I just don;t get it, and i am starting to get a little desperate. I need feedback. I realise that i am not the greatest author that ever lived. In fact i accept that. No i embrace it, and therefore crave criticism. Anyone willing to criticise my work please do so.
Controlling Anger and Keeping Pace » His life is in pieces, and he's trying to keep a grip on his temper; She's starting to get angry about the lack of peace in her life... yeah, it's not the best time to put them together for a 'project'. The balance is about to tip.Romance - Fiction Rated: T - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 11 - Words: 19,988 - Reviews: 7 - Updated: 5-30-09 - Published: 6-17-086/3/2009 #1
I will more than gladly pass some reviews onto your story in exchange for some for my story: Insomnia: Essence. I think mine is more than enough to be a worldwide bestseller and maybe even a motion picture. There are six books in the series and I think the characters and emotions and what they're going through would really hit home with readers. I mean, the first chapter isn't all that good, but still. Here you go.
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