So, hi there people of FictionPress. I've been a member for awhile and had a few stories up but they were removed as I'm currently rewriting them. I recently published a new story and I feel I need a little improvement since I'm not what you call an "awesome writer". Some reviews would truly help and would be really appreciated. Here it is:
I would, in return, read and review your stories too. Thanks!8/7/2009 #1
Hey, I commented. :)
I really rather liked it as well. You asked for an honest review so i was all prepared to say "OMG you're terrible" and have to feel guilty, but I didn't need to!
I've only got one story up, but I'd be grateful if you could return the favour.
Oh, and i subscribed to it. ;)8/9/2009 #2
Hi this is my story I just started and I would love it if you wanted to give me an honest review of my story! Ill review yours back!! Thank you so much!8/11/2009 #3
Sure, i'll review for you ;)9/2/2009 #4
I'll review you, if you'll do the same for me? yeah? :)
P.S here's the link to it if you want http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2725540/1/Jordan_Just_For_A_Summer
thanks :)10/5/2009 #5
Okk, so i'm asking for some reviews on my story 'The Royal Legend" .... i've decided to get it up and running again and i wanted some feedback ... I'd be happy to return the favor if that's what you want, just drop me a line! :) It would be greatly appriciated! Thanks in advance!
~Chu-Chi Bear10/10/2009 #6
|Forum Moderators: Happinessliveselsewere|
|Membership Length: 2+ years 1 year 6+ months 1 month 2+ weeks new member|