Cyanotok
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Joined 11-18-01, id: 128381
Author has written 104 stories for General, General, Love, Life, Essay, Fantasy, War, Action, Humor, and Friendship.
Just to start off, for those who do not like the way I review (which is probably why you ran to my bio), tough. If something is wrong with your piece, I will not hesitate to point out exactly what it is. If something is VERY right with it, I will commend you on that. Usually, I offer a Bad/Good side to reviews. Unless the piece is downright bad. But you WILL NOT be criticized negatively without at least a semi-intelligent argument with examples from the piece. If I have nothing nice to say without something in the piece to back me up (IOW: I just don't like it), I won't say anything positive or negative, just that that writer should keep writing. And when it comes to reviews, I really do expect my readers to do the same. It's just intelligent, as well as common, courtesy. If, however, you have an intelligent argument to something I have written, whether it be a review or a piece, where I screwed up, or you just have a good rebuttal, by all means, let me have it. My e-mail address is *points upscreen* right there. But do not write me if you have either A) Have nothing good to say except pointless comments that I do not care about ("ur meen" or "u SUCK"), or B) Use internet lingo for an entire conversation (LOL and LMAO I can deal with, though). By the by, if you really think I'm that bad of a reviewer, there is this cute little button on just about every page of this wonderful site that allows you to Report Possible Abuse. I will never claim to be a nice guy. And while we're at it New Paragraph!

Let's take a couple examples of some real reviews, shall we?
BAD Review for a bad piece of writing (written by some moron): "Ur poem (o story) SuCkS! You should never neve rite again as lng as u live!!! U $UCK!"
GOOD Review for a bad piece of writing: "Your piece was cliched ("like a bull in Mom's china shop came your anger"), full of horrible similes ("like my cat sleeping" ...That's it?) and even more horrible grammatical errors ("I hasd found the light, and I break the day"), and contained imagery that only appealed to one of the five senses, ignoring all others for the sake of... well, honestly, I don't know. Other than that, the content itself of your poem (or story, you get my drift) was all right, but getting to that message was like pulling mineral water from underneath oil. One gets the clarity of your message, but one also has to sift through the muck of both your syntax and your diction that leave much to be desired. The next time you write, do fp.com, and your readers, a favor and get your pieces proofread first before you post them. Your writing will shine through wonderfully if, and when, you do."

If you honestly cannot see a difference between these two types of reviews, you probably write the former on a regular basis, and this world has no use for you, except maybe to laugh at.

Now, as I like to do in my reviews, enough with the bad, On With The GOOD!!!

To my readers: Thank you, THANK you, THANK YOU to each and every one of you who review my works. You guys are great, you really are. Reviews are like Christmas at any time of the year, and other fp.com writers know exactly what I am talking about. They're even better when they're constructive criticism, because it shows the writer how to better himself (herself, if that's your case). Anyways, here goes nothing:

I'm back again redoing my bio
Just felt it was time for a change
From the old
To the new
So here it is

I am currently a freshman at Texas A&M University. On paper, it looks like I've done some great things with my life. In reality, I have merely been at the right place with the right people at the right time for the past nineteen years or so, and I have had a lot of great opportunities.

This year I will be extremely busy with both the Corps Of Cadets and, well, just school in general, so if I do not update for a while, I'm still here. I just have more important things to worry about now, like a degree. Writing is just going to have to take the back burner for a while. Nevertheless, "I shall return."

Now, onto the pieces themselves. Some are good (in other's opinions, not my own), some are bad (in my opinion alone), and some, well, should never see the light of day (but I like to archive everything that I write). You have been warned.

One last thing, just remember: Life is REALLY GOOD STUFF!!! You only get one. Don't waste it.

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America IS the Greatest Country in the World by Admiral reviews
Yes, I'm still saying it, because it's still TRUE!
