becca3
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Joined 04-04-02, id: 194623
Author has written 3 stories for General, and General.
hi. i'm becca. hah. well i'm 17 presently, and i enjoy writing. well, usually. i'm not any good at it, really, but i'm hoping to change that. so i figure, practice makes perfect, right? so anyway just because i post stuff doesn't mean i think its any good, so don't go flaming me too harshly. but a li'l bit's cool, because i'm open to criticism.

hmm.. i just posted a poem titled WALK today (04.10.02)... i wrote it in homeroom after being tortured by the PSSAs... anyway i just read over it again and i don't like the end. it's to... common. i remember struggling with that when i wrote it too. i think i'm going to re-write it; adding some more lines, etc. it's cute how i un-intentionally rhymed the end, like a shakespear thing, but maybe it's a little too cute. i mean, "sky" and "fly" ? come on. suggestions are welcome :)

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falling seems to be a theme of mine in my poetry. weird. falling and flying. sorry if it's cliche... but emotions tend to be because we're all human. "what do you do?"
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/10/2002
Limit reviews
a really short and repetitive poem; but hey, what can i say? thats how i like 'em. it's just me achieving closure with difficult stuff.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 63 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4/5/2002
Walk reviews
i don't know if this is the right category... but anyway i was in a writing mood and i had a insightful moment... this was the result. *sigh*
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 402 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4/5/2002