Helen Cole
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Joined 12-02-01, id: 134216, Profile Updated: 09-06-13
Author has written 28 stories for Fantasy, General, Romance, General, Song, Life, Spiritual, Thriller, Religion, Love, and Essay.

I love writing and I've been a member of fictionpress for years. Some of my stories are somewhat immature by now, but I can't bring myself to delete or change them as they show me just how far I've come in my writing. My new pen name is Helen Cole but I used to be listed as QTgirly.

One of the stories I am the most proud of is Am I Doing My Best At Being A Good LDS?. However, I do not agree with the way it was originally written which made The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter Day Saints (the "mormon" church) sound restricting and painful whereas I have now found that living in a way to please God provides more freedom and joy than I have ever found otherwise. However, I do not want to delete nor edit the story due to its history. One day, years ago, I was curiously looking to see if I could find stories about my religion. Ironically, I found flames against the "mormon" church and one funny story about green jello. haha. Anyway, I decided to write a poem about my religion as I could find none. Soon therafter, I was bombarded with reviews of other people who wanted to share their beliefs also. After that, I found more and more stories with this topic and it reminded me of the power of the pen. (Or in this case the keyboard) In any case, I love God and I can't not share that. So whatever it is you believe in or hold dear, share it, proclaim it! Do not hold it in for only you to see.

I am always interested in learning about different beliefs and opinions so please let me know when you post them.

The most recent book I am working on is On the other End of the Phone, which I am really wanting to get published, (hopefully) so I would really appreciated constructive criticism. Thank you. :)

