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Author has written 211 stories for General, General, Love, Life, Friendship, Humor, Essay, Song, School, Supernatural, Religion, Romance, Fantasy, War, Family, Politics, Humor, and Fantasy.

there is a place where i can go
where neither harm nor safety can touch me
it's with you

there is a time i fell for you
i landed hard and stayed there, becoming one with the gravel
this is now...

there is a face framed in my mind
no body no voice it is enough
no action taken and no word left unsaid
it's yours.

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he straightens my edges by amavian reviews
he grins from jaw line to nipple ring
Poetry: Family - Rated: M - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 240 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 2 - Published: 4/9/2006
Driving Music by Mod-alcyone reviews
Driving in your car, oh please don't drop me home...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 12/11/2004
Contempt for life by hiwai onna reviews
not much to say, the title speaks for itself. written in August 6, 2003
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/28/2004
As Cigarettes are to Healthy by Aftertaste of a Razorblade reviews
M/m slash. Damien, motivated mostly by boredom, takes on the disgruntled, bitter Vic as a challenge.
Fiction: General - Rated: M - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 14 - Words: 17,876 - Reviews: 330 - Favs: 114 - Follows: 38 - Updated: 1/29/2004 - Published: 8/8/2002
Religion by The Grey Ghoul reviews
Zain is calm, cool and suave. Jared is quiet, harsh and serious. One says not the trust the other. Bailey must choose. Her life depends on it... :::Finally, this story is complete. Hope you all enjoyed it. R&R:::
Fiction: General - Rated: M - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 28 - Words: 61,439 - Reviews: 71 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 1 - Updated: 11/28/2003 - Published: 5/23/2003
You Don't See Me by Tasha Bean reviews
*COMPLETE* Ever since third grade Karma McKay has loved Lucas Parker. Her best friend gave her till graduation to tell him how she feels. What will happen when she tells him in a shocking way?
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 22 - Words: 23,771 - Reviews: 178 - Favs: 33 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 10/9/2003 - Published: 5/16/2003 - Complete
For The Best by living.breathing.unoriginality reviews
January 2003. yeah this is an old one that's a lil' out of place because well...it got deleted...my bad. 1000 apologies. :-/
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 601 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/5/2003
She Had Three Days by Marissa Rox reviews
(rated for murder) Basically about a girl who thinks she is SO perfect and how everyone decides to kill her. (not that I would ...)
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 206 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/7/2003
Puppet master by dead reviews
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 364 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/16/2003
Baby Understand by Raine Lionheart
A poem about abuse on women and children. As stupid as it may seem, I was inspired by a few boys tossing around a doll.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 189 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/19/2003
HangMan Grievances by Raine Lionheart reviews
Play a game of Hang-Man and wonder what the hanged man feels. PG for language.
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 1 - Published: 5/2/2003
Realization by Kara's Krissy reviews
Dark...very dark...don't say I didn't warn you...
Poetry: General - Rated: M - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,636 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 2/18/2003
One of the Guys by Tasha Bean reviews
*COMPLETED* What happens when you fall for your best friend and you don't even know it?
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 16 - Words: 22,260 - Reviews: 200 - Favs: 53 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 11/29/2002 - Published: 7/23/2002 - Complete
Pains Fealty by JoyfullyStruggling reviews
All of the scars don't ammount...To all the dried tears I can count....
Poetry: General - Rated: M - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 508 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/27/2002
We Share by Dabide reviews
Just read it, this is perhaps one of the undepressed poems I wrote, only because I just had an emotional conversation. Anyways, read.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 3 - Published: 11/15/2002
Questions by Sesen ObsidianMoon reviews
Love. Deceit. Suicide.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 185 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 2 - Published: 10/10/2002
The Yellow Ribbon by Genevieve Sente reviews
I really didn't know what to rate this. It has some violence. I guess it's somewhere between PG13 and R. Review it please i really need suggestions.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 4,226 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 2 - Published: 10/5/2002
Apathy by Impressionist reviews
Craving what I can't have...not yet anyway. I want out.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 16 - Favs: 3 - Published: 9/19/2002
Hokey Pokey Theory by KaiBee reviews
People search so hard for answers that they overlook what's right in front of them.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 167 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/16/2002
Saturate by Machiavellina reviews
Razor's kiss, such sinful bliss...
