til-iburnout aka Amanda Helton
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Author has written 69 stories for General, Song, Love, Family, Friendship, Haiku, and General.
I'm Amanda, age 19. I am widely known as intelligent, persuasive, open-minded, passionate, stubborn, and goal oriented. I have dark blond hair, blue eyes, and I'm 5'7ish. I am almost always writing, taking pictures, or videotaping. (Except now my camera is broken so no more pictures.) I write something every day to keep my creativity flowing. I hate cooking classes but love to cook. (Majority baking) There are two things that can calm/comfort me when I'm angry or sad or in hysterics almost instantly, a hug or a kiss. I love to be out in the rain. A person has to be able to stand up for themselves against me or I lose some respect for them. Live life with no regrets. I'm an affectionate person. I love to cuddle. I'm extremely adaptive and able to recover quickly from things. I know and understand that the one person you can always truly count on is yourself but that is no reason to give up on the world. Hold the world accountable for it's actions, challenge it, change it. It's possible. I over analyze a lot of things. Don't take me at face value there's a lot more underneath. I love to get back massages and I can give an okay neck and shoulder massage. : ) I love my family no matter how much we fight because when it comes down to it we'd pick each other over everyone else. We are always there for each other. I want to eventually find a guy or girl who is willing to devote themselves to me-to choose me over everyone else. ~~~~If you play with my hair, I might just fall in love with you~~~~ I love hanging out with my friends doing whatever interests us at that moment whether its going to the movies, parks, driving around, going to 24 hour diners, taking crazy pictures, etc. I’m 19 and I just know that today, tomorrow, or even yesterday my words meant/mean something to someone somewhere and they made all the difference for him or her. That is enough for me.

As of April 16th I'm 19!!! Amazing isn't it? I rememberpostingmy first poemback in 7th/8th grade.It's been awhile and a lot has changed...a lot of great authors have left and a lot of new oneshaverisen...

The Rules of Life According to Me:

Rule 1: Never be ashamed of who you are or who you want to become.

Rule 2: Never be afraid to ask for what you want.

Rule 3: Think for yourself. Don’t blindly follow others (don’t be a sheep)

Rule 4: Help those who can’t help themselves.

Rule 5: Fight back and always fight for what you believe in because if you don’t no one will.

Rule 6: When you find love, don’t let it go.

End


Thanks to: irish lover, Novi AstleyJin Munku-JGSPTV, Millie.Great and loyal reviewersI always love hearing from you 4 over everyone else.

"If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put the foundations under them."--Henry David Thoreau

"High School isn't the end and I won't let anyone make it be."

"Learning is not compulsory... neither is survival"—W. Edwards Deming

"A hero is no braver than an ordinary man, but he is braver five minutes longer." --Ralph Waldo Emerson

"That is what learning is. You suddenly understand something you've understood all your life, but in a new way"--Doris Lessing

“You may be deceived if you trust too much, but you will live in torment if you do not trust enough.”—Frank Crane

Always forgive your enemies; nothing annoys them so much.”—Oscar Wilde

"You must be the change you want to see in the world."--Mahatma Gandhi

"Do not go where the path may lead, go instead where there is no path and leave a trail." --Ralph Waldo Emerson

“Mistrust the man who finds everything good, the man who finds everything evil and still more the man who is indifferent to everything.”—Johann K. Lavater

“Never refuse any advance of friendship, for if nine out of ten bring you nothing, one alone may repay you.” –Madame de Tencin

“Every sweet has its sour; every evil its good.”—Ralph Waldo Emerson

"As if you could kill time without injuring eternity."--Henry David Thoreau

"In the end, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends." --Martin Luther King Jr.

"Freedom is not worth having if it does not include the freedom to make mistakes."--Mahatma Gandhi

"Our lives begin toend the day we become silent about things that matter."--Martin Luther King Jr.

"A jury consists of twelve persons chosen to decide who has the better lawyer."--Robert Frost, (attributed)

"...I am consumed by the frustration of everything I've ever felt for you

And it creates a ripple in time in space

when something as real and strong as this

is finally broken apart"


Once on a yellow piece of paper with green lines

He wrote a poem

And he called it "Chops"

Because that was the name of his dog

And that’s what it was all about

And his teacher gave him an A

and a gold star

And his mother hung it on the kitchen door

and read it to all his aunts

That was the year that Father Tracy

took all the kids to the zoo

And he let them sing on the bus

And his little sister was born

with tiny toenails and no hair

And his mother and father kisses a lot

And the girl around the corner sent him a

Valentine signed with a row of X’s

and he had to ask his father what the X’s meant

And his father always tucked him in bed at night

And was always there to do it.

