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I'm looking for a few thoughtful/helpful comments on my short story "Going to See Stacy" found here:


It's about a high school boy going to see his favorite girl, and there's a bit of a twist (if you want to call it that).

I'm more than willing to comment on your work in exchange. At the same time, I am looking for thoughtful comments.

Thank You.

5/4/2010 #1
Thetis of White Isle

Reviewed Going to See Stacy. Keep writing, we need more good writers! Um, you can read review Ordinary Girl, the new story I'm working on, if you would like. Thanks!

6/19/2010 #2
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