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Joined 07-20-00, id: 14076
Author has written 33 stories for General, General, Life, Love, Friendship, Young Adult, Romance, and Humor.
Name: Jackie
Country: U.S.
Age: 18

Ok Im getting kind of bored with that so i'll just write more like this. How many people actually read these bios anyway? I mean, if you are reading this, do you actually care what my hair color is?(Blonde) Or what my favorite movies are? (Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind, Garden State, Finding Neverland, Big Fish,Chocolat, Moulin Rouge...) Or even what bands i like? (Matchbox Twenty, Five For Fighting, Ben Folds Five, Coldplay,Audioslave, Hanson, Goo Goo Dolls, Beatles, Elton John, Nelly Furtado...) Ah well if you dont, you just read all of that anyway and got to learn a little bit about an 18 year old girl you'll probably never meet.

So I've really gotten into this poetry writting lately and i'd love it if you read and reviewed any of my poems! But the poems i personally like a lot, that mean a lot to me, which i would really like more reviews for are:

The Things I Will Miss
There is Nothing You Can Do
Can You See?
The Upside Down Flower (Version 2)
The Fly on my Window
So Many
Wasting Your Life Away

So please read and review at least one of those, because id love it and id go to your page and read and review yours! :D
Well thats all i have to say! Bye!

