The-Dedicated-Girls
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Joined 05-22-16, id: 1063449, Profile Updated: 12-31-17
Author has written 7 stories for General, and General.

this is the last profile update of 2017 [12/31]


Introduction:

Pleased to meet you. I am The-Dedicated-Girls, also known as "TDG". Most people call me "Thena".

I am an aspiring writer on this website who hopes to write more.

My short story collections (and almost everything I'll publish from today on) normally be grouped into stories of ten, each of them broadly covering one topic. One example of this (it's not obvious) is Parts and Pieces of My Life, which is a safe for parts of my life which I wrote about around that time. If I did not, then the writing seems different, because I am reflecting on it.

If you have anything to say, feel free to PM me. However, please stick to one thread.

Some of what should have been on my profile is in FreethinkingLife (shared account), which you can find below under "Favorite Authors".


My Stories:

Stay Strong and Remember Me: This was written when I was still a bit confused but relieved about two of my best childhood friends, #NoRegrets. It is a short collection of tributes to Quannax and FreethinkingLife. Two chapters.

Once a Bird Sang: The first chapter (the introduction) is strange. The rest are just random poems and things like that. I'll finish it up by redoing the big red bow by gathering some things I wrote in English class.

Parts and Pieces of My Life: I'd count the first few chapters as "writing from back then", but honestly, it was the bridge between now and then. In there is writing from 2016 and 2017, there being a big gap in between (Winter Break). I began writing again after Marina x Machina's eagerness to review every single chapter.

Dark Soul: A Gathering of the Past: This is a gathering of stories that I cherished in the past (and wrote a long time ago). I added updates to this without edits. It is your job to catch them and point out what is the grammatical errors and to decipher what is going on. Some things are left hanging and that is the way they'll be.

We Are Not Alive: This one is a loose collection of queendom stories I've written on here, all of them drafted on FictionPress (one is not, but it is very precious). It also showcases a few of my personal "favorites" that I've written in 2017. It took forever to write.

In the Woods: An Illusion of the Future: A loose collection of camping stories... or rather, cabin stories! Some chapters are collected, others are rewritten, and there are some that are just simply ideas that randomly came in. Includes a lake in almost every story. Will also have "sequels". Like Dark Soul's older twin, I suppose.


Stories to Come in the Future:

We: I'm going to release it as a mini-play sometime later, maybe in 2018 or 2019. I'm not done with A1S1 yet, but it'll be rewriting some of my old drafts for "We" into play format.


Stories Resting in Peace:

The A's Song: I deleted it and replaced it with "Once a Bird Sang".

Prequel to We: I don't even want to talk about it


Blog:

Announcements and A Farewell (from July)

I've wanted to say a thank you to everybody, but this mental pressure is really weighing down on me. I have writing here to complete and that has to be completed within a deadline, so I am not eager to leave the website.

After I finish two series and (maybe) write the third one, I'll most likely be leaving from big stories or collections for the main part. And just in case if you're wondering what I'm doing, it's a combination between school, extracurricular classes, and responsibilities I haven't payed much attention to. Thank you all!

[to clarify things i'll just go offline from writing stories until i find a good prompt or somethin', after finishing my collections of ten]

Ashamed (short poem)

You will never see my face (the true one),
Because if I do everything you did will be done,
What you have remembered no longer is true,
I hope you do realize that things can be cruel.

You left me behind (not like me leaving you behind),
Letting go of the past and just letting it flow beyond your mind,
It's stressful (I'm sure) but I'm on my own journey,
I know, it's painful, but the rewards are earning.


Are you wondering where else you can find me? Check out these websites:

Roblox (inactive):

  • ATACLC, ATACLCsAthena
  • DeviantArt (slightly active?):

  • ATACLC
  • Fanfiction.net (inactive):

  • bookowl26 [old stuff]
  • There's extra content at DeviantArt that isn't here or on FFN and will probably never end up here.

    Thanks for visiting.