Once on a piece of white paper with blue lines

he wrote a poem

And he called it "Autumn"

because that was the name of the season

And that’s what it was all about

And his teacher gave him an A

and asked him to write more clearly

And his mother never hung it on the kitchen door

because of its new paint

And the kids told him

that Father Tracy smoked cigars

And left butts on the pews

And sometimes they would burn holes

That was the year his sister got glasses

with thick lenses and black frames

And the girl around the corner laughed

when he asked her to go see Santa Claus

And the kids told him why

his mother and father kissed a lot

And his father never tucked him in bed at night

And his father got mad

when he cried for him to do it.

Once on a paper torn from his notebook

he wrote a poem

And he called it "Innocence: A Question"

because that was the question about his girl

And that’s what it was all about

And his professor gave him and A

and a strange steady look

And his mother never hung it on the kitchen door

because he never showed her

That was the year that Father Tracy died

And he forgot how the end

of the Apostle’s Creed went

And he caught his sister

making out on the back porch

And his mother and father never kissed

or even talked

And the girl around the corner

wore to much make-up

That made him cough when he kissed her

but he kissed her anyway

because that was the thing to do

And at 3 A.M. he tucked himself into bed

his father snoring soundly

That’s why on the back of a brown paper bag

he tried another poem

And he called it "Absolutely Nothing"

Because that’s what it was really all about

And he gave himself an A

and a slash on each damned wrist

And he hung it on the bathroom door

because this time he didn’t think

he could reach the kitchen. "

FROM: the perks of being a wallflower

Quickedit won't let me do the correct format for the poem. I highly suggest you read this book so

Go to your local library and checkit out!! (makes face I'm such a nerd laughs)


Check out www.fictionpress.com/~socalledpity she is a great writer! People should check her out.

For those I haven't got to back on reviews I will be doing that this week! Sorry for the delay I've been out of sorts lately. Hopefully new stuff will be posted soon!

