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Hi. I wrote a story for this site a year back, called codename:zack "The Smiling Skulls" It's got a few reviews in the past, but lately i've been making a lot of alterations. I've touched up the dialogue, and changed it from a script format into a novel format. (I'm not finished converting it yet, in Chapter Eight, it reverts back to script format)


A brief summary of the plot: After a terrorist attack occurs on US soil, which turns the entire state of California into smog-covered ruins, a shady Government Agency known as 'The Facility' decides to build a weapon to find the terrorist organization responsible for the attack. Zack is created. Resembling a small child, Zack only wants the normal life any other kid has, and flees his creators, going on a journey that takes him to New York City where he is enrolled in Elementary School, befriends a weird goth girl, and finds himself in the middle of a gangwar, all while trying to dodge his creators, who are hunting him down.

The story is based on a cartoon concept i've had in my head for almost a decade now. For more information on it, you can visit my website: (hope you don't mind a few pop-ups)

10/15/2010 #1
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