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AquariusGirl230191

Hey everyone :)

I have had a few reviews on my short story http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2952890/1/No_Escape from other fiction press users but I decided to redraft it and I am going to continue on with it (currently in process of writing chapter two) so I figured I would post here and ask for some reviews on the now re-drafted and improved version. Any comments / advice are appreciated :) Please just take a look and then tell me what you think :D

I review back, just say the word and I'll do my best to get back to you with a return-review :)

Thanks everyone :)

10/21/2011 . Edited 10/21/2011 #1
BrokenRoad

Read and reviewed your story! Good work so far!

11/7/2011 #2
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