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a real poem for you by Tyndall Blue reviews
one moment i see black then beauty...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/21/2006
dancing seasons by Pink Sparrow reviews
and just like that summer killed winter and chased her away (and they dance their deadly dance every year, in the few moments they have together)
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 165 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/20/2006
diamond necklace by Pink Sparrow reviews
i cried as you laced my neck with jewels, and then you said 'darling, here's your diamond necklace...'
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 2 - Published: 1/8/2006
Cascade by pneumothorax reviews
(040905) Lightning hits the skies.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 2 - Published: 9/4/2005
Confused by Breaking Heart reviews
MISTER: this one's for you...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 190 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/15/2005
Metrophobia by Shinji Boi69 reviews
Well, I was reading from a list of phobias when i found this and decicided it would be funny to write a poem about it. YOu'll see what's so funny when you read it. afterwards. lol. R&R. Thanks. Well, you'll know what metrophobia is by the end of this po
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Angst/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 6 - Published: 12/3/2004
Her rose by Perfectly Flawed reviews
A poem about someone leaving someone behind, and the person left behind kills herself. R/R
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 155 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/2/2004
My Downs by Shinji Boi69 reviews
Hey, I've decided to turn this poem into a collection os poems about my lower points. I don't mean to sound depressed, it's just how I get my emotions out and today was one of those days. Well R&R thanks.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 3 - Words: 320 - Reviews: 32 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 11/23/2004 - Published: 4/2/2004
I'm Taken In by nine iron reviews
Taken in by a situation or feeling and how it affects an individual
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 71 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 2 - Published: 8/6/2004
Acrostic Poems by Infinite Smiles reviews
It’s my new hobby…making acrostic poems out of pen names. I regret to inform you that due to "SYSTEM OVERLOAD", I am not taking any more requests, at this time.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 23 - Words: 2,404 - Reviews: 111 - Favs: 7 - Updated: 6/1/2004 - Published: 3/18/2004
Lunch Time by Heart of Sapphire reviews
This si an English assignment, we were supposed to write about a time we felt isolated-i think it turned out better than I expected
Poetry: School - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 5/10/2004
My Melancholy by Shinji Boi69 reviews
A poem about how i felt so distorted inside when life seemed to get the best of me. I'm over it. I like this one so please R&R. Your opinion would be appritiated. Thanks a lot.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 5 - Published: 5/8/2004
Secret Torture by Shinji Boi69 reviews
Rated P.G. for suggestive elements. I wrote this as pure fiction. I might base a story off this if I have the time so the poem is basically a quick summery of what might be a much more detailed and in depth story. So tell me what you think.R&R.Thanx.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/5/2004
Broken by Nizzles reviews
Just something I came up with during Global class.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 234 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 2 - Published: 4/28/2004
She Paints by nine iron reviews
A painting by a hurt woman
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 73 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 2 - Published: 4/28/2004
Your Ivory Tower by Seaspray reviews
Based on a really sinister dream I had. The sole witness to a horrific crime attempts to save it's victim before it's too late. Rather morbid.
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Horror/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 242 - Reviews: 23 - Favs: 6 - Published: 4/27/2004
He Is No More by Breaking Heart reviews
this is one of my personal faves.if it's not your fave(or is),let me know
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/23/2004
Speaketh by PigOnTheWing reviews
I had the general idea of this in my mind for several months, and all I could get was the first line. Then tonight- I wasn't even trying to write, I was making coffee at Dunkin' Donuts- the rest of the lines just came to me. I rather like it.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 4 - Published: 4/19/2004
What She Told Me by Breaking Heart reviews
i miss her so much right now it hurts(if you don't like it,tell her)
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 230 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/19/2004
Crimson Rivers by Breaking Heart reviews
by popular demand(haha)i have given it a title
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/8/2004
Remembrance by featherlight reviews
A person reflects on a past love, and wonders what went wrong...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 341 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 3 - Published: 3/13/2004
I Am by Luna Moonglade reviews
This is really fun to write and read! Part Four up! Many contradictions!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 5 - Words: 1,735 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 3 - Updated: 3/2/2004 - Published: 1/27/2004
Broken Windows by Ashes Of Roses reviews
"Man always destroys that which he loves" You said it works both ways
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 2/28/2004
Sticks and Stones by Mallory Beldevere reviews
Words linger longer than you think... R/R please.
Poetry: School - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 240 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Published: 2/21/2004
Gay Rights by Perfectly Flawed reviews
about how I believe in gay rights and hownthey should be legal. R/R
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 251 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 3 - Published: 2/14/2004
The Pit by A-Moon-On-My-Wings reviews
uhhhh...read and review...I don't know what else to tell you
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 143 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/14/2004
Silence by A-Moon-On-My-Wings reviews
Ah, the many forms of silence.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 2 - Published: 2/9/2004
Adumbration by To-Speak reviews
look around you... no one realizes what is happening any more
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Published: 1/29/2004
It's The False Life by MoshiMoshiQueen reviews
Tonight it's me... tomorrow it's the masks... tonight it's the death... tomorrow it's the false life... R+R
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 352 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/18/2004
A Simple Song by water sprite reviews
They have a story. Inspired by Linkin Parks From the Inside video. Originally a children's poem, but I think it turned out something more.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 2 - Published: 1/16/2004
World View by ego-amu-tuus reviews
The world is a mess, and there's no one who'll even listen...
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/26/2003
We, the undersigned by harmonybunny reviews
The hardships of petitioning, of standing against discrimination. In reaction to "Marriage Protection Week".
Poetry: Politics - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 360 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/18/2003
