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Hello everyone! I'm sorry to bug you like this, but I am taking a Writing Fiction class at school. I happened to not be there the day we did peer editing on our stories, and my teacher is collecting revised drafts today. Therefore... would anyone like to help me out by critiquing my story? It would be awesome, and I would totally return the favor! :) Anyway, here is the link:

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2793091/1/The_Organ_Donor

4/5/2010 #1
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