Took me a few months to finally write up the last 2 parts, but I think I nailed it on the head more or less where I wanted it. It's not perfect by any means IMO. But I'd still like to know what others think of it. And as to minimize confusion, I've thought up a lot of back story into this setting, so you might see things that make you want to know more and that's exactly why they're there. They are not incomplete thoughts or missing fragments of story. I may expand on the setting later.
Thanks! And if you'd like me to review your story as well, just post it in here. :)11/24/2010 #1
Well, why not R&R when someone's asking so nicely?
Sure, I left a review. :) Hope it doesn't come off as harsh, I don't mean it to be. Just being honest. Your story definitely does seem interesting, just don't let yourself get so caught up in the action you forget about everything else.
Oh-ho, how I did miss reviewing. I haven't done this in ages. :D1/2/2011 #2
Thank you so much! And it didn't come off harsh. Just honest. That's what I'm looking for.1/4/2011 #3
Not a problem at all. If you feel like like dropping a line along my fics as well, please do, but no pressure. Glad I could help.1/4/2011 #4
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