't have to warry about it... Crap.

10/14/2011 #2,777
A. Gray

OMG YES! I just had a break through! Wow now I'm gonna have lesbian vampires... but it works out with the story line so well... crap.

10/14/2011 #2,778
berley

I skipped class to finish a chapter of Young Lust, and now FP is being lame and not letting me post it. Grr.

10/14/2011 #2,779
Dr. Self Destruct

That's weird. I just uploaded a few hours ago... maybe try again in a few minutes.

10/14/2011 #2,780
berley

Yeah, it could just be my internet.

So I got four stories that I have do edit and then we do a workshop on Monday for my creative non fiction class, and out of the four stories I got only one of them was actually good. It was really good, but man the other three just...sucked. haha. I need to try and work on my critiquing skills so my classmates don't hate me by the end of it.

10/14/2011 #2,781
Dr. Self Destruct

Ugh, that would suck for me. Critiquing people over the computer is one thing, but having to do it to their face? I'd be afraid it'd start and argument, and I'm always so terrible when it comes to arguing.

10/14/2011 #2,782
berley

Luckily for my class, the writer who is being workshopped isn't allowed to speak, so no arguments there. They just sit and watch the rest of the group talk about their story. It's just that one story is about the writer's sister, and it's kind of personal. I just don't want her thinking I'm personally attacking her, just the story needs a lot of work.

10/14/2011 #2,783
lookingwest

heyyyyy, ahahaha, I just woke up.

at like 2:30PM.

YAAAY College.

10/14/2011 #2,784
lookingwest

Not gonna lie. I'll probably skip to the chapter when you post it and read it without having read the others. I am very curious and guilty.

I permit this skipping of chapters, XD

I really like it! As in--this also advanced the plot. Like in a major way that I wasn't expecting, which shall be fun 8D

10/14/2011 #2,785
Dr. Self Destruct

Right now I'm writing a really damp sappy scene. I forgot how bad I am at these. -_-'

Trying to get into the argument where Kristoph tells Mina he killed Sarah, but it's proving difficult. :S

10/14/2011 #2,786
Dr. Self Destruct

He's too busy acting like a bitch. Talking about his feelings.

Stop lying, Kristoph. We all know you don't have feelings.

10/14/2011 . Edited 10/14/2011 #2,787
Dr. Self Destruct

I really like it! As in--this also advanced the plot. Like in a major way that I wasn't expecting, which shall be fun 8D

So excite! I hope you post it soon. :3

10/14/2011 #2,788
berley

Oh Kristoph.

I just posted a new chapter of Young Lust, finally got it working. Writing in Brad's POV was a lot harder than I thought it was going to be.

Shit has siriusly hit the fan now.

10/14/2011 #2,789
Dr. Self Destruct

Shit has siriusly hit the fan now.

Ruh-roh. :o

That reminds me, I still have a couple more chapters of Young Lust. I have this bad habit of procrastinating when I get near the end of stories, because I don't wanna finish it and have to wait for more stuff. I'm stupid. :(

10/14/2011 #2,790
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