InSanity by hopelessly.helplessly reviews
Those who know me know that I am teetering on the edge of sanity, sometimes in a good way, sometimes not. This is just a poem about what it's like.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 212 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/22/2003
Suicide Seductions by MoshiMoshiQueen reviews
Take one last breath, take a jump... same old story told many times... suicide seductions each one of a kind.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 243 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 5 - Published: 5/26/2003
The Silent Battle by Versipellis reviews
A poem based on my feelings about the National Day of Silence
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 172 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 2 - Published: 4/16/2003
Too Far Gone by Chickenfox reviews
A song about a girl who's depression takes over and she gives up. Quite angsty. ^^; Or something like that. Please read it and give me your opinion!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 550 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/8/2003
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Where I'm From reviews
I am from CD Players not iPods and VHS not DVD's. Please R&R! I would appreciated it a lot! I always try to return the kindness!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 337 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 3/15/2007 - Complete
Fallen From Grace reviews
Summer of no regrets lost, a promise broken. It feels good to be back! : R&R mine and I will yours.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 229 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3/15/2007 - Complete
Mistakes reviews
Made my first mistake with youwanted to be your saviorR&R mine and I will yours.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 222 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 12/3/2006 - Complete
This is how reviews
He comes active in Technicolor, cloaked in innocence and heartfelt words. R&R Please (cross between prose and poetry i guess)
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 232 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 1 - Follows: 1 - Published: 4/3/2006
I Didn't Want This reviews
"I had no interest in dark hair, dark eyes, soft skin, red lips, pessimism, and frustrated cries. I had..." Please R&R!
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 271 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 3/4/2006
Tragedy reviews
It is a form of poetry called Found Poetry. The subject is the tsunami that hit Asia. Please read and review and I'll return the favor.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 12/12/2005
Recipe For Hate reviews
It is as the title says, a recipe for hate. It is a form of poetry that you take a subject and turn it into a recipe. Review this and I'll return the favor.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/12/2005
Missed Chances reviews
"Only to awake and wish..." Something slightly short and wistful. R&R and I will returne the favor. I enjoy criticism.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 12/1/2005
Masquerade reviews
This is a two voice poem I wrote for one of my classes. "bright eyes, ready smile..." "Friendships broken and I'm too clingy." Please R&R!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 177 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 11/22/2005
I am Hatred reviews
This is a "What am I" poem. I wrote this for a class. I would appreciate any sort of criticism.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 11/20/2005
Pretty Picture reviews
"Polaroid pictures.../ripped to pieces/ruby red drips..." Please R&R! I appreciate and return all reviews. Advice and Criticism is welcome!
Poetry: Song - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 162 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 11/16/2005
Shredded Memories reviews
"...polaroid pictures scatter the floor, shattered images of my past..." R/R and I will R/R yours too!
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 11/2/2005
Coming Out reviews
It was something he had always suspected, maybe even acknowledged subconsciously... R&R and I will review something of yours
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 231 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 9/11/2005
Living,DyingFaithfully Devoted To You reviews
Locked up in chains...R&R please, I will return the favor ASAP
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 9/8/2005
No More Longing reviews
Black night, crimson moon...
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 30 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 9/8/2005
Foolish Mistake reviews
A poem I wrote that had to have word inverse and rhyme for school. It turned out okay. It's about sneaking out. Hope you like. Review mine, I review yours after all it's the only polite thing to do.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 3/21/2005
Sweet Revenge reviews
It's a Ballad. It's slightly morbid in it's hurmor. Tell me what you think!
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 301 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/6/2005
This is just to say reviews
This is just to say. . . Hestantly I wrote your name today. . . (Please read and review! I will read something of yours in turn)
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 1/4/2005
Guilt reviews
it twists, it turns. . . .
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 11/7/2004
So What! reviews
Read and review and I'll read and review something of yours...better title tell me! ... Alex is a teen, a teen who's started an Gay Straight Alliance at his school... .
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 301 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 10/19/2004
Anxiety reviews
Ignore the title, it's a WIP. Just remember my policy, review mine, I review yours.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/7/2004
Summer reviews
Well look at the title..it says it all. lol..anyway review mine, I review yours.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 14 - Published: 6/7/2004
Left Behind reviews
About being left beind. I don't know what else to say except "REVIEW MINE, I REVIEW YOURS"
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 17 - Published: 6/3/2004
Late Hour reviews
I don't know what to put here. It's an older poem, I never posted. Anyway REVIEW MINE. I REVIEW YOURS
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 6/3/2004
The Day reviews
Stop by take a look, it's not a long read. You review mine, I review yours. R&R if you want.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/2/2004
Untitled reviews
I wrote this after reading an e-mail I hold special this morning. Please R&R...you read and review mine i will yours...promise!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/17/2004
My One Bullet reviews
Remember R&R mine and I will yours! It might need a bit of work. BUT that's why you nice people will review and tell me what you think needs to be done.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 5/10/2004
Please reviews
"Go on asking please, I may look horrified at the thought..." You REVIEW MINE, I REVIEW YOURS! So Please R&R
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 14 - Published: 5/6/2004
Untitled please help out reviews
please review and give suggustions for a title! review mine i review yours!
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 5/6/2004
I'm OK reviews
R&R mine and I'll R&R yours k? Critisim is welcome! So is flames, whatever just review cause I like knowing other's opinions!
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 62 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/27/2004
Spotlight reviews
I suck at summary's so please R&R and I'll R&R something of yours...
