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Hi, I'm new to FictionPress, and I would love if someone could review and give me constructive critiscim on my first story "The Elements Within". I'd be happy to review other people's stories as well (:

This is the link: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3046433/1/The_Elements_Within

7/31/2012 #1
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