Hello I am new to fictionpress and I just posted my first story. It's called Beyond Seclusion and I was wondering if someone could review it and I will return the favor gladly and review your stories also, just tell me which one's you want me to or all your stories even...I am always looking for new stuff to read =)11/30/2010 #1
Commented. I gave a lot of criticism. Don't get overwhelmed. It's just for improvement, not because I dislike it.
If you're a new writer I suggest you read "On Writing" by Stephen King. It will improve your writing more than you can possibly imagine and teach you the art of editing.
If, after reading my comment, you still want to read my work I'm looking for people to read anything that I published recently, though if you really want to read my older stuff (it's pretty bad) you're obviously welcome to.12/4/2010 . Edited 12/4/2010 #2
Read and Reviewed :)
Please check out my stories :)1/10/2011 #3
Just found this and reviewed it. Can anyone look at mine please? Honour of the Heart (the other is an older version of the same story).5/17/2011 #4
Just found this and reviewed it. Can anyone look at mine please? Honour of the Heart (the other is an older version of the same story).5/17/2011 #5
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