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Post the information for your story here, and then write a review for the person who posted just before you. If you're willing to trade reviews, include that in your post so people can send you a private message! :)

8/5/2012 #1
Cathy Casam

Yay, I am the first to post a story here!

Yes, yes, yes! If you've reviewed my story, and you want me to return the favor, just PM me! :D

My story: Jungle

Summary: Leila Waters had everything a teenage girl would have died for: beauty, rich, social status, a perfect boyfriend, etc. But mind you, there are two sides to every story. Behind the walls, Leila's life was a huger mess than anyone could ever imagine, including herself.

I would love to hear some constructive criticisms. So if you don't mind, please just leave a review in my story.

I guess that's all I have to say. Thank you! :)

8/5/2012 #2

Your profile and your post has no link to your story 'Jungle' How am I supposed to review it???

12/21/2012 #3

The name of my story is "...LOVE IS". Here is the summary: This is an urban fictional novel. Danny is fresh out of prison and is looking to change his life. Tika is a young woman who is set to begin hers. When these two get together, sparks ignite. However, will jealousy and Danny's tumultuous background keep them apart?

I am willing to trade reviews with others, as long as others read mine.

The person below me didn't leave his/her story title.

1/5/2013 #4
Margaret Miller

Alright. I just reviewed "...LOVE IS." I reviewed the second chapater, because the first and the third share many characteristics that I touched upon in that review.

I am willing to trade reviews.

Could someone please review my short story "There's an App for That."

2/7/2013 #5

Thank you for reviewing my chapters. After reading it, I decided to edit the first chapter (what good writer would not accept constructive criticism?) When I am finished, I will post it back. Hopefully, that will allow you to follow the next chapters more fluently.

I will try to review your story as soon as I can--probably within the next few days.

2/18/2013 #6
Indigo Ziona

I reviewed "There's an App for That". Would love it if someone would review The Return, at least Chapter 1 :)

3/2/2013 #7
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