![]() ![]() Hey, I am looking for some feedback on my story BreadLa (weird title, haha I know). So I was wondering, if maybe you would read and review it, and then I would definitely return the favor! I know its not the best story in the world, which is why I want feedback. Please not flames! :D Please and Thankyou! http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2703027/1/BreadLa ~Brooke 7/30/2009 #1 |
![]() ![]() I was happy to read your story and review! I hope that you keep up the writing and post another chapter soon :) 8/5/2009 #2 |
![]() ![]() I would like it if you would read my story and give me some feedback on my characters. And if everything is clear and easy to read 8/7/2009 #3 |
![]() ![]() I would love to check out anyone's story! Send me a link and i'll read and review. As for me, I'd love some reviews for my reposted story, "Essence". It's a vampire/romance/horror story, and I think it's really good. I just have to finish and post more chapters. 8/11/2009 #4 |
![]() ![]() http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2706726/1/Drag_me_to_Hell I would like lots of reviews - really tell me what you think!! I want to know what I can do better and what you think of my characters! 8/11/2009 #5 |
![]() ![]() Alright, I read and reviewed all of your stories :) Thankyou for reviewing mine! 8/13/2009 #6 |
![]() ![]() I'll review your story :D 8/20/2009 #7 |
![]() ![]() and i'll review yours :) 8/20/2009 #8 |
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