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 4/25/2004
The Bike reviews
Read and Review. It's that simple you R&R mine I R&R yours...besides that incentive it's actually an ok poem.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 28 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 4/20/2004
Wind reviews
A/N: first haiku and it's about the wind. Please do comment and I'll comment on yours. I've written many other forms of poetry and this one is new to me.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 19 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 4/17/2004
Take a Breath reviews
I can't write a summary for this one, REVIEW please. I appreciate all comments.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 4/17/2004
Lost reviews
About being lost to the world. Selling your soul. (R/R)
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 16 - Published: 2/23/2004
I Am reviews
Just a little something that was written last year. It's ok not great but ok.. . .so review if you want.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 2/23/2004
Working reviews
I wrote this poem for a Geography class assignment based off looking at a picture of a girl working in a factory. I would really appreciate your thoughts on this. (R/R)
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 2/23/2004
Her Eyes reviews
Please R/R...Appreciate all reviews good or bad
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 163 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 2/15/2004
You reviews
Please take a peek inside and read. It won't take much time after all it's only 3 lines long! R&R!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 1/30/2004
Dream reviews
A simple enough form of poem, can you grasp the meaning? R&R
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/30/2004
Forever Friends reviews
"I'll be friends forever with you.. .." Read and review please. .. my motto is you review mine i review yours
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 147 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 1/30/2004
Angel Tears reviews
I wrote this in my plane n solid geomentry class. . .it's one of the few short poems of mine. . .please review. . .i'd like the critique.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 1/25/2004
It Can't Be True, Can It? reviews
I suppose for posting this I could be flamed, but whether it be a good or bad comment please review.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 19 - Favs: 2 - Published: 1/25/2004
Shiver reviews
Just read and tell me what you think!
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 7/30/2003
Unanswered Prayer reviews
My grandmother died a few months ago here is the poem I wrote just a few days before she passed away. R&R
Poetry: Family - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7/30/2003
First Kiss reviews
My first non-morbid, sad or depressive poem. please review and tell me how I did! Any comments are welcomed.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/29/2003
Burning Souls reviews
I would like the commets of veteran song writers. Cuz I usually post poetry. Anyway please read and review!!!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 221 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 2/19/2003
Will I Ever Remember? reviews
In a bad accident I lost most of my memory. I wrote this sometime afterwards.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 353 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 1/28/2003
God, can you forgive me? reviews
'Crying softly, ever so softly, for help they don't. . .' hopeful eyes please R&R, it's revised and everything
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 12/9/2002
Realize reviews
Please just read and r/r I'm no good at the summary
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 11/4/2002
Crimson Tears reviews
Uh, short. About cutting, read and review. Thanks Odin for the title!
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 11/4/2002
Suggust Title PLEASE! reviews
Read
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 11/4/2002
Make Believe reviews
I wrote this when I was thinking about how everyone seems to go around wearing a mask, playing make believe
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 74 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 2 - Published: 11/3/2002
You Say I Hate You reviews
Uh, not really good with summaries just PLEASE READ! I don't care if you don't review.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 330 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/8/2002
Girl, How could you? reviews
This is a poem from a angels point of view on a couple after a fight. The girl cuts her wrists. If you want to read please do and PLEASE R&R!!!!!
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 407 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 8/15/2002
Death's Vision reviews
Based on Actual events. Not really good but I had to write it! R&R if you want too!
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 154 - Reviews: 13 - Published: 7/28/2002
What Happened? reviews
Umm..from my one of my sisters P.O.V.'s people who have siblings might understand or like this. R&R IF YOU WANT!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 251 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 7/28/2002
Alone reviews
Death of everyone that I cared about. I wrote this after a terrible nightmare. R&R if you want!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 160 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 7/28/2002
Death reviews
PG just in case. U should read if you want too. U might just like it. If anyone does read this then please review also
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 162 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 7/28/2002
HateBetrayedUntitled reviews
I am angry, Just read this R/R (This is slightly revised so you might of seen this a long time ago)
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Reviews: 22 - Published: 3/26/2002
Blue Eyes reviews
Poem I wrote r/r please! It's not my usual so I need everyones opinion
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 19 - Published: 3/26/2002
Birth/Untitled reviews
This is somewhat different from my other poems I wrote it at Thanksgiving when my cousin was born....
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 11 - Published: 3/12/2002
Behind My Back reviews
PG13 Just Incase. You might of read this already. . .here's the REVISION!
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 193 - Reviews: 20 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/1/2002
The People At School What They Say/Untitled reviews
PG13 Just incase.. Like my poem Just Another School Day
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 186 - Reviews: 19 - Published: 2/28/2002
Final Sleep reviews
I wrote this after I had a nightmare. It was the night someone threaten to kill me at school.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Horror/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 53 - Reviews: 21 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/28/2002
Can I Go to A Place? reviews
PG13 Just to be Safe
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 359 - Reviews: 20 - Published: 2/27/2002
Just Another School Day reviews
I put PG13 Just to be safe. Um read if you want.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 220 - Reviews: 19 - Published: 2/27/2002
After All Aren't I Perfect reviews
Read if you want and if you do just review. It just something I wro...
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 22 - Published: 2/27/2002
Memories reviews
A poem about remembering someone you loss sort....I don't except any reviews as I am new
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Reviews: 18 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/27/2002