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 4 - Words: 7,080 - Reviews: 289 - Favs: 9 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 1/9/2005 - Published: 7/10/2003
Legacy by Cutlass reviews
NEW CHAPTER! A full-blown fantasy epic. Please Read and Review! Shadows of their parents' past haunt a pair of orphaned siblings. Assassins wielding sentient swords are after their lives. Magic, romance, and epic battles ensue.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 18 - Words: 144,074 - Reviews: 86 - Favs: 26 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 1/24/2004 - Published: 9/30/2001
Silly Haiku Collection by Namir Swiftpaw reviews
Just my collection of haikus that are so weird or about topics so ridiculous, they need their own category. To date I have 28 haikus. (1.11.04)
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 28 - Words: 474 - Reviews: 159 - Favs: 9 - Updated: 1/11/2004 - Published: 10/14/2002
Evolution of Seasons by ShadowGal reviews
A series of 4 progressive poems, a tribute to nature and the seasons.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 5 - Words: 330 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/12/2003
Almost An Angel Poems by ShadowGal reviews
I've decided that since I haven't been updating much lately as far as AaA is concerned, I'd upload a bonus of sorts. Each of the following poems is a summary of the corresponding chapter, which means it's the same essential material, but told differently
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 2 - Words: 465 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/3/2003
Frangas Non Flectas by Limyaael reviews
(There's not a category for "philosophy," really). A pair of friends debate the relative merits of the oak and the reed. The title is Latin for "Break Not Bend."
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 853 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/17/2003
Crazed Minds by IcyFlame reviews
A poem of intrigue. If anyone would like to give me his or her knee-jerk reactions, I will be forever thankful.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 177 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/28/2003
For Lack of a Lever by IcyFlame reviews
In the quest for originality, is the ending predetermined? Futility of the universe, and that sort of thing. hehe...help! I'm lapsing into Internet-speak!
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 306 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/2/2002
Angel of Sorrows: Shadow heart by Lord of Nightmares reviews
In the world of Aether. A boy without memory joins a special army fighting against monsters that threaten the lives of the people living in a continent. His newfound friends slowly help him recover his memory. please read and review
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 23 - Words: 27,993 - Reviews: 55 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 8/28/2002 - Published: 5/17/2002
Rhythm Emotion by Razorwind's Angel reviews
A gothic girl who finds herself. A drifter with a special ability. A man dealing with life. A sister searching for her brother. A vampire trying to redeem herself. An unlikely group, brought together by one thing:evil that must be stopped. UPDATE NOTICE!
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Adventure - Chapters: 11 - Words: 60,213 - Reviews: 21 - Favs: 3 - Updated: 5/4/2002 - Published: 12/30/2001
Royal Beauty Bright by Limyaael reviews
First story, here goes! Rated mostly for graphic violence. Erith's (my character's) former lover is trying to kill him. This is A Problem. Luckily for Erith, he's A Problem, too.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: M - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,545 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 3 - Published: 5/3/2002
Shadows by Akuma-chan
Another weird one. This one has the rating for a little bit of language...and well...read it.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 815 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/9/2002
Forever And A Day by moonlover46 reviews
I wrote this on the way to band fastible. So I hope you like it. Please Read and Review.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/9/2002
Angels Without Wings by Chained Dove reviews
Angel lives in what is becoming a perfect world, where everything is controlled. But he doesn't expect a mysterious girl tied to his heart to make him doubt the principles of his world...