Poetry: General - Rated: M - English - Angst/Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 2 - Published: 4/10/2002
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Backhand reviews
From February.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/25/2009 - Complete
Overflow reviews
Maybe there's a chance for me...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/6/2008 - Complete
PillowTalk
I hope it amounts to something more.
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 283 - Published: 12/2/2007 - Complete
Four Months At Sea reviews
Four months of calm seas.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/29/2007 - Complete
Taking Care of Others
There is a reason.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Published: 6/12/2007
Waist Deep
Not good enough for who it was written for. I'll probably do something with this later.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Published: 6/7/2007
Return reviews
This was written in September of last year, I guess the last time he came back, or second to last. I had to rewrite it before I posted it but I think it ended up alright.
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 199 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/9/2006
Left Undone reviews
When nothing is done, nothing is left undone.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/30/2006
Allegation
A stream-of-consciousness, internally-rhyming pseudo-slam, same subject as "Second Best" and the rest. Most of it holds true to my situation... Updated: I changed the ending, which essentially changed the meaning.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 279 - Published: 2/2/2006
Close For Comfort reviews
An old subject with a new twist...
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2/2/2006
Second Best reviews
Some after-the-fact reflection on a rather odd relationship I'm currently in. Same subject as a few of my recent ones, but obviously further along, and near the end, of the relationship.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 306 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/23/2005
Vacant Eyes reviews
About manipulation, I guess. Kind of unoriginal.
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/3/2005
No One In View reviews
A emo-structured, emotional poem about Katia.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/7/2005
Throwing Away A Good Thing
This angry poem does not in any way suite the romantically dramatic mood of the given situation. There was no anger expressed, but I am angry. And now it's my turn to speak.
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 290 - Published: 11/2/2005
OutSubmissived reviews
A bit of a funky rhyme, the first line based on something I thought of quite a while ago. What if the power struggle is to see who can be more submissive, instead of the other way around.
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/15/2005
Show Me How Strong You Are
Another one of the "Finger Poems" (like the Lakes), the title being something he said to me. Some true and some not, a little rhyme going on there at the end.
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 196 - Published: 10/15/2005
People Are So Easy reviews
Honest seems to be the common theme. A bit like 40/80 but slightly disorganized. I also made up a word.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 165 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10/8/2005
Midnight Girl reviews
The completed midnight girl fic. A story about miscommunication- where there could have been so much more- and second chances.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,205 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/29/2005
Matyr
A wordy explanation of not being able to let go, or move on, or do anything healthy in terms of a past relationship. Inspired by her despair, instead of mine, she is the matyr, and I have the sickly yellow skin.
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 238 - Published: 9/7/2005
Ill Intent
After weeks of not writing, this suddenly hit me at around 3:30 in the morning. The subject matter sounds a bit like the beginning of "Fake It:, though it was not written with the same person in mind. But that's not important- the poem is.
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Published: 8/31/2005
Fake It reviews
"I hate her because she wanted love and I could do nothing more than fake it." A bit of post-mortem drabble; the ideas don't fit together but it has kind of a sick lullaby feeling in my head.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 202 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7/26/2005
All Summer reviews
A reflection on the school year. I guess I'm sort of mocking myself here. This was my initial reaction to graduating, feeling as though my summer will be pleasantly the same.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7/5/2005
Equated reviews
I know where this came from, but it's still really odd. A bit of a science twist to some old feelings. Who knew you could find such emotion in textbooks?
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/5/2005
Sight And Sound
It's not exactly love poetry. I wrote this about a person who inspired me, in more ways than one, and it went through more revisions than usual. Hope you enjoy the finished product...
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 227 - Published: 6/14/2005
Always in the Afterglow
A short bit that reflects the feelings of two characters in some of my original fiction. I wrote it few weeks ago and never got around to posting it, andI keep hearing some of the lines in my head.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 95 - Published: 5/30/2005
All I Wanted reviews
A short bit that is completely impersonal, written from some other person's view. I don't know who. I didn't ask much, only that you come home on time...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 111 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5/5/2005
Bending Straws reviews
Actually two poems, but they were both about the same event so I put them together. I don't especially like them but there's no reason not to post them. She was bending straws with her hands, while I knew the holes on the wall were my fault...
