Review my poetry and I'll review yours
Just as the title says.
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I literally don't know what to call my new poem currently titled "I Don't Know What To Call This Poem" So if you could read & review, than help me out with a title...I'd be really thankful. :)

And of course, I won't forget to review your poems as well!

6/6/2008 #1

There's no need to review my poems, as I have none up currently. ;)

I really enjoyed reading your poem. I found that I related to it quite easily. It almost sounded like a song, which I liked. One thing I believe was an error, somewhere in the last few lines. Overdose, not overdoes. That's all, really. Nice work!

- L

6/7/2008 #2

Thanks for letting me know about that error. :)

6/8/2008 #3
Lily von Rider

I left you a review. My mind's blank so I couldn't really think of a name but left a suggestion. Hope it helps.


6/10/2008 #4

Thanks, the suggestion gave me several ideas :)

6/14/2008 #5
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