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xenolith

XDDDDD

well done!

editing is... difficult lol.

11/16/2011 #2,971
Dragon made me do it

yeah, I find proofreading easy, but when it comes to making difficult decisions about more substantial changes I get too clingy about every last word and don't want to let go. I'm sure Freud has a word for it. It could still use a bit more of those big scary changes, but that is for another time.

11/16/2011 #2,972
xenolith

Freud usually has a word for everything. And yeah, save the big changes for later haha.

11/16/2011 #2,973
Dragon made me do it

ooh, past the 20,000 word mark too, granted it's not NaNo speed, but it is a great deal faster than my first novel.

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xenolith

that's great :)

11/16/2011 #2,975
A. Gray

morning globe.

I just realized I've never began reading Dragon's novel. I'ma bad monkey!

11/17/2011 #2,976
A. Gray

grrrr. everytime I get going on my nano with good steam I get interupted! still I got 1 chapter written today.

11/17/2011 #2,977
S.R. Revel

I hate when that happens! People stop interupting AJ!

11/17/2011 #2,978
A. Gray

Yeah! Or she'll sick Jabba and Darth on you!

11/17/2011 #2,979
A. Gray

Grah. Life is just so mean sometimes!

11/17/2011 #2,980
lookingwest

it is

11/17/2011 #2,981
A. Gray

And not fair either.

I am sooooooo sexually frustrated, and now I'm channeling it into my nano and so it is too! It's like OMG just have the fucking threesome already!

11/17/2011 #2,982
A. Gray

Haha, everytime they ef sits on Nicole i'm gonna bump it with this sexually frustrated nano just to be evil.

MOOOAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

11/17/2011 #2,983
A. Gray

it's so much better to moohaha evil laugh if there is someone to read-hear it...

11/17/2011 #2,984
A. Gray

I may still be 13k off where I am supposed to be today, but I hit 15k in nano.

11/17/2011 #2,985
S.R. Revel

Wow! Go go GO!

I think I'm close to where you are with what I'm currently working on

last couple days I have 1st draft of chapters 11-14

11/17/2011 #2,986
A. Gray

.. but only to 7 is posted... wtf?

11/17/2011 #2,987
Dragon made me do it

morning globe.

I just realized I've never began reading Dragon's novel. I'ma bad monkey!

haha, you're not a bad monkey unless I had read yours, even then you wouldn't be :)

11/17/2011 #2,988
A. Gray

It just caught me off guard. I've read your WCC entries, and some thing else, but I never actually started reading your novel. I will one of these days really.

I can't believe I've written 5k today. No wonder my wrist is protesting!

11/17/2011 #2,989
S.R. Revel

No worries, I have like a bajillion things to read and review

I'm not posting things that have not been seem by my gramma nazi beta... my grammar suck if you hadn't noticed

11/17/2011 #2,990
S.R. Revel

I'm like Dragon, I have to reread everything I write because sometimes I write like I talk, with a slurr and lots of bad grammar

11/17/2011 #2,991
Dragon made me do it

I'm like Dragon, I have to reread everything I write because sometimes I write like I talk, with a slurr and lots of bad grammar

hehe. argh! it got grumpy with me this morning, tried to reinstall the driver software, then claimed that the device which prompted it to install the software wasn't actually plugged in, then I had to unplug and re-plug-in, by which time the software had diverted to the laptop speakers and I had to retrain it using the accuracy Wizard. trying to think what I might have said to piss it off to put it in this mood :P

11/17/2011 #2,992
A. Gray

as you've read what I've posted of my nano you can see how bad i am off the bat. I usually review my stuff like 3 - 9 times before i'll post it. That is usually like 6 moths or more.

11/17/2011 #2,993
Dr. Self Destruct

Haha, everytime they ef sits on Nicole i'm gonna bump it with this sexually frustrated nano just to be evil.

MOOOAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

ehehehehehehe

Evening Globe!

I feel like dookie. :(

11/17/2011 #2,994
Dragon made me do it

just had a glance at it, looks interesting, it is missing the odd comma, but it's not seriously incomprehensible or anything :-)

11/17/2011 #2,995
Dragon made me do it

...your call is important to us.... do do do do do da da doooooo.....

11/17/2011 #2,996
Dr. Self Destruct

Hmm... I don't think this reviewer for Vore understands we're not supposed to feel sympathy for the person she's killing. o.O

11/17/2011 #2,997
Dragon made me do it

lol!

oh I'm glad you're up next because I got halfway through an easy fix review of Kristoph before getting distracted and then someone else did it and I thought I'd hold onto it for next time

11/17/2011 #2,998
Dr. Self Destruct

oh I'm glad you're up next because I got halfway through an easy fix review of Kristoph before getting distracted and then someone else did it and I thought I'd hold onto it for next time

hehe, I do that sometimes too. ^-^

I admit though, you could have used more metaphors and such while writing. This isn't a serious issue, but I did feel there could have been more there. Just a little bit.

What does this even mean? D:

Pretty sure I compared every body part I could to some type of food.

11/17/2011 #2,999
Dr. Self Destruct

omigosh

11/17/2011 #3,000
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