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/5/2005
I Surrender reviews
More emo ranting. I'm not going to defend myself...it seems to be what I expect of me but I wish I could just say... "I surrender."
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 191 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/27/2005
Drifters
For some reason I'm doing everything in threes. These are poems that I wrote separate from one another, but they'll all about the same thing- just from different points of view. Very entertaining.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 147 - Published: 4/14/2005
TradeOffs
Very incriminating poetry here. I don't think I've ever written in this form before but it wasn't difficult at the time. I wrote this after a rather boring conversation with an old lover; a different one, this time.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 382 - Published: 4/14/2005
Smother Me
Three stories, completely unrelated to each other. They were just some random ideas that I was smart enough to write down when I thought of them.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 212 - Published: 4/14/2005
Livewire
Some unoriginal rhyming in response to a rendezvous with an old lover. Common and short but somewhat melodic, please read.
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Published: 4/14/2005
Mercy Of Your Words reviews
My feelings on how I wish certain people I liked would be more openly passionate, especially in speech. If I had it my way I would extract this kind of beauty from them. Kind of an encompassing theme, please read.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/3/2005
Abandon Formality reviews
Another little fantasy. My thoughts on how it might happen...well, it's fun to imagine.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/3/2005
Strive
I'm sorry, I'm just so full of love. For my lovely infatuation, and our night alone. Also: The title, that word, seems to mean a lot in this situation. I'll probably use it again.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 184 - Published: 3/21/2005
Ceceilia reviews
Love poetry again, this time about my Ceceilia. I see her in the halls sometimes but just yesterday I realized that every girl is a Ceceilia.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/21/2005
Fifth Time Around reviews
...And this one was written just after I saw him, at three in the morning. Some things never change.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 188 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/17/2005
I'll Remember For the Both of Us reviews
A bit of reminiscing about an old boyfriend, written just before I saw him that weekend.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/17/2005
What More Is There? reviews
I wrote this in response to a poem my own father wrote almost thirty years ago. This was my birthday gift to him.
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/14/2005
White Room
This could be considered a goodbye poem because I doubt the person it was written for will ever want to speak to me again. I was finally honest with her, and this is sort of a summary of my grievances. "You keep your room sealed for him..."
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 209 - Published: 3/1/2005
Just For Fun reviews
I wish I had some idea where the heck this came from. Probably from the point of view of a girl. She speaks, devoid of emotion, of a seemingly notorious act that involves a lot of cleanup.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 172 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/26/2005
Hesitate
I prefer the beginning of this one to the rest of it. Unfortunately, the person who it was written for misinterpreted it upon reading it, probably because of pre-formed ideas. So you could say this is a damaging poem...
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Published: 2/15/2005
40 80 Part Two reviews
The first one was under school, and this one is under life. I use his policy sort of as a catalyst, but I'm really commenting on things I find more important than an English assignment at points in my life...enjoy.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2/15/2005
40 80 reviews
The reference to '40-80' has to do with my English teacher's new late policy, which is 40 points off for one day late, and 80 for two. The poem doesn't have to do with that policy so much, but it's rather a collection of thoughts with little form.
Poetry: School - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2/10/2005
I'll Be Fine reviews
A bit of rhyme after a long day. It was forced at the beginning but I was pleased with the way it turned out, considering. I also was surprised because I reached a conclusion through this poem, and that hasn't happened in a while.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2/5/2005
Sense of Security reviews
A slam. Finally. It's too painful to think of all the good in everything we had, and because of his actions I am obligated to hate him. This slam explains how I'll do it.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 312 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1/29/2005
Why She'll Leave You reviews
Why do I always write my poems in twos? This poem is not based on my relationship with anyone but rather from an idea I had regarding an outsider's view from a few years ago. So don't go nuts.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 91 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1/29/2005
Blood reviews
I happen to like this piece very much, but I've had mixed reviews from friends. A very disturbing relationship between a player and a freak. Well, maybe they're both freaks.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 229 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/17/2005
Something New reviews
I echo a friend's comment that there should be a "Lust" category. I do realize that I have a piece entitled "Someone New" but I couldn't think of an alternate title. I like to think we all have a little same-sex lust within us.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1/17/2005
Brand New reviews
More love poetry. I have some kind of funky rhyme scheme going on in the middle but you'll get it. This is me marveling at feeling so awkward and foolish when I would usually feel normal in the same situation.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1/2/2005
You Bring This About reviews
This is the poem that I "wasn't going to post"; the one that "Coutenance" was written and in fact, named for. This one really isn't sick and dripping, as Countenance suggests, but I was sick with passion when I wrote it.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12/18/2004
Countenance reviews
It makes me sick. I couldn't post the poem this was written for, but mainly because I didn't like it. It needs work.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 40 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12/16/2004
Confusion reviews
Normally I do not give such obvious titles, but there really wasn't another possibility. It works well. Confusion is contagious, especially hers.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 12/16/2004
Weak reviews
More like prose than anything. I wish you would stop worrying, even though I know it's in your nature. This is the most encompassing of the three poems; many themes are mentioned but not elaborated on.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 197 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12/11/2004
Supplication reviews
In this poem and the other two that were written with it (Anything But and Weak), I talk about this person's eyes a lot, even though in this one it speaks of them differently. I find that I can't answer her silent questions...is it my own fault?
