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iMagiNe -be.lie.ve

Hi!

I just started a story, here, and I would like some more constructive criticism on how to improve it and such.

If you review, I'd be more than happy to review a story of yours!

Thanks!

http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2649907/1/Bone_Garden

3/23/2009 #1
MockingJuliet

Hi! ^ ^ I just finished reading Bone Garden. I also left you a review! ^ ^ Im fairly new as well. I know how tough it is to get your stuff out there. Your writing is pretty good. Keep it up ^ ^

6/3/2009 #2
iMagiNe -be.lie.ve

Thank you so much! ^^ I really appreciate it.

6/3/2009 #3
DarkFeywithFangs311

i reviewed, it and it is pretty good, i like it.

12/19/2009 #4
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