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alterego1092

Good evening ladies and gentlemen.

I'm really a newbie at writing. I have been writing for two years but I never really had any real criticism or anybody read my stuff. And when someone did read my stuff, only one or two would give a point of advice. So I would like to ask anyone out there to read and review my piece. I don't necessarily want a critique (as in incredibly harsh), but just some advice on what I need to fix.

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2861308/1/Not_Anymore

Not Anymore is a short story I wrote for Senior English. It is really a coming of age story. The plot is a bit bumpy, but I tried to polish it up as nice as I can.

Thank you.

11/3/2010 #1
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