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/11/2004
Anything But Myself reviews
I thought of the first line when I was with the person that this poem is about. However, although some of the themes spoken of in this are from my experience, the rest is dramatized and not true, especially the last line.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/11/2004
Excess reviews
Written when I was attempting to let go of someone in order to focus on another person much closer to me. This is like a theme song of my life...
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/11/2004
Duality reviews
Sort of surreal; not really sure where it came from. I happen to like this one a lot, and th third stanza took a long time to get right. There are two sides to every person...
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/7/2004
Next To Me reviews
The second one written about someone I met at camp last summer (the other is Live from the floor; this one is better). I was surprised I hadn't posted this because I really like it and it's just been sitting there. Here for you finally...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 279 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/24/2004
A Future Far Removed reviews
This came out one day when I thought of several things that could happen in the future. The last stanza was written at a different time and therefore sounds totally different from the rest of the poem. Enjoy anyway.
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/24/2004
Haunt reviews
The first line was based off of this same poem attempted almost a month ago. It began impersonal, but that went to hell. Someone forgets you, and you wish that they would suddenly remember, and be haunted.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/21/2004
Worth It reviews
The topic of energy came up one night, and this came out of it. You can spend all your energy on someone before questioning whether they're even worth it. The answer to the question posed in this is "yes", unfortunately.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/21/2004
Live From the Floor of the Movement Studio reviews
The title is rather comical considering the serious and angsty nature of this poem. I will say in its defense that I think it's appropriately angsty. It has a tune, almost like a Mandy Moore song, but it has a nice personal touch and is worth a read.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 261 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/15/2004
Dreams Overcome reviews
The truth has to hit us at one time or another. There are two kinds of dreams: those you achieve and those that you need to forget, lest they overcome you.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/29/2004
Those Hands reviews
Very sentimental, in my own special way. Someone insightful may be able to understand what kind of person this is about, but you really dont' want to know. God, I love those hands...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/2/2004
Monday Morning III reviews
Another Monday Morning. This one certainly came out better than the second. From 5/10/04.
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,042 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/28/2004
You Just Ain't Worth My Time reviews
The funny thing about this one is that it could apply to any of 3 guys who I've previously written before, although it was meant for one person. I've also written on this theme before, but read anyway.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 269 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/18/2004
Rapist's Row reviews
A short poem based on this area of trees at the back of my development. It scares the crap out of me whenever I walk by there, so I wrote about it. Enjoy.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/18/2004
Backstabber reviews
A little something, based off of a poem I read called "She Had Three Days". Same idea, but I recall not liking something about it, so I wrote this. She's the girl we all hate...
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 134 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/18/2004
Too Many Times reviews
I don't know. Probably the most hateful thing I've written in a long time. It's not that good, because it's so honest. No poetic beating around the bush. And the formatting isn't messed up, by the way: I actually wrote it like that. Enjoy.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 438 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/5/2004
It's Always Coming reviews
Written late at night, so some ideas run together. You should understand the main idea, though, and possibly relate. He asked me, "How could you not see this coming" I told him, "Of course I saw it coming. It's always coming."
