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Joined 07-23-17, id: 1097516, Profile Updated: 11-03-17
Author has written 18 stories for General, General, Nature, Fable, Haiku, Song, Humor, Historical, Life, and Young Adult.

Hello.

Hopefully, the things I post here can be useful, entertaining or thought-provoking to someone, somewhere.

In real life, this is all mine. However, I can't really stop anyone from doing anything with the stuff that I put on the web—so, y'know, have fun. I hereby wash my hands of it.

On that note, check out thecrazynewwriterintown's copy of one of my stories (same title and everything--https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3315237/1/Where-the-White-Moss-Grows). And please take a look at my story as well--it's the original, and it's better ;)

I don't mind this so much, but if you worry about plagiarism, do keep an eye out.


Stories:

(Here, I am mainly going to ramble on and you will probably find little about the actual content.)

A Million Pieces - I think I wrote this for a competition but never ended up sending it. Anyway, I had a lot of fun figuring out the betaing process with Serendipitous Nonsense!

Eoq of Many Colours - TAKEN DOWN TO POSSIBLY BRUSH OFF THE DUST. IT'S KIND OF AWKWARD RIGHT NOW. I wrote this a few years ago, basing it specifically on that poem at the end, which I had written a while before that, for no reason at all. I think this story could be interpreted in many different ways, and that is why I like it. Yes, I do apologise for the title.

Pass it On - a pretty old one. I entered it in a local short story competition, and it is the product of actual editing and some feedback, so I am pretty proud of it :) On a different note, has anyone watched that movie, Pass It On? It was like the most horrifically moving movie of my childhood. So yeah, I did feel kind of lame stealing this title.

Small Town Drama - Childish fiction. When I read this, I'm amazed by how much I was influenced by what was going on around me in my life and the books I read—I can literally see everything this little story was spawned from (oh dang, here we go, iffy childhood novels: Pookie Aleera is Not My Boyfriend by S Herrick, Keystone Stables by Marsha Hubler...). This was my very inexperienced attempt at writing a normal story including some 'touchy' topics, or so I thought. Some parts are cringe-worthy, but I did write it before I was a teenager. I like reading it for nostalgic reasons.

Train Station Girl - (also a haiku. I'll probably put it up someday.) Yeah, this went in a competition and put in a magazine thingy. I don't like it as much as some of my other stuff.

Where the White Moss Grows - written for grade 12 English assignment. I hate it a little bit, just because, but this shows the height of my love for description. I like that part of it :) On another note, watch out for thecrazynewwriterintown's version of it (https://www.fictionpress.com/u/1101200/)


Reviewing: Honest feedback/discussion/criticism is much appreciated!

I feel a good review, to me, should indicate (a) how the reader felt when they read the thing and (b) what makes them feel that way specifically.

I'll try to review everything I read (hopefully in that sort of way). If I leave you a lame review or a weird one, feel free to ask for clarification or just chat about your story! I like to analyse every word when I'm reviewing. If you like that type of thing, send me an email and I'll try to review some of your stuff :)

I don't review in order to get more reviews for myself, or even necessarily to return reviews. I don't expect it of other people either.

P.S. If you want help editing a story for grammar, punctuation or other proofreading errors, email me!
Otherwise, please use Grammarly or something. It's free!

I follow stories that I want to keep my eye on and maybe go back to read :) I favourite stories that I'ma gonna download with ficsaver 'cause I want to hug them ... hope nobody minds ... 0_0 (Seriously, if this is annoying for you, let me know)