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Chasing Pavements by Solipsist reviews
I notice three things simultaneously: one, there is a grown man barreling towards me at approximately nine hundred miles per hour; two, he is THE Chase Harrison: actor, Hollywood Heartthrob, and superstar extraordinaire; three, he is going to run into me. ADoR Star Cross'd IX [ONESHOT]
Fiction: Romance - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 259 - Reviews: 16 - Favs: 38 - Follows: 8 - Updated: 5/25 - Published: 5/16/2014 - Complete
Kill Your Darlings: Rants on Writing by Persnickety Fox reviews
A collection of pet peeves, currently under revision. Years later, I'm not angry.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 12 - Words: 16,560 - Reviews: 82 - Favs: 36 - Follows: 33 - Updated: 3/21 - Published: 9/8/2011
Double Lives by tear of the sun girl reviews
Regan is a homicide detective dedicating her life to bring down the one man nobody could catch. He's an assassin dangerous, dark, and always one step ahead of the cops. Their relationship is rocky at best as she begins to see the man behind the murderer. Together they begin to work on helping the innocent. First Chapter was published in a local newsletter.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Drama/Crime - Chapters: 22 - Words: 56,444 - Reviews: 83 - Favs: 29 - Follows: 56 - Updated: 6/3/2015 - Published: 12/10/2013
Completely Blown Away by Black Beauty 90 reviews
This poem is about dealing with a setback and bad news such as a person's death.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/25/2014 - Complete
As Told by the Reviewer by Fira Wolf-Hunter reviews
Are you tired of your reviews being ignored, or have ideas for a story floating around and can't get around to writing them. This story will be purely review-based. So, each new chapter will be inspired by ideas that people tell me in reviews. Whatever you want to see in the story, I'll try my hardest to incorporate it. Full summary inside.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 4 - Words: 6,552 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 4/15/2014 - Published: 3/25/2014
Petals Pink All in Our Hair by R.N.18 reviews
Sisters bond grows stronger while the time you spend together last longer...
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Family/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 197 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 3/19/2014 - Complete
Yourself by GDWGal reviews
After finally having enough, a young girl confronts her biggest bully.
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 434 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/18/2014 - Complete
The Story of Red by right4lyfe
Red returns to her hometown in Indiana to say goodbye to an old memory. But will it really be that easy to forget everything that had happened eight years ago? Oneshot teaser for a story that's in the makings.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,048 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 2/10/2014 - Complete
That Methodless Kind of Madness by MethodlessMadness reviews
For those of you who wonder if writing is really a good thing for your sanity. And for those of you who think that it is. Also, for those of you who think that writing is an "art" that must be mastered. Also, for that one anon who doubted my sanity. And finally, for those of you who were just wondering what my username meant.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 213 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 4 - Published: 2/1/2014 - Complete
The End Of All Things by EtheralMind reviews
A quick short story inspired by a writing prompt, I don't know if I followed it exactly, but I did my best? Prompt: Your character is running and the reader doesn't know why he/she is running or who he/she is running from until the very end. Read to find out! Constructive reviews are greatly appreciated, I'm still a beginner!
Fiction: Thriller - Rated: K+ - English - Suspense/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 509 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Published: 1/2/2014
New Year's Eve by Zeta Ockham reviews
A couple lose each other prior to the countdown. He struggles to find her in time. A short vignette.
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Sci-Fi/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 551 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/2/2014 - Complete
Why is it so hard to get reviews? by echogirlcapri reviews
A quick question about reviewing on FictionPress, but it's a little different now ;)
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 502 - Reviews: 43 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 2 - Published: 12/14/2013 - Complete
Smiling by zaylane reviews
I like the real thing
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 244 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 5 - Published: 12/14/2013 - Complete
Dream by Firestorm Nauralagos reviews
A micro-fiction written for my Creative Writing class. Anything can happen when you dream.
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 153 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 3 - Published: 9/6/2013 - Complete
No Hair by FreewayofFlight reviews
Parody of No Air by Jordan Sparks and Chris Brown; I do not own them or the song! Hope you enjoy!
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Parody/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 303 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 4 - Published: 8/20/2008 - Complete
Kindergarten by Decoris Verbum reviews
You're freezing your butt off, it's raining, and you have bills to pay. Why are you standing in the drizzling rain? For the life of you, you can't answer.
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 437 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 4 - Published: 8/2/2008 - Complete
Saying Sorry to Mama by Nixie Tangco reviews
My first poem, written when I was five after I'd committed some misdemeanor.
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Published: 7/8/2008 - Complete
Black & White by Unknown Unnamed reviews
Sort of a play on the phrase...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/27/2008 - Complete
I have to say something by mobman reviews
A theory on life, short sweet and to the point. I wrote it as a blog on myspace, but I had to see what you guys thought. RR
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 446 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 3 - Published: 10/22/2006 - Complete
Dancing Under Streetlights by fearless13 reviews
A fond memory of my first kiss with my first love in the rain.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 792 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 3 - Published: 9/29/2006 - Complete
Prelude to an Akward Silence by A Reviewer reviews
Baisically it's what the world seems like before an akward silence
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/18/2006
I wanted a song by FallBreeze reviews
I can't get it to format correctly. I need help, anyone? Sometimes relationships can't be summarized in a poem. This is a work in progress, expect an update, no where near complete, but the beginning of a thought I had.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 444 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/10/2006
Diana by Queen of the Kittens reviews
Diana is a stuck-up popular girl, and Chris is the naive new kid. Can love blossom between the most unlikly couple? (Story better than summary :)
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 3 - Words: 3,094 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 8/14/2004 - Published: 5/4/2004
Modest Girl by The Wandering Minstrel reviews
Religious in a way. If only, y'know what I mean? Good, 'cause I don't. It's an "if only we were like this" thing in a way, I suppose. But... yeah, it really is an "if only" thing.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 2 - Published: 11/8/2003
Flaming Class by flash-rules reviews
A "class" about recieving flames in your reviews. Very funny.
