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Aerith Rei

I have many poems on fictionpress and many more that I plan to publish. Not all of them are for the faint of heart, especially those I am writing now. My style varies from rhyming to free verse, and my topics are usually serious and sometimes controversial. I understand that for some people they may hit home. I will be publishing many more as soon as possible, and these poems are the ones I am more or less referring to. I am willing to review yours if you review mine! Thank you!

7/20/2012 #1

I reviewed your poem,Blackberry.

Could you please review, Murderer's Ballad.

6/17/2014 #2

So I accidentally posted a thread instead of just reading how to do this whole review process, I'm sorry! I can't figure how to delete it. Don't shun me. :(

I'm new to writing poetry, I am more of a painter. Anyway, I had an itch to write and wanted to give it a try. Can I get some two cents on this poem?

Main question to be answered: What do you feel the poem is about? (Am I getting the point across but still remaining an interesting distance from the point?)



Also, I reviewed Windswept Lies

7/1/2014 . Edited 7/1/2014 #3
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