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The by MethodlessMadness reviews
You go to school today, but you're not really there at all. [A one-sentence microfiction.]
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 438 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/24 - Complete
Anatomy Lab Practical by thehopefulone reviews
My emotions are open and exposed, much like an animal during an anatomy lab.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/28 - Complete
Frog Song by Rona Calan reviews
Late summer far from home.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/28 - Complete
Daylight Moon by Rona Calan
Late summer.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 12 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/28 - Complete
goodbye my friends by Fernachos reviews
As summer gives way to fall, the mood changes with the season. Welcome back to school. A short freestyle on the end of summer By: a University student
Poetry: Humor - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 9/13
The Wonder Box by hookline-dreamer reviews
A wizard, living a drab, mundane life in a polluted city, creates a wondrous, magical box. Critical reviews welcome!
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,500 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/9 - Complete
Blue by Dwynwen reviews
Everyone has a fear of something. For Diana, it's orcs.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,464 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/24 - Complete
Through Rose-tinted Entropy by Smoky Bear reviews
Never return to the past, it won't be how you left it.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 8/7
Reflections on Coffee by T. D. Fagan reviews
A child's simple request leaves a long, bitter aftertaste. Please feel free to grab a cup of joe, pull up a chair, and enjoy the tale. One shot. Humor. Complete.
Fiction: Humor - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 645 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/7 - Complete
The Letter That Will Never Be Sent by CedricHassenXVII reviews
This was a short story I decided to write. It is complete. I can't really make a summary without spoiling it, so I apologize. This is also based on a true story, I am the main character.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Drama/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,037 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Published: 8/5 - Complete
the regret left behind by Saimochii reviews
apologies are just words, after all
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 249 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/5 - Complete
Timid Timmy Tigermouse and the Vegetable Patch Mishap by timofchaos reviews
Timid Timmy finds courage and new friends.
Fiction: Kids - Rated: K+ - English - Family/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,014 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/3 - Complete
Unfurling by Twitchy Lee reviews
I'm like a tortoise. Often in a relationship I stay within my shell while others seek me out. This is my confession.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 210 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/29 - Complete
The Mountain Spirit by E. E. Lorne reviews
It was the beginning of December for the little village of Sayu in the northern reaches of Japan. This was little Shiro's first time going up to help the other farmers with the sacrifice. He was only a farmer boy, but he was old enough now where he needed to learn the ritual.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Friendship/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 884 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/28 - Complete
I Drew My Love by Notmarysue reviews
To truly show something so complex I had to draw something simple
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 34 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 7/28 - Complete
Love Big Cities by TheSilverMirror reviews
Wrote this after a day of wandering around Philly. Got some inspiration after listening to an audio-book version of a story entitled Complicated by an author by the name of Kirsten Ashley who writes romance novels. Had posted this on Facebook, and supposedly a friend of mine put this on her blog as well... but I guess I can post this here as well. Why not
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/27
Free Tacos by Noelle McHenry reviews
A man's girlfriend of many years has left him. His only ray of light in the midst of his depression is a coupon for free tacos, which he intends to cash. Dedicated to Kim Lynch.
Fiction: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,542 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Published: 7/25 - Complete
Bacon, Eggs, and a Fresh-Squeezed Glass of Destiny by MethodlessMadness reviews
Sal wants breakfast. The universe wants a Chosen One. [Satire; short fiction]
Fiction: Humor - Rated: T - English - Fantasy/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,626 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Published: 7/12 - Complete
In the Land of Sychosaia by all my ducks in a row reviews
This is a story about a princess and a war she had to fight, because sometimes castles and dragons are easier to understand than panic attacks and invasive thoughts. 2017.
Fiction: Fable - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,737 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 3 - Published: 7/9 - Complete
Why I Write by all my ducks in a row reviews
"Thomas Mann once said "a writer is someone for whom writing is more difficult than it is for other people." He puts it rather mildly. Writing, for me, is agonizing. It is like Sisyphus pushing his great rock over his even greater mountain; it is the ephemeral carrot before the immortal donkey. And yet, here we are. And here I plan to stay." 2016.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 503 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/19 - Complete
Witching Hour by all my ducks in a row reviews
When the moon gets just a little too big and a little too bright and you're alone with nothing but your thoughts, do you ever get just a little carried away? Your hands start to tingle and you go a little star-crazy? It's what they call the witching hour. 2016.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 295 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/10 - Complete
Find light in deepest darkness by Misfitlight reviews
I'm falling into darkness, forgetting who I am as I fall deeper until...
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 430 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/5 - Complete
The Sun's Golden Radiance by Zosia Rose reviews
Yet another assignment for class. (We're doing a creative writing unit.)
Fiction: Romance - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 239 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/31 - Complete
Emotions by Zosia Rose reviews
Just another exercise I did for class.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Friendship - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 3/30 - Complete
The Cloak With The Butterfly Clasp by Zosia Rose reviews
As a child I dreamed of flying...then I grew up.
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 318 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/3 - Complete
Butterfly by Dreamarcher reviews
I love to watch them and take pictures but they won't stay still!
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 10 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 3 - Published: 11/21/2016 - Complete
Fool's Paradise by Saimochii reviews
A reflection on the bouts of reading.
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 182 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/5/2016
We're Writers by Jane Glass reviews
Everyone has something they like to do, everyone has a hobby, and for us, that thing, the thing we sometimes do, for whatever reason each of us has, is writing.
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 380 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/28/2016 - Complete
Scarecretta by Leloni Bunny reviews
A somber tale of a farm girl and the scarecrow that she makes.
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,304 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/21/2015
Just What the Heck Is a Haiku, Anyway? by MethodlessMadness reviews
*opens computer* — *falls asleep on the keyboard* — *wakes up with headache* — "Oh look, I wrote a haiku."