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: M - English - Supernatural/Romance - Chapters: 5 - Words: 8,695 - Reviews: 21 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 1/8/2002 - Published: 11/26/2001
The Rules of the Game by Chained Dove reviews
A dark look at life, and how even in a game where millions play, there are no winners.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,455 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 2 - Published: 12/8/2001
Dependence by Chained Dove reviews
A poem written for a friend-not that she'll ever read it. I feel so bad for her after every break-up with that good-for-nothing she dates, and well...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 155 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 2 - Published: 12/7/2001
Name by Chained Dove reviews
A short poem with an interesting look at a loveless relationship... also a companion of a sort to one of my other fics called ''Who We Are''.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 178 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/29/2001
Leather and Silk by Muse of Nostalgia reviews
More sappy romance fluff inspired by my best friend and her boyfriend. I can only imagine what I'll write when I have a boyfriend...R/R!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 224 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/16/2000
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A Valentine Renewal reviews
That's it. I'm done for. I've fallen into the cycle of writing sappy love poems every Valentine's Day. They do get better and better each year, though.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 187 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/10/2004
Warmth Of Faith reviews
Arguments between friends without a hint of hate or scorn
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 168 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/26/2004
Push reviews
Written for an amazing friend whose sickness is gripping her tight and not letting go. The only way she can survive is to just Push
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 400 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/19/2003
From Warfront to Homefront reviews
A story of a child's mind, and the laps it makes around reality, after he comes to a realization no child ever should
Poetry: War - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 340 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/19/2003
A Glimpse of the Morrow
Love and passion and power in its truest form
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Published: 11/19/2003
Halo reviews
Written after a night of passion without a hint of physical contact
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 11/19/2003
One reviews
Love without all the happy frills and fantasies
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11/12/2003
Think and You Shall Know reviews
The fantasy of a love
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/12/2003
Marine Corps War reviews
Written after watching three recruiting videos in a row about the Corps in my Military Ethics class. One stanza = One movie.
Poetry: War - Rated: K - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/12/2003
Eternity reviews
An eternity of torment for a life of giving that very torment to others. I experimented with a few styles of poetry to get this one. Read. Review. Come on, you know you want to.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 353 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8/11/2003
Name reviews
A man aboard a train. A woman he has known only in his dreams. A celestial goodbye. Read. Review. Come on, you know you want to.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8/11/2003
Making Peace With Midnight reviews
Written for a friend, late at night, when I should have been asleep. The Muse, however, refused my relief. Good Stuff. Read. Review. Come on, you know you want to.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/11/2003
Don't reviews
A betrayed love. A bitter ex. Read. Review. Come on, you know you want to.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/11/2003
Loving Her reviews
Very basic love poem. Done reading ti? Now just read the dashed lines. Fun, wasn't it? Read. Review. Come on, you know you want to.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/11/2003
When The Sun Rises Up I Will Wish We Had Waited reviews
Piece I wrote for an Abstinene Arts Contest, borrowing the opening stanza of "Making Peace With Midnight". Of course, I don't practice what this preaches, but hey, the piece was there.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 153 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/11/2003
Dawn reviews
Beauty and Hope and Nothing at all.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/11/2003
lightscarletdark reviews
Hunted in a forest, a man faces his Death at last. Read. Review. You know you want to.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/11/2003
What Happens
A man is lost for words when his eyes are cast upon her.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Published: 8/11/2003
Nothing reviews
Written in a time when I thought poetry was anything I could put on the paper. Yes, I know it's bad. No, you probably don't want to read it. Yes, this is here just for my archives. Literary critics are welcome (Flamers are not). Maybe they can find more t
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/11/2003
Love Me reviews
