The Excessively Loud Waterfowl
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Joined 12-20-01, id: 141706
Author has written 3 stories for General, Essay, and Life.

To the readers and reviewers of "An Egyptian Tale":

This is MWFS. In case you haven't noticed, "An Egpytian Tale" has been removed from this website.

SD and I are in the process of revising and re-writing our story. It's going to undergo a lot of changes, all for the better. You see, we started our beloved story when we were infants in the writing world. The beginning, the foundation, of AET is atrocious. It's like a house built on sand. The story was ready to crumble and fall apart at any moment. The beginning was screaming, begging to be re-written. Also, we don't know very much about Ancinet Egypt. As baby writers, that didn't stop or even bother us. We loved the setting. But now the historical inaccuracy bothers us. So, we're moving it to a different setting. It will have some effect on the story, but not too much.

There were a lot of problems with AET: repetitions, one or two minor plot holes, shaky character development. The list goes on. But, personally, I think the characters, the plot line, and the relationships all make up for that. Those will not change.

Overall, the story will be under a new name. It is undecided as of yet, considering we just started revising yesterday, but as soon as it is decided, we will let you know. We have reactivated our e-mail account, so if you have any questions, comments, or suggestions, we'd appreciate it very much, especially about a title and a summary. Thank you so much and, once again, sorry for the wait! ^_^

Rakin by Firebird reviews
A random story I started a while ago. It takes place in an alternate universe when a princess must regain her kingdom after her father has been assasinated...Ok, I'm not very good at summeries but please give it a shot and tell me what you think.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Adventure - Chapters: 22 - Words: 21,770 - Reviews: 86 - Favs: 3 - Updated: 7/20/2003 - Published: 9/21/2001
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Sweet Symphony reviews
a metaphor (By SD)
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12/12/2003
The AntiArambashing Crusades reviews
This only applies to those of you who have read and reviewed
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 586 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7/24/2003
Poor Blue Flamingo reviews
The once was a blue flamingo! :) A cute little poem I, SD, whipped up. R&R! Please?
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/8/2003