Hawk Raskenark
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Joined 07-10-02, id: 231289, Profile Updated: 08-04-08
Author has written 10 stories for Action, General, Supernatural, Thriller, Sci-Fi, and Mystery.

8/4/08 - August already? It seems like just yesterday when I said I haven't been writing much of anything lately, and that really hasn't changed. I'm going to get back to work on Debabouchou sometime very soon, and hopefully have a new short story up, just to get myself back into the swing of things. I just recently posted the first part of a prologue for a story I started working on a long time ago, and hope to get back to very soon. It's simply titled Human, and hopefully with it I can attract more than just a couple of reviews. Not that I have anything against them, but still, I'd like some more people to tell me that my story sucks. Geez!

But seriously, I plan on focusing on that story for a while. I don't know how long it'll be, or if any of the ideas I even have in mind will go into it, but I hope by the end of it all, everything will make sense! Well, enjoy the short little teaser for what I hope to be a way for me to get back into writing. Also, sometime in the near future, I'm going to work on re-writing The Four Warriors and restarting The Falcon. Plus, maybe getting back to re-writing an even older story I worked on called The Agency! Yes, I like starting titles with the word "the". SUE ME!

That's all there is to say!


About my story, Human: There is a story there, yes, but it's my most creative one yet. After I finish writing something, I also tend to write down my thoughts about it. About the characters, if they were real, about how they would actually feel in these situations I put them in. This is a story about the human mind, about what people think about. People's thoughts are just endless rants; they go on and on about this or that, never truly getting to the point. And while if you tried to read someone's mind, I doubt you'd be able to make sense of anything.

For all I know, when I'm all said and done, it may just be one giant rant. That's all! But I'm trying something I've never really tried before, taking those notes I write about these characters and their worlds and making them a bit more coherent. Not completely coherent, but somewhat, enough to hopefully make the reader interested enough to continue to the next section. As I said, there is a story here, but it's not as important as the characters. Without them, the story is meaningless. There will be a conclusion to this, but it may or may not be satisfying, depending on who is reading. It may only leave it open, it may only make you think more about how you think, and how everyone else around you thinks. Either that, or it'll just be another story.

Each character has his or her own "thought moments". A chapter (or two) focused solely on what they are thinking as these events play out. The prologue helps the reader understand this. Again, you may just consider it a rant, but I have fun writing it. I've always had the most fun writing thoughts and dialogue! It always grabs my attention the way characters in different stories interact, as does it the way people in real life interact. This is going to (hopefully) be my best story yet, I know I'm going to enjoy writing it, let's hope, if anybody reads it, you enjoy it as well.

This little section here is like a rant. I feel like I should share my notes with you though, this is what I wrote after I finished the prologue and started organizing my ideas a bit more. Let's hope this ambitious (at least for me) project turns out decently!

