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Author has written 5 stories for Fantasy, and General.

Hare Krishna

I am a new writer. I really like to get into the motivations and hopes of the characters I make or play for games. I welcome any advice about improving my stories or characterizations.


Just completed my first story here. Please let me know what you think of it.


Writing and posting to the net...wow. More challenging, in various ways, than just dreaming up stories.

1) the stories themselves. It is relatively easy to come up with cool ideas. A lot harder to make them work with words on a page, compared to just in my head. I believe I need to develop my writing skills to allow for a greater richness of feeling, beyond simple plot or dialogue, in my writing.

2) putting them out there. Its kinda shocking how the insecurities come crashing down when anyone might see my attempts at creativity. On this site, there is the minimal expectation of the readers wanting something like what I am trying to write. Still...


Based on the above, I am very likely to start stories which I am unable or too insecure to continue posting, either for a little while or maybe forever. Please be patient and/or forgiving.

Hare Krishna

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Mother of Learning by nobody103 reviews
Zorian, a mage in training, only wanted to finish his education in peace. Now he struggles to find answers as he finds himself repeatedly reliving the same month. 'Groundhog Day' style setup in a fantasy world.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Mystery - Chapters: 108 - Words: 804,117 - Reviews: 6083 - Favs: 4,762 - Follows: 5,880 - Updated: 2/10/2020 - Published: 10/17/2011 - Complete
Fantasy World Online I: New Roads! by WriteraAddicted reviews
Entire story available on Wattpad under the Author name Karine Mazouzi (yes that's my name)
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: M - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 6 - Words: 27,297 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 3/6/2016 - Published: 10/8/2014
Mad Dragon Gamer by RyugiTamashi reviews
The story of a gamer, like we can see everywhere on internet, who died and reincarnated in a world of swords and magic. As a little girl.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 29 - Words: 45,626 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 35 - Follows: 39 - Updated: 11/18/2015 - Published: 3/25/2015
The Crimson Flute of the Rain Goddess by Eclipsist reviews
Allister, king of the Bloodflute Elf Clan is an NPC, NewRain is a player. They just want to be a normal father and daughter, all in a MMORPG created in 2021. A gamer story, yes, I'm a geek. A father's day present.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Family/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,295 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/22/2010 - Complete
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Seeing the Need
A young man who'd given up on life discovers a taste of something that may be real (in life).
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 862 - Published: 3/17/2015
The Team
(A little silliness). Members of the typical fantasy rpg party - the tank, the smart skilled one, the...one who like knives (or anything sharp really), and a down-to earth mage. They are interviewed separately.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 822 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/15/2015 - Complete
Another Chance
Weston Jakob was a waste. Then he died. Now a friendly being allows him to try again in a different place and time. This will be about a character who tries to be productive with his second chance at living well. Based on his last life, he seems to need clarity about improving and becoming better - so he will see things in terms of rpgs, the GURPS mechanics.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: M - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,124 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 3/13/2015 - Published: 3/9/2015
An Unlikely Hero
A normally nigh useless npc-type has some adventures. Somewhat character driven, but going through pre-published modules. Strongly within the D&D 3.x rpg concepts/mechanics. Will make use of non-core and 3rd party rules, so don't read if that bothers you.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,014 - Updated: 3/11/2015 - Published: 3/10/2015
Bothelm of Steadcester
This is the backstory of a character I intend to play in Asheron's Call, an old mmorpg. I attempt to give a reason why he will go adventuring. I will use the game's stat blocks, but only as a reference for the reader. He starts as a lazy mage. I hope he ends as a potential hero. I won't have much dialogue. Please read & review. I'd like to improve the writing.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 3 - Words: 2,746 - Updated: 3/7/2015 - Published: 2/20/2015 - Complete