Neshomeh
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Joined 01-15-02, id: 155056, Profile Updated: 10-13-10
Author has written 10 stories for Fantasy, Essay, Sci-Fi, and General.

Hello, FictionPress. I'm Neshomeh, and I write stuff. Some of what's here is older stuff, but I'd greatly appreciate it if you would take the time to leave a detailed critical review on one of my newer pieces. If you know actual schools of literary theory (New Criticism, Deconstruction, whatever), feel free to use them--I'd love to know what you find, if anything. Thanks!

Until later,

~Neshomeh

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In Defense of Tea reviews
A beginner's guide to tea and tea-drinking for the average American. Originally published in a student literary magazine at my college.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,977 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/19/2009 - Complete
Mother's Blood
Epigraph: What fairy-like music steals over the sea, / Entrancing our senses with charmed melody? --Mrs. C. B. Wilson, "What Fairy-like Music." Note: Follows from "Fugitive."
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,155 - Published: 3/31/2009 - Complete
Opportunity reviews
Young Oliver has just won back his family's kingdom, but he doesn't know the first thing about ruling it. He seeks advice from the Duke of Twayblade, a man known for his loyalty--among other things.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 938 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/12/2008 - Complete
Fugitive reviews
A clean get-away turns into a messy chance meeting. Can Evarel charm his way out of this one? Originally completed in April, 2007. May contain nuts.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Humor - Chapters: 3 - Words: 9,705 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/12/2008 - Complete
Turn, Turn, Turn reviews
Pritha tells the story of a choice she made when she was still young: her Craft, or the man who loves her? It is the most important decision she ever makes.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,315 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/12/2007 - Complete
Natural Consequences reviews
Best friends Kevon and Lani butt heads over respect for the working class and the planet. A short vignette taking place prior to the events of "The Resistance."
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,557 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/24/2005 - Complete
The Healer Cycle reviews
I'm not a poet. I don't pretend any of these are great. However, in case they prove interesting to anybody, here is a series of poems from the point of view of one whose life is to give everything she's got without hope of lasting reward: a healer.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 4 - Words: 585 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 8/23/2005
The Resistance reviews
Kevon and Lani both want to save their dying planet. Lani says join someone with the power to change things. Kevon says fight for that power. Who is right, and who is lost?
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: K+ - English - Sci-Fi/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,287 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/25/2002
Broccoli Enigma reviews
This is an essay I wrote in ninth grade that PROVES - with real facts - that broccoli comes from outer space! Have fun!
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Humor/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 803 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/12/2002 - Complete
The Legend of Lyte reviews
A story about the first Unicorn ever to exist, and why the rest of them aren't perfect. Written in eighth grade.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 996 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 2/12/2002 - Complete