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War's Heart: Hell Born Soldiers by Reaper reviews
Two years after the war that tore apart their lives and their city, the same teenagers learn it wasn't just their city that was attacked. New enemies are coming. Some want a take over. Some want to form something. And some want cold, hard revenge.
Fiction: Action - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 33 - Words: 107,602 - Reviews: 73 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 12/28/2008 - Published: 5/11/2007
Xion by Evaqn Applegate reviews
Story of an unearthly hitman with bright purple eyes and a gang boss who get wound up in a world of intrigue and criminal syndicates.
Fiction: Action - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 3 - Words: 3,470 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 4 - Updated: 4/1/2008 - Published: 9/27/2005
100 by Reaper reviews
After getting involved in some heavy business, Jack Saint woke up without a memory of his past. He now has the power to do things with his mind, amazing things. Jack wants to be left alone, but he also wants some answers.
Fiction: Thriller - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Suspense - Chapters: 16 - Words: 39,061 - Reviews: 32 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 8/22/2007 - Published: 1/25/2007
Burnd The Forte by Noihseret reviews
There was a time when snow fell as white angels and rain poured down like tears from the heavens. There is only fire now. Fire that gave a boy his name, his body wings, and his soul a fate. Until that fate has come, the fire will continue to burn...
Fiction: Manga - Rated: T - English - Spiritual/Supernatural - Chapters: 7 - Words: 12,693 - Reviews: 39 - Favs: 6 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 3/24/2007 - Published: 1/13/2007
Hell Freezer by Kantsu-chan reviews
MM Its about a guy who everyone but his true love thinks is crazy.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 589 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/19/2007
In My Father's Name by The Sonata of the Space Walrus reviews
To a man with a lessening grip on sanity and a tendency towards anarchy, the existence of gods would be an insult unimaginable.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: M - English - Fantasy/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 3 - Words: 12,210 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 2/24/2007 - Published: 1/10/2007
Down With The Sickness by Reaper reviews
A small band of survivors realize the world has been overrun by the undead. All they had left was each other. All they had left was the will to survive. But they're not going to just sit back and wait for it all to end.
Fiction: Action - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Horror - Chapters: 12 - Words: 45,338 - Reviews: 37 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 2/3/2007 - Published: 10/11/2006 - Complete
The Point of a Threshold by Noihseret reviews
On the stage there is a treshold that seperates the lights from the dark and the act from the actors. I can only imagine how many thoughts swarm one's mind as they cross that threshold.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 747 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 2 - Published: 11/18/2006 - Complete
S a g e by Noihseret reviews
My brother could see things that others cannot. He could hear and feel things that others could never hope to understand. Maybe if I told you what I saw in my brother, you'll understand what he saw. Then maybe, just maybe, you'll understand why he died.
Fiction: Biography - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Angst - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,886 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 10/27/2006 - Published: 10/19/2006
Invasion by Reaper reviews
A teenagers world is invaded by an alien race, attempting to destroy all he knows. But what no one was expecting was something to be woken once again. Something dark...willing to do anything to destroy the invaders.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 7 - Words: 24,244 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 10/1/2006 - Published: 8/25/2006 - Complete
Sleet & Hale by Noihseret reviews
4 new students have enrolled in an all boys school. 2 of them can't be together while 2 of them unleash a secret. 1 of them is a murderer while 1 of them dies, and while 1 of them falls in love, only 1 of them survives. shounenai
Fiction: Manga - Rated: T - English - Romance/Fantasy - Chapters: 16 - Words: 35,336 - Reviews: 155 - Favs: 23 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 9/9/2006 - Published: 6/17/2006 - Complete
Solarius: The Rogue by Kular Arieus reviews
This collection of words follows the path of a young rogue, Solarius Raine, as he unexpectedly gets caught up in a prophecy with him as a herald of the new era. Main points: Character development, dialogue, character relationships.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 4 - Words: 17,063 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 8/3/2006 - Published: 6/18/2006
War's Heart by Reaper reviews
An invading, unknown army. Unnerving returns. A city in turmoil and a whole load of teenage hatred. Witness the horror and consequences of war as not soldiers, but children take up arms against an enemy they never imagined.
Fiction: Action - Rated: M - English - Adventure - Chapters: 45 - Words: 113,261 - Reviews: 23 - Favs: 13 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 7/21/2006 - Published: 4/18/2006 - Complete
The Triangle by Rue Marie reviews
A young, Union soldier reflects on his friendships.
Fiction: Historical - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 977 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/13/2006
The Iris' Plot by Rue Marie reviews
Amongst the blooming flowers, beautiful ignorance lies, awoken by the call of oppressed dreams.
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,202 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/11/2006
The Naturanders: The Clash of The Elements by vNs reviews
The Naturanders are people who have powers in controlling nature elements, divided into twelve sections. The world was in eternal peace until two of its elements clash and attack one anotherwill the world end?
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 4 - Words: 5,891 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/20/2006
Need To Feed by Reaper reviews
The drive for human satisfaction can lead to many things...too bad.
Fiction: Horror - Rated: M - English - Horror/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,186 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 3 - Published: 5/22/2006 - Complete
Dead Men by Jezster03 reviews
Maybe a hit-and-run isn't the worst thing after all.
Fiction: Horror - Rated: T - English - Horror/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,721 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/27/2005
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Human reviews
The human mind is interesting. How would the people around you truly react in a horrific situation? They become different people entirely. This is happening to a group of students, as their thoughts are revealed. How well can you trust someone, really?
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: M - English - Mystery/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,668 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/4/2008
The Zones reviews
It was all in Walter Hummer's head, but soon the past comes back as a group of soldiers who have the mission to protect the balance of time itself return to show Walter his destiny. This is the sequel to my earlier story, The Four Warriors.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,251 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/20/2007
Debabouchou reviews
A collection of short stories that features no dialogue at all. Actions speak louder than words, in this case.
Fiction: General - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 3 - Words: 5,050 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 6/11/2007 - Published: 5/2/2007
Stingers: Pride Filled Bullet reviews
The mysterious town of Rodgnay and its outskirts hold a lot of secrets, and also a lot of violence. A gang known as Stingers, a terrorist group of the same name, and others try to fight to survive as well as for drugs and money. Don't forget the train.
Fiction: Thriller - Rated: M - English - Adventure/Mystery - Chapters: 22 - Words: 54,199 - Reviews: 15 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 5/26/2007 - Published: 12/23/2006 - Complete
The Four Warriors reviews
Jack, Alice, Riaan and Sergio. Four warriors, all with different pasts and different goals. They join up to find a mysterious briefcase and keep it from getting into the wrong hands. Only thing stopping them from finding their destinies is death.
Fiction: Action - Rated: M - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 48 - Words: 130,033 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 5 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 11/18/2006 - Published: 9/27/2005 - Complete
Armada: The Remastered Edition reviews
The Armada of the land of Kriptia just finished a long war with their rivals in the land of Fishi, but something is still different. A strange creature lurks, wanting revenge for the past, and killing all those who get in his way.
Fiction: Sci-Fi - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 7,568 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/13/2006 - Complete
Foxwood reviews
The sequel to Eagle continues with Luther Ranford, an exscientist who was believed to be dead, but now finds himself in a new hell. The town of Foxwood has many secrets.
Fiction: Thriller - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,949 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/11/2006 - Complete
Eagle reviews
A young boy decides to follow a mysterious bird one day, and it leads him into a trap and potential government cover up.
Fiction: Thriller - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 1 - Words: 5,520 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/11/2006 - Complete
Examination reviews
Doctor Michael Archer is in a struggle between reality and his dreams. What is actually real, and what is a dream?
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: T - English - Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,376 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7/11/2006 - Complete
Brother, Sister reviews
The lives of two siblings are drastically changed when their mother is in need of an operation, and they can only do the unthinkable to get the money.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,515 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/3/2006 - Complete