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    Baby Blue by Marina x Machina reviews
    Spiritual sequel to Blue Rhapsody. Romaine is now in college and trying to survive independent life. While the past sometimes haunts her, she is slowly learning to focus on her own future and navigate challenges by herself.
    Fiction: Biography - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Humor - Chapters: 81 - Words: 33,625 - Reviews: 34 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 2/20 - Published: 9/22/2017
    Desiderata by Marina x Machina reviews
    Essays and pieces ranging from topics like "Why Feminist and not Egalitarian?" to scraps that my writing is not complete without.
    Fiction: Essay - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 25 - Words: 50,298 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 2/13 - Published: 7/9/2017 - Complete
    Silver Spoon by Chimpukampu reviews
    "He was sitting in the dark, and the moonlight that shone from the windows was enough to illuminate his solemn figure. With his fragile hands on his face, he shuddered and wept for his wife. Such display of weakness was the reason why he withdraws himself from everyone, but for a six-year-old me, I saw an image of bravery. "
    Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,080 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 4 - Updated: 12/27/2017 - Published: 1/4/2016 - Complete
    Fractured Fairytales by addledwalrus reviews
    Exactly what it says in the title. A series of fairytale inspired shorts, each with a modern spin.
    Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 13 - Words: 9,382 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 10/23/2017 - Published: 3/18/2017 - Complete
    Withered Rose by Diamond Shyn reviews
    Christa Wrightson is a damaged nineteen year old with a tragic past. Leading the life of a gangster, she puts on a mask of a ruthless killer, while inwardly she mourns over each one she kills. All because of that one incident in her childhood days, back when she was a ten-year old. But what happens when she stumbles upon her rival Alfred? What connection do they have? (On Wattpad)
    Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Drama - Chapters: 6 - Words: 7,138 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 10/12/2017 - Published: 9/13/2017
    Red King by Hayden Yates reviews
    Years ago, Anya lost her parents to a terrible plague. A few years later, her brother, Takuya, was called away to a war he never returned from and ever since, she has been hoping and praying that he will return to her. Takuya, lost at war and sold to slavery, spent years trying to return to his sister like he promised. Will they find each other or, will his demons keep them apart?
    Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 15 - Words: 33,252 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 9/17/2017 - Published: 7/26/2017
    Seven Remain by Poetik reviews
    After a nuclear apocalypse, a teacher gathers seven students together to try to keep humanity alive.
    Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 8 - Words: 9,281 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/28/2017 - Complete
    Sins of the Author by Marina x Machina reviews
    Some people say that the things you dislike most about other people are what you see in yourself. Aaaanyways, with no relation to that first preamble whatsoever, here are some of my pet peeves regarding fellow FictionPress writers. I understand if you get mad at me. This doesn't really have any business here. As they say, the sins of the author are not those of the...um...
    Fiction: Humor - Rated: T - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 2 - Words: 4,843 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 8/19/2017 - Published: 8/16/2017 - Complete
    The loner by Prime Jeremy
    He likes to be alone. Aloooooooooooooooooooooooooone...
    Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 251 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 8/5/2017 - Complete
    The Road To Vallis by JadeWizard
    The path to paradise is a dangerous one, especially when your under a shadow of a monster haunting you. But, someone once told me love can get you through anything if you just try hard enough. Maybe it can get us through this, maybe it can get us to paradise, that's all I can hope for now.
    Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,318 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/31/2017
    Cross Roads by Marlen Johns reviews
    He broke my sister's heart. So I broke his million dollar car. ... It seemed like a fair trade at the time.
    Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Humor/Family - Chapters: 24 - Words: 99,276 - Reviews: 159 - Favs: 94 - Follows: 128 - Updated: 5/11/2017 - Published: 5/16/2014 - Complete
    The Horror That Is Fiction by JadeWizard
    "...I really didn't want to do this." Her voice was dark and serious, it startled Jet a bit. "..But you wanted it and here it is. Don't say I didn't warn you."
    Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Humor/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,281 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/12/2017 - Complete
    See That Girl by onetimeswirl99 reviews
    See that girl over there? The one that I might've already fallen in love with? You can't miss her. She's all that I want, and I thought that you should know.
    Fiction: Romance - Rated: K - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,284 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 1 - Published: 3/3/2016 - Complete
    Crimson River by scottishace reviews
    It is 2017. The UN, and NATO have collapsed. America has descended into anarchy. A group of criminals wait in the shadows, preparing to strike. Only a young Scottish spy can change what is about to happen. Will the world fall into the black embrace of war
    Fiction: Action - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,655 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 9/17/2007 - Published: 9/8/2007
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    Once A Bird Sang reviews
    On dreary and rainy nights I lift up my hands and begin to type out unordered poetry, things that won't fit anywhere else.
    Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 4 - Words: 1,149 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 2/15 - Published: 11/13/2017
    In the Woods: An Illusion of the Future reviews
    I had lived in the woods for a while, in a small magical cabin that nobody had ever dared to come near.
    Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 4 - Words: 2,489 - Reviews: 8 - Updated: 12/17/2017 - Published: 9/13/2017
    We Are Not Alive reviews
    A strange child decides to make a rant book and rule the world.
    Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 10 - Words: 9,677 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 9/16/2017 - Published: 5/22/2017 - Complete
    Dark Soul: A Gathering of the Past reviews
    He didn't understand why his opponent chose him until he leafed through her memories. [There are a few scenes that are not horror, but I guess the genre will have to stick.]
    Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Horror - Chapters: 10 - Words: 4,631 - Reviews: 17 - Updated: 8/27/2017 - Published: 5/5/2017 - Complete
    Farming Greenberries reviews
    I guess the title is just a misinterpretation. AND WHOOHOOO I FOUND GREENFruIT THIS IS AWESOME
    Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 795 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8/7/2017 - Complete
    Parts and Pieces of My Life reviews
    Randomness that I have to post on fictionpress, highlights from the past, or random stories that I dream up of.
    Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 10 - Words: 3,600 - Reviews: 16 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 5/24/2017 - Published: 10/31/2016 - Complete
    Stay Strong and Remember Me reviews
    For my two best friends, Mira and Julie. They totally deserve it. I'm sorry if the religion bothers you. It's just my inner fantasy exposed in a story.
    Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 2 - Words: 510 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Published: 9/18/2016 - Complete