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 11 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 37 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 8/30/2015 - Published: 12/17/2013
Omegle Talk with Daddy by Autumn Renae De'Claire reviews
Omegle is an online chat place where you can go to talk to strangers...this girl goes on Omegle and finds herself having a conversation with her deceased father.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,454 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Published: 5/28/2015 - Complete
Tearing Pages by Smoky Bear reviews
blues. I ain't gonna read no news no more. Spelling and grammar intentional.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/1/2010
Short Story: The beautiful Jade by Jasmine reviews
This is written for a child in a center I work in when I was a social work intern.
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,014 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/14/2007 - Complete
Tips for Writing Useful Reviews by elisefey reviews
A barebones guide to writing an insightful and thorough critique.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 961 - Reviews: 23 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 4 - Published: 7/20/2006
The Official Mary Sue Manual by TA Maxwell reviews
Mary Sues. We all know them, the perfect character we all have made at one point. This manual is for the growing fiction and fanfiction community on how to recognize and avoid creating a Mary Sue.
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,430 - Reviews: 180 - Favs: 226 - Follows: 4 - Published: 11/6/2003
To the Person Behind Me by PinsNNeedles reviews
To the people who keep reading over other people's shoulders as they type! Please R+R!
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 3 - Published: 10/4/2003
Sun, Star and Moon by Princess Mulan reviews
a little message to my friends. ^__^
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 47 - Favs: 6 - Published: 2/9/2003
The Skit by the Desperate Writer by Naomi Sisko reviews
I was having trouble finding a skit for the choir I'm in, and wrote this out of frustration.
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 489 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/30/2000
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Clodhopper the Invincible reviews
An inconsequential ship's boy makes his escape. Three sentence fiction, an attempt. Enjoy :). Oh, and one thing that I'm wondering: is the pacing, especially at the end, all right?
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 226 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Published: 11/3
Poetry: Companions & the Wild reviews
Each chapter will have a poem about an animal.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 6 - Words: 593 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 10/31 - Published: 7/30
The Lampshade reviews
For some reason, the poem turned out to feature a frog. I can't imagine in what situation the poem's scenario makes sense. Otherwise, included are the words 'lampshade', 'bruise', 'convincing' and 'expensive'.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/13
Portrait of a Girl Skipping in the Rain reviews
(Short.) Called a dodoitsu, with a structure of 7775.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 10/11
Where the White Moss Grows reviews
I took my first steps into the rest of the world. And I hadn't looked back. Until now. ... Short story based on Shel Silverstein's poem, "Where the Sidewalk Ends". (Written for English.) Minor warning: death.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,352 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 10/2
Oh World: A Mother's Prayer reviews
Victorian era England, historical. A sick mother asks the world for mercy for her baby. Rated T for death (ouch spoiler alert, but we all knew it was coming).
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Family/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 666 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9/12
Train Station Girl reviews
An old woman sits in the train station observing people and a girl sitting alone catches her attention. Short story. Only slight suspense. Would love reviews! (Someone, tell me if I can actually write anything resembling humour!)
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Humor/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 525 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Published: 9/9 - Complete
A Million Pieces reviews
Based on true stories like the Lost Boys of Sudan. Our character flees with his mother and sister as his village is attacked. Rather ambiguous ending. Short story. Reviews welcome :)
Fiction: Historical - Rated: T - English - Family/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 463 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 9/9 - Complete
Home is where you go when it gets dark reviews
When you were a kid, did you ever spend hours playing outside (in the bush) and then realise with a shock that the sky was getting dark and had to hurry home (which was a tin shed in the middle of said bush)? Well, here is a poem.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 222 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/6 - Complete
All Are Fish reviews
Avoid poetry (I don't know what else to call it). The reason I wrote it is noted inside. The title has no connection to the content...
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/4 - Complete
Pass It On reviews
Yes, another girl playing piano short story. Contains plot and emotion. I hate the title for this but it really fits! :( Please feel free to point out any criticisms! Or just give me one word on how the story made you feel :)
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Family - Chapters: 1 - Words: 705 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Published: 8/4 - Complete
I Know I'm Home reviews
Original song about God. I wrote this in my early teens, and the tune in pretty lame but it does okay as a poem. Right now I'm just sitting here wondering what motivated me to write this. I can't remember. Any suggestions?
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 197 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/2 - Complete
just haiku reviews
Broken up into chapters according to the theme of the haiku. I don't keep the subject matter to nature only, but I do follow the 5-7-5 format.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 2 - Words: 205 - Reviews: 2 - Updated: 7/30 - Published: 7/28
T'was a Perfect Storm reviews
Not the night before Christmas ... just about a storm doing what strong storms do.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 164 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/29 - Complete
The Boy and the Wind reviews
Starring: a Boy, the Wind, a Tree. I think it's a rather Hans Christian Anderson story: things die rather tragically, and there seems no apparent moral lesson. Tell me if you think it shouldn't be in fables, I just thought it had that flavour. Includes to varying degrees death (as mentioned), talking things in nature, poorness and forgiveness of a sort.
Fiction: Fable - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,120 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/28 - Complete
The Children and the Sea reviews
Poetry form: Sestina (if you want to, check out Elizabeth Bishop's online first). I wrote this in 2015 and only tweaked it a little. Don't be daunted by the blocky structure! Rated T for ambiguous big gentle animal killing, with hints that children are watching. Includes the sea, children, innocence? and animal blood. Dang, that sounds morbid and graphic. It's really not!
Poetry: Nature - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 360 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/27 - Complete
The Ice Dancer reviews
The personification of a pencil. Written for English ages ago. I just wanted to share it. Comments appreciated!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 158 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 7/23 - Complete
Small Town Drama
Literally the title, a tween story. This is not a work of art, though at the time of writing I flattered myself that it was a coming-of-age story. It is written in a free writing poetic form, from a host of inexperienced viewpoints. Includes blindness, ostracisation, guilt and first crushes. Also includes (on a minor level) divorce, fostering and puppies. See account for more.
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Friendship - Chapters: 3 - Words: 4,379 - Published: 7/23 - Complete