Kiwii
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Joined 11-21-00, id: 26422
Author has written 3 stories for General, and Haiku.
I'm in high school, I live in Alberta. One of my many interests is writing.

I would appreciate if you take a few minutes to review some of my work (that is, of what's posted - which is a partial representation). I always appreciate constructive critcism.

I leave perhaps too many honest, critical reviews. If you received one and don't like it, listen to all those who utter the perpetual refrain of 'good job' and/or 'you're a good writer', and remain happily ignorant.

Kiwii

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The Romance of Rachel White by Zapenstap reviews
A ten-page short story that is part romance, part humor and part sef discovery. I want to be a writer, so reviews are really appreciated.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,812 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 2 - Published: 12/31/2002
It's Raining Stars by raine sprite reviews
^_^ annother light happy poem...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/13/2002
Broken by Faded Shades Of Jade reviews
Another depressing poem....^_^''
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 8/13/2002
Existence by Tahiri Solo reviews
She's the last of her kind . . . a poem about a dragon.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 330 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/6/2002
The Violent and Divine by Shine reviews
The Violent and Divine
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/2/2001
Phoenix by Shine reviews
death & rebirth -- a story as old as life itself
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 164 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/12/2001
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Random reviews
Short and sweet - only 8 lines. It links several ideas together in an interesting way... have a look.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 1/7/2003
Butterfly reviews
Haiku with verses - I'm not sure if it can be done and be technically called haiku still, but I did it and here it is: a haiku with verses describing a butterfly.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/7/2003
The King's Joke reviews
About a traveller, and a joke... what happens if you don't understand.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 277 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/16/2002
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