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Fallen Princess, Broken Wings by Gleechumber reviews
It's quite hard to write a summary, but it's basically about having someone to protect you. That someone isn't always strong and perfect though. Sometimes they can be as broken as you are.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 145 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 3 - Published: 8/12/2004
Pieces of Heaven by Crimson Riley reviews
This came to me as I thought about my life falling apart... I'm not sure what to say because I'm not sure how I feel about it yet
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 236 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Published: 8/8/2004
The Loneliest Boy in the World by OneTrueQ reviews
(Now on 3rd Version, will continue to be edited. Keep giving feedback) About someone everyone either meets or becomes at least once in their life. That guy in the corner, all alone... R/R
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 355 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 7/16/2004
Imagine by princessofdreams2007 reviews
Just something I made up- and, surprisingly enough, liked. Um... I don't know what else to say. Please R&R. Oh, yeah. I need to edit some stuff. Unfortunately, due to the fact that my Word currently isn't working, that's gonna have to wait.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 169 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/15/2004
An Open Letter by OneTrueQ reviews
Letters... hard to describe. R/R
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 263 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/30/2004
locked doors and barred windows by Momentary Sins reviews
about being trapped and almost resorting to cutting. key word: almost.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 342 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/29/2004
the end by Karma Fish reviews
Saying goodbye, and learning to move on.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 4 - Published: 6/28/2004
Prayer of a Non Believer by Liced reviews
Dear God, I've never prayed to You before. I don't even know you. As a matter of fact, I don't think You know me, either. But You are All-Knowing, aren't You?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 722 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/4/2004
Jaded by Aspen Snow reviews
The beauty of the world is lost when the pain of reality takes over...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/1/2004
Icarian Flight by OneTrueQ reviews
How it feels to recover from a terrible heartbreak.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/23/2004
Seventeen by End Of The Innocence reviews
This is a narative poem that I have recently edited. If you have read it before, please read and review it again. I'd like to know what you think of it. This tells the story of two old lovers meeting in a cafe. It is much better than this summary makes it
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 472 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/17/2004
By My Troth by Angel Bob reviews
A poem I wrote late at night. It's about a relationship of mine that ended more than two months ago but I still despair over. I wish I could write happy poems…
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 173 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/14/2004
Secrets by Naomi Nyx reviews
I HATE how you all live behind your masks. Tell the truth to yourself, dammit
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 5 - Published: 5/12/2004
Sick Of Life by Gleechumber reviews
The title pretty much says it all- a really angsty peice, as usual! This one is dedicated to Ria, because her poem gave me the inspiration for this,
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 3 - Published: 8/19/2003
He Only Wants Me by WalkingOnWater reviews
and so, in a lot of love poems...we sure hope nobody goes after what you have instead of what you are! AH! I'M IN LOVE!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 222 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/11/2003
Your Last Fall by trophy reviews
It's about suicidal friend. The next morning. I was waiting by the phone, waiting for your call. Instead I got a note, about the way you planned your fall...
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 423 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 5/1/2003
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Good Old Hiccups reviews
Don't you just love hiccups? Please read and review!
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Humor/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/26/2005
The Unattainable Puppet Mistress reviews
One person tends to gain control in a relationship, some people more than others. Possibly a contemporary peice of fiction. Please read and review it! My first try writing something like this!
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 832 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/8/2004
Run Away reviews
Why it is so difficult to stay in one place, to never change. Please Read and Review, I wrote it quite a while ago and only now decided to post it.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/3/2004
Our Own Little Worlds reviews
Kayla is a girl who has no way to deal with her pain or stress anymore. It seems as though she has been pushed to the limit when suddenly she finds herself in a car crash that lands her in a new world. How will she escape, or will she even want to? Plea
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,281 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8/22/2004
When You Remain the Same reviews
If you want change, you have to help make something change, you cant just expect others to do it for you. Please read and review!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 245 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8/10/2004
For Happiness reviews
How many people do you have to hurt for your happiness?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 8/10/2004
I Want to be the World's Super Hero reviews
About wanting to rid the world of its problems...it seems impossible though...please read and review!
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/19/2004
A Tale of an Empty and Hollow Tree reviews
How an empty and hollow tree came to be... sometimes you have to realize its time to let go of something or someone... please read and review it...im proud of this one :!
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 187 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/8/2004
Stranded on a Lake reviews
Feeling like you are lost in darkness and dont believe you can make it to the light. Please read and review!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/8/2004
Fiendish Friend reviews
About the kinds of people who think they are great because they are brutally honest to everyone they know... thats not always the best thing for some people. Please read and review!
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 172 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7/7/2004
The Makeup of One's Mind reviews
What is painted on a person's face...its difficult to explain, please read and review!
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/30/2004
A Change of Me reviews
This is a really dark peice for me...i usually don't write things like this. But please read and review!
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/29/2004
I Used to Think I'd Miss You reviews
Getting over missing someone from a relationship that used to be...please read and review!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 205 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/23/2004
When You Say You Wish to Die reviews
About friends who think about suicide and how it can affect others...please read and review
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 262 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/11/2004
The Things I Will Miss reviews
The things you think about at the end of a relationship...everything you realize youll miss. Please read and review!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 194 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/10/2004
The Disease Known as Sorrow reviews
Its about how sorrow seems to pass along from friend to friend. Pretty short.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5/20/2004
Never Good Enough reviews
About those moments when you feel like you cant do much of anything. Kind of depressing but id still love it if you read it and reviewed!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5/20/2004
There is Nothing You Can Do reviews
This is for friends who stick by your side in your worst times and you cant quite understand why.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/20/2004
Invisible Shoes reviews
The invisible shoes came from dreams that i had i thought they were great images. This is my interpretation of the dreams. R/R! Please? :)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5/19/2004
The Painting on the Wall reviews
This kind of relates to an ex boyfriend of mine-bad break up, that kind of thing. But the image of the painting on the wall came from a dream. Please read and review!
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 376 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/19/2004
Can You See? reviews
I'm not sure i like the title for this...but i like how the poem flows. Its about how people (teens especially) go through mostly the same stuff...but its still just as hard. Please read and review! I love hearing from you guys!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 191 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/10/2004
The Upside Down Flower Version 2 reviews
I added some stuff to my original Upside Down Flower, I really like the first one because of how it flows, but this one makes more sense and adds more to it. Please read and review! Id love it!
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/27/2004
Upside Down Flower reviews
Please read and review! Its short and I like this one :)
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/26/2004
Fate Worse Than Death
About people stating opions about other people pretty much, people making others miserable...please read and review!
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Published: 3/26/2004
Alone reviews
Confusion and aloneness...Please read and review! I'd love it!
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/26/2004
Barely Alive reviews
Poem about feeling barely alive...pretty short so please read and review!
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/25/2004
The Fly on My Window reviews
I wrote this on a trip to Ohio. Its about a fly...that was on my window...so i wrote a story about that fly. Its deep...ish hehe. not too hard to understand. Yup. Eh just read it please? That would be great! Oh and a review would be nice too! :0D
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 513 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9/30/2003
I Wish I Can Make Things Right reviews
Please read and review! Its just about a little situation thats been going on with me lately thats caused me to get in to writing poetry. Thanks for reading if you do!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 205 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/22/2003
I Should Just Back Away reviews
Um id be sooo happy if someone read and reviewed this! Just something i wrote at like 2 in the morning. Thanks if you do read it! Id love to know what you think!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 180 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9/22/2003
Pain reviews
Just something i wrote at like 2 in the morning...please read and review! That would be awesome! Thanks!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9/22/2003
So Many reviews
A poem about all the people in this world...i dunno im bad at summarys so please read my poem and review!!! I would greatly appriciate it! This is the first thing ive written in awhile.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 5/20/2002
My Depression Narrative for 8th grade reviews
It is a depression narrative (in 1929 and so on) that i had to do for school it starts off in the year 2050- please R/r! thanx!
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,877 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 2/27/2002
Wasting your life away. reviews
Too many people spend life crying and feeling sorry for themselves... this poem is about that please r/r
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 199 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 4/14/2001