Review my poetry and I'll review yours
Just as the title says.
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Eternal Skies

I've written a lot of poems in the last two days, but there wasn't much response so have a look!

My poems' titles (to get you interested, i hope -_-):

-Can't you see it too?

-Death's reality.


-I hear your screams.

-I whisper farewell.

-Now the stiff body lies.


-She sat upon the autumn-leaf covered ground (wow, long title, any title ideas? credit would go to the one with the title)

-The eternal darkness of the waters.

-The hooded figure of Death.

-The lady in black.

-This is life (not one of my best).

-What are poems?

-When I was a child...

-Who cares (one of my earlier poems, so don't read this one first)

Review please! ^__^

8/24/2009 #1

Hey I've reviewed your poem haunting. I was wondering if you may be able to review mine it's my first posted and I was after maybe some constructive criticism or anything of the like by the way do i have to join the forum to be able to reply and post :S

9/1/2009 #2
Eternal Skies

nope, not all! i'm going to review your poem! :P thanks for reviewing me, keep reveiwing!! lolz

9/1/2009 #3
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