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malevolentAlchemist

Yes, I know that there are plenty of people on Fiction Press, and frankly, I wouldn't blame you if you never read even five percent of the stories here, because there are quite a few. I have two stories currently(more are to soon come), and I would like reviews, please. I'll leave a link.

If you leave a review worth reading(something that isn't just "That was horrible"), something that will help me improve in my writing, then I'll return the favor and read and review any stories you may have. Here's the links:

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2663157/1/Double_Play

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2668518/1/Striker

And by the way, one's named "Double Play", and is a sports related Young Adult story. And here's the short, yet still not perfrect, summary:

Seth Martin is a star at baseball, his one true sport, and his team school team has a chance at going to State. There's also Kira Weston, his much more popular friend. When he starts hanging with her, he realizes that she's not as perfect as he thought.

The other is called "Striker", and is in the same category of the other. And here's that short, yet again not perfect summary for you:

Jarrod is a phenomenal soccer player. Unfortunately, no one else in town is, and his team is winless, until another boy moves next door that can play, possibly as good if not better than Jarrod. Is this the kid his team needs to excel?

4/23/2009 . Edited 5/3/2009 #1
Rioichi

I need Feedback on Insomnia: Essence. If you ask later, I'm updating soon!

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2610922/1/Insomnia_Essence

I'll gladly R&R!!

5/9/2009 #2
Rioichi

I need Feedback on Insomnia: Essence. If you ask later, I'm updating soon!

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2610922/1/Insomnia_Essence

I'll gladly R&R!!

5/9/2009 #3
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