Written in a time when I thought poetry was anything I could put on the paper. Yes, I know it's bad. No, you probably don't want to read it. Yes, this is here just for my archives. Literary critics are welcome (Flamers are not). Maybe they can find more t
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/11/2003
Night Strike
Written in a time when I thought poetry was anything I could put on the paper. Yes, I know it's bad. No, you probably don't want to read it. Yes, this is here just for my archives. Literary critics are welcome (Flamers are not). Maybe they can find more t
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Published: 8/11/2003
Short on Life Short on Time
Written in a time when I thought poetry was anything I could put on the paper. Yes, I know it's bad. No, you probably don't want to read it. Yes, this is here just for my archives. Literary critics are welcome. Flamers are not.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Published: 8/11/2003
Lives Intertwining reviews
Written in a time when I thought poetry was anything I could put on the paper. Yes, I know it's bad. No, you probably don't want to read it. Yes, this is here just for my archives. Literary critics are welcome. Maybe they can find more things wrong with t
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/11/2003
Gladiator reviews
Written in a time when I thought poetry was anything I could put on the paper. Yes, I know it's bad. No, you probably don't want to read it. Yes, this is here just for my archives. Literary critics are welcome. Maybe they can find more things wrong with t
Poetry: War - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/11/2003
Driver Down
Written in a time when I thought poetry was anything I could put on the paper. Yes, I know it's bad. No, you probably don't want to read it. Yes, this is here just for my archives. Literary critics are welcome. Maybe they can find more things wrong with t
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Published: 8/11/2003
I Just Don't Know
Written in a time when I thought poetry was anything I could put on the paper. Yes, I know it's bad. No, you probably don't want to read it. Yes, this is here just for my archives. Literary critics are welcome. Maybe they can find more things wrong with t
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Published: 8/11/2003
Fall
Written in a time when I thought poetry was anything I could put on the paper. Yes, I know it's bad. No, you probably don't want to read it. Yes, this is here just for my archives. Literary critics are welcome. Maybe they can find more things wrong with t
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Published: 8/11/2003
Bouncy reviews
Written in a time when I thought poetry was anything I could put on the paper. Yes, I know it's bad. No, you probably don't want to read it. Yes, this is here just for my archives. Literary critics are welcome. Flamers are not.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 62 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/11/2003
Free Night
Written in a time when I thought poetry was anything I could put on the paper. Yes, I know it's bad. No, you probably don't want to read it. Yes, this is here just for my archives. Literary critics are welcome. Flamers are not.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Published: 8/11/2003
Fight reviews
Written in a time when I thought poetry was anything I could put on the paper. Yes, I know it's bad. No, you probably don't want to read it. Yes, this is here just for my archives. Literary critics are welcome. Flamers are not.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/11/2003
C reviews
Something a friend of mine and I wrote for a writing assignment one day. We got very bored very quickly. My writing teacher was not the brightest bulb in the box, though. We got a 100. I don't know why.
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/11/2003
Lost and Found reviews
A boy lost among this world wanders aimlessly, hoping to find what already seeks him. Read. Review. Come on, you know you want to.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/11/2003
Up and Rise the Morning Star reviews
Written one morning for an amazing friend who was very sick. She asked me to write her something to wake up to. So. I did. Read/Review. You know you want to.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8/11/2003
Thinking Too Hard reviews
Something I just wrote to write. No, there are no typos. Everything done in the piece is done so on purpose. Read/Review. You know you want to.
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/11/2003
Lucifer on Life and Love reviews
A fallen angel watches over humanities last days. Read/Review. You know you want to.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/11/2003
The First Time I Ever Said I Love You reviews
The title speaks for itself. Written just after the first time I told Her
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/11/2003
Innocence Lost reviews
What if someone you did not know harmed someone you loved dearly? What if you could find that person? What if you did know that person? Would you still pull the trigger? Read. Review. You know you want to.
Fiction: Action - Rated: M - English - Drama/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,983 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/8/2003
From One Man To Another reviews
Just after a rape, in the interregation room. For Mature audiences only. R/R Please.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 163 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 2 - Published: 8/8/2003
Gangs and Drug Money reviews
See Title. About gangs that destroy lives, all for money, drugs, and power. Power, above all. R/R Please.
