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Hello fellow fans of Yuri! Originally I posted this question on the 'Slashfiction' Forum. I had no idea, I thought it was just both Yuri and Yaoi.

Anyway, I need some critiquing on my Yuri/Shoujo Ai story. Also just if you're interested in these types of stories in general, but most of all I want someone to give me feedback and tell me about the story aspects or my writing style. Grammar mistakes if there is any? I need the critique on my work, to see where I might need to improve, I can never get enough.

Even if you're not a great critic or not even a critic at all, just tell me what you think of my story or if you like it.


Also if you want, you can discuss your opinions or just the story in general here if you want a lengthier conversation and you want to ask questions to me directly.

7/17/2011 #1
Knightmare Elite

I'll read it within the week and give you some opinions. :)

7/24/2011 #2
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