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It's Disneyland. It's Romance/Adventure. It needs your reviews. I don't know if I would entirely classify it as a Fanfiction, so I've posted it here, depending on how it develops. Please at least take the time to skim through the first short chapter and tell me what you think. Obviously flames are not welcome, but constructive criticism might help. The basis of my story: Disneyland is supposed to be the Happiest Place on Earth. But I'm sure everyone can agree that it's impossible for such a thing to happen. But what if things were different when everyone left? What if said theme park held a few secrets that even park managers didn't realize were there? What if things got truly 'magical' when everyone turned the lights off and went home for the day? Rated T. http://www.fictionpress.com/secure/story/story_preview.php?storyid=2734752&chapter=1 And if this will help you make up your mind: read and review my first chapter, and I'll read and review yours.

10/25/2009 . Edited 10/27/2009 #1
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