Poetry: War - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 205 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/8/2003
Lost Get There reviews
The strong yet fine line between love and hate. Get. Lost. Now. R/R Please.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/8/2003
Moments of Zen
See Title. About everything and nothing all at once. Great for Zen. R/R Please.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Published: 8/8/2003
Bittersweet: A Forever Ago reviews
A man finds his lover at last, at the grave.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 188 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/8/2003
Awakening of the Guardian of the Nexus reviews
Cyanotok Rayshore discovers that he is the key in a race against time and the Aesaic to save a race from genocide and a world from destruction
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,448 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/22/2003
Hope of a Glove of a Memory reviews
Poetry that is (Broken) filled with noise
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7/21/2003
The Embrace of a Dream reviews
"In your satin sauna of sin/And lust"
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/21/2003
You reviews
You are but the shadow that dark invades my light
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7/21/2003
Guardian II: In Another's Dream reviews
A VERY rough draft of a piece of a long work of fiction
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,400 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/21/2003
Why do we think? reviews
Philosophy of beauty and the aesthetic
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 469 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/21/2003
Lie To Me reviews
Rating for suggestive langauge. Lie to me as if the truth would shatter our world.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/21/2003
Through Lucifera
Written for the ex. Shockwaves of hate
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Published: 7/21/2003
Evanescence reviews
Drop now/Remember the nights we used to dream/And fly from here and now among the stars
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7/21/2003
Liberation
One woman who will not take the beatings anymore. Many variations of this theme present.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Published: 7/21/2003
Some reviews
Some believe this; some believe that.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7/21/2003
None Left To Cry
A song of love and flight that lives on.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 206 - Published: 7/21/2003
Just Be reviews
My Everything within you/Take me away
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/21/2003
I Only Wish reviews
One man who wishes to return to childhood days
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/21/2003
Heal reviews
The burn of love after the heat of passion
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/21/2003
Come Into Me
Am I alive to you? Love throught the skies. Read and Review.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Published: 4/1/2003
Away
Meant to be a song if I can ever write the music. Sappy, lovey-dovey. Read and review anyway.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Published: 3/25/2003
0237
Title comes from the time in which I wrote this poem about not being able to write a poem. Review the irony, if you will.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Published: 3/25/2003
Tired reviews
Tired of life and all of its insanity. Some rhyme. All rhythm. Quick flow. Read and review.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 388 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/25/2003
Lingers
A kiss that lingers upon me like summers days and winter nights
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Published: 3/25/2003
Down reviews
"Down in the world/(far past)" Short, quick, makes you think. You can read it before you blink. Review. See bio. Read more. Thank you.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/25/2003
Go reviews
Rating for one word. One of my better. Pain and shards of a broken heart. Short/Sweet/To the point. Read bio for more. Review, if you would be so kind.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 88 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/24/2003
What If?
Satiric pairing with "What If A Much Of A Which Of The Wind" by EE Cummings. Questions life in general in eight short lines. Read my bio and find some more poetry. Review!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Published: 3/24/2003
A Thought Has Occurred To Me
Random thoughts about life itself. Not quite Poetry, but read my bio for some more. Review if you make it to the end of this.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,031 - Published: 3/24/2003
Sabrina's Valentine
Written exactly one year after my last Valentine (gee, I wonder why). This one's my best V-Day, though. Read. Review. You know you want to.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 181 - Published: 3/19/2003
I Hate Running
Exactly that. I hate the run; I love the run. Read on.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 189 - Published: 3/19/2003
Insanity reviews
The voices in my head are callingcalling sanity in this time is fallingfalling
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/19/2003
Flight Of An Angel reviews
From suicide to flight, one angel's call
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/19/2003
Death, can you Feel it?
Can you feel the Death within the air?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Published: 3/14/2003
Stalker reviews
A stalker in the mi[d]st of her life
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/14/2003
Line Live Love reviews
Perfection of love
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 62 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/14/2003
AeRonok's Fall reviews
Angel vs. Demon. From immortality to death, two creatures struggle with themselves and their creators. Read and Review.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 450 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/30/2002
Because Of You reviews
Another gift from Krystal to me. I took this one a step furthur, though. and responded to it with a parallel of my own. I still think her's was better, but it's always up to the audience to decide, right? R&R.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 337 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/7/2002
Hopeless Romantic reviews
Another one I've found who I'm not quite sure who I wrote it for. Strange that I wrote it, since I usually abhor this style of poetry... Oh well. R&R.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 8/6/2002
Right All Along reviews
Another one of my Battles With Fate. I don't know, this is starting to become a motif with my poetry. R&R.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 230 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8/6/2002
Illusion
"That this life is an illusion yet these writings eternal is what we try to hold on to escape the infernal" R&R.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Published: 8/5/2002
For the way
Written for who, I don't remember, but a nice little love poem nonetheless. "For the way your scent catches my breath in the wind" R&R.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Published: 8/5/2002
Lights reviews
Very quick poem. Does nothing but flow. No sense to it, but a quick read anyways. R&R.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/5/2002
Notes: March 4th, 2002
Falls under Notes (read bio). Written during my Confirmation retreat; it's strange looking back at it now, but it still makes sense to me. R&R.