Fiction: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Humor - Chapters: 3 - Words: 1,280 - Reviews: 40 - Favs: 9 - Updated: 1/4/2003 - Published: 11/26/2002
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On the other end of the Phone reviews
Before she even realized what she was doing, she bolted to her car. She jumped in and peeled out of the parking lot. She could barely manage to breathe and her pulse boiled within her veins. The phone started ringing and she trembled as she slammed her foot against the pedal. She wanted to throw the phone out the window but she knew it wouldn't stop them from finding her.
Fiction: Thriller - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 43 - Words: 55,187 - Reviews: 137 - Favs: 15 - Follows: 18 - Updated: 8/30/2015 - Published: 11/28/2004
Twisters reviews
Within a matter of minutes, the sky was nearly black and the dusty clouds created a whirlwind as they twirled like ebony toward the ground. They grew bigger and darker, causing an almost literal slice to my heart as I watched two twisters coming toward me, one of them nearly a block wide.
Fiction: Thriller - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Tragedy - Chapters: 4 - Words: 2,767 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 9/22/2014 - Published: 4/13/2014
She Bought Sparklers reviews
She passed the firework displays and saw a package of sparklers for only 2.00, well within her budget. She'd always loved sparklers, but today she looked at them with rage as she yearned to buy them.
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 408 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/20/2014 - Complete
Sitches reviews
How often has He been there when I never even noticed? [one-shot little diary entry]
Fiction: Spiritual - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 703 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5/21/2014 - Complete
Love Beyond Red Roses reviews
Real love goes beyond red roses and gifts... Someone who loves you would do something hard for you, something they would never try on their own."
Fiction: Romance - Rated: K - English - Romance/Spiritual - Chapters: 7 - Words: 5,728 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Published: 12/6/2008
The Glow In Her Eyes reviews
She was tired of always feeling like someone’s service project...
Fiction: Romance - Rated: K - English - Humor/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,278 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 4 - Follows: 1 - Published: 11/6/2006 - Complete
Understand reviews
I'm hoping to create a better understanding for people with disabilities through this.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 817 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/3/2006 - Complete
I Testify reviews
This is an excerpt from a journal entry I wrote after I'd broken my knee cap. This is very personal to me and not to be taken lighty, yet I think it's a truth that should be shared. I know God lives and that he is my Heavenly Father.
Fiction: Spiritual - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,045 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11/3/2006 - Complete
Library Collision reviews
A cute, simple story about two people who meet in the funniest of circumstances
Fiction: Romance - Rated: K - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 732 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 4 - Published: 11/3/2006 - Complete
I Am From reviews
a poem about me that I wrote for english
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/28/2004
Heart served on a platter reviews
a poem I wrote for my creative writing class. I don't really like the story line but I had to use certain words drawn out of a hat and this just fit.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/28/2004
Amy reviews
a story written from a handicap girl's point of view.
Fiction: Spiritual - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 484 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11/28/2004 - Complete
Daddy's Little Girl reviews
Try to figure out who this is written to.. not who it seems in the beginning
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 206 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 11/28/2004
You're My Shooting Star reviews
A song about someone you dream about and wish for- like a shooting star
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 244 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10/1/2003
Something To Hold On To reviews
this song's about needing someone to be your strength and help you through
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 149 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/1/2003
So Small reviews
a song about how someone degrades you and makes you feel small
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 222 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10/1/2003
Don't Get Lured In reviews
THis compares how a fish is caught on a hook, to how we give in to temptations. I know that the name of the fish is kinda dumb, but my brother picked it.
Fiction: Spiritual - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 496 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Published: 11/11/2002
The Deception Of The Rose reviews
Try to figure out what this is about.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 255 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 10/22/2002 - Complete
You're Different Because You're Special reviews
This is a song I wrote for my twin sisters who are handicap
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 397 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10/21/2002
I don't Want to give up reviews
It's about how I feel about how I've ever failed or succeeded at anything in my life
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10/21/2002
My Best Friend reviews
This is just a poem/song I wrote for my two best friends
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 173 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10/20/2002
You just don't Know reviews
The title tells it all. IF YOU REVIEW MY STORY, I'LL REVIEW YOURS TOO. SO PLEASE PLEASE REVIEW!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 195 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 10/19/2002
Am I doing my best at being a good LDS? reviews
One of the stories I am the most proud of; However, I do not agree with the way it was originally written. Read my profile for full explanation.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 367 - Reviews: 32 - Favs: 4 - Published: 10/8/2002
Emotions overflowing reviews
This is about my life as a teenager.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7/18/2002
Too Close reviews
This is a story about a girl trying to overcome her shyness and gain more confidence in herself. It has humor and some romance in it. If you review, I'll review yours! So PLEASE review!!!
Fiction: Romance - Rated: K - English - Humor/Drama - Chapters: 4 - Words: 4,975 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 7/18/2002 - Published: 7/12/2002
The Fantasy reviews
This story is packed with fantasy and suspense. It is probably my best story ever. PLEASE r/r.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Suspense - Chapters: 4 - Words: 2,367 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 3/15/2002 - Published: 12/9/2001
And all the short people drowned reviews
If you like corny stories, check this out (and my other stories) This is another one of my stories that I wrote in a note from my friends. This is one of my favorites
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Humor/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 175 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/9/2001
The boy who cried "My Pencil!" reviews
At school, whenever I get bored, I write notes to my friends and write wacky stories in them and I like them so much that I decided to put some of them on here. I hope you like it. Please Review 2 4 advice.
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 444 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/9/2001