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 321 - Published: 8/5/2002
Notes: Febraury 8th, 2002
Falls under Notes (read bio). Written while Death would not be kind enough to take me, or so I thought at the time. R&R.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 248 - Published: 8/5/2002
The Sky Moves 'Round
How Death comes to claim yet another life. R&R.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Supernatural/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Published: 8/5/2002
Weapons
Between bullets and lighting bolts. Read & Review. Come on. You know you want to.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 73 - Published: 6/29/2002
Burn reviews
What happens to the soul after suicide. Not in-depth or complete, just sporadic images. Read & Review. Come on. You know you want to.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/29/2002
Notes: May 8th, 2002 reviews
Written after getting burned by a girl I loved, and who I thought loved me. More Notes (read bio) on life.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/29/2002
Notes: January 10th, 2002
The first in my Notes (read bio) installment, though far from my last. It's not really suppossed to be poetry, but I guess with the way it's organized... Well, read and review for yourself, dear reader.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 219 - Published: 6/29/2002
Friendship Is A TwoWay Street reviews
What I consider as one of my best. How a dusty road becomes more valuable as a power through friendship is unleashed through the beauty of this road. Read & Review. Come on. You know you want to.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 310 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/27/2002
Hidden Dreams reviews
A story of good and evil, of a girl whose capture turns a boy's world upside down (literally) and makes the very sun threaten to extinguish if she is not found, of an angel who travels through worlds he has never seen, and will never see again. R & R.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 438 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/27/2002
Never Fear The Afterglow reviews
How a kiss in the middle of a storm can change your mind about the afterglow... Thanks again, Krystal. Read & Review. Come on. You know you want to.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 212 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/27/2002
You Are My Muse reviews
Dedicated to Krystal who was a great muse for many of my poems, including this one, so of course this one's dedicated to her! Read & Review. Come on. You know you want to.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 124 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/27/2002
Heavenly Smile reviews
One man's trip above and below just because of the smile of a woman. Dedicated to Krystal. Read & Review. Come on. You know you want to.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 148 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/27/2002
By Moonlight I Wait reviews
By moonlight I wait for dreams to come true. Read & Review. Come on. You know you want to.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/27/2002
The Rhythm reviews
Something that just came to me in about three minutes. Hope you like it! Read & Review. Come on. You know you want to.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/16/2002
Reflections reviews
Falls under Poetry, if only because of the imagery (read bio). Anti-suicide poem I wrote on a whim (actually, that's how I write everything). Read & Review. Come on. You know you want to.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3/9/2002
A sonnet: Will you be my Valentine? reviews
I wrote this for my (now ex) girlfriend for Valentine's 2002. Read & Review. Come on. You know you want to.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3/6/2002
Ramblings reviews
First to fall under Ramblings (read bio) for obvious reasons. This is what happens when inspiration strikes and the pen dares not stop. Read & Review. Come on. You know you want to.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 757 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3/6/2002
The pen reviews
The power of the written word. Read/Review. You know you want to.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1/20/2002
Time: The Enemy reviews
The enemy that we can never beat. Read/Review. You know you want to.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/20/2002
Truth reviews
The Shadow that is our friend. Enemies that are our light. Read/Review. You know you want to.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 12/28/2001
Trapped reviews
What some of my friends are as I write. Read/Review. You know you want to.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 12/28/2001
Time reviews
A nice little perception of time. I realize every author and his cousin has done SOMETHING on time, but... whatever. Read/Review. You know you want to.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 12/28/2001
The night reviews
Real short. Something written on a cloudy night and in a cloudy mood. Read/Review. You know you want to.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 48 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 12/28/2001
Blind reviews
Actually written before 9/11, just a reminder that prejudice shouldn't control our lives. Read/Review. You know you want to.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 193 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12/28/2001