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 266 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/15/2004
No Question reviews
I feel let down, but only by myself. Mea Culpa.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 267 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/2/2004
Don't You Love America? reviews
Somewhat anti-war, but it's not really a war we're fighting, is it? More in response to current events in Haiti, with references to Vietnam, Iraq, and the like. Enjoy!
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 268 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 2 - Published: 2/27/2004
Understand reviews
I updated it because it got accepted into my school's literary magazine. This is one of my favorites. Don't let the last line confuse you,
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/5/2004
Just Like Me reviews
Only spiritual because of who the narrator is talking to. I originally thought this too crude to post, but I've grown rather attached to it. Update: This actually got accepted to my school's literary magazine. They must have not gotten it at all.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 220 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1/20/2004
Megan reviews
I only said this was supernatural because it's kind of nature-y. I don't know. I had to redo this one a bit to make the idea of Wind stand out, and as a result it doesn't flow as well. Besides that, I don't like how it starts, but it's still worth a read.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 180 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/20/2004
Put It On Paper reviews
I put it on paper, just like he asked me to.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 384 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/29/2003
Past Tense reviews
I realized as I was writing this that what I was saying isn't true, except for maybe the end. I think he is now more of an foundation for me to build (or write) poetry off of, instead of him being the subject. Well, thanks anyway.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/23/2003
Conjugation 101 reviews
I was looking through my old poems and I found this one and liked it so much that I dropped everything to post it. It's really just a whole page of saying the same thing, but it's kind of creepy. Not a clue where the title or content came from.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 235 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/17/2003
A Thousand Ways: A Monologue reviews
A short monologue about a dream.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 175 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/10/2003
Adrianna and Me reviews
A woman discusses life with her girlfriend in NYC. So far, the introduction to what I hope will become a story...but not without your reviews!
Fiction: Romance - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 337 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/10/2003
Heartstop reviews
You can still feel for someone even after you've said goodbye. This one goes along with "Ducat For His Pains" in an ironic way, because in this one, I promise to not speak to him. Ducat was the result of me breaking that promise.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 68 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/10/2003
Ducat For His Pains reviews
"They frequently climb up the masts to see whether they can see a whale, for the first discoverer has a ducat for his pains." (A Voyage to Greenland)
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10/13/2003
Maybe Today reviews
Something I thought of when I was about to fall asleep. Finally, a new slam! It's more like a monologue but it can go either way. A short little "I Wish" bit with an uphill ending. Review...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 185 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10/11/2003
Without A Word reviews
Have you ever felt like you didn't need to speak?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9/26/2003
Down reviews
I got the idea for this while scanning the list of my favorite stories...go figure. It's one of those poems where I decide what it's about after I start writing it.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 155 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/22/2003
Phone Call reviews
I don't know what to caterogize this one under, but since there are a lot of references to a relationship, I put it as Friendship/Romance. It ends rather abruptly, but read it anyway.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 140 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/14/2003
Step Out reviews
A special night, and a special person who unknowingly gave me much needed inspiration to write this.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 297 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/5/2003
Night Of The Desdemonia: Game Intro reviews
This is the general intro to a game that I'm writing, hopefully to be used in my theatre/roleplay camp. Review, please.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Supernatural/Adventure - Chapters: 1 - Words: 737 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9/5/2003
Mailer Daemon reviews
A girl talks about her best friends not returning her emails. This one's interesting because I wrote it from a friend's point of view, but in the future. Clicky clicky!
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 128 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7/8/2003
Always You reviews
Another romance/drama poem about guess who, but it's not as angsty and in my opinion, has a decent theme going. Forgive the repitition, but at least I can spell.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 329 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7/8/2003
The Things I've Learned reviews
Just a little school-teaches-me-nothing sort of thing, but I thought I'd post it anyway. Check it out.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 183 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7/8/2003
The Lot reviews
I didn't write this for English class, but our unit on metaphor poems certainly influenced it.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 193 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/8/2003
Our Hands reviews
Selected parts of a 3+ page poem I wrote. I wasn't going to post it at all, but I like the ending and the whole hands metaphor.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 283 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/7/2003
No More reviews
So here's my words to you: No More...you've stopped trying. One of my oldest and favorite poems I wrote about him. Please comment, it means a lot.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 309 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/12/2003
Deceit reviews
A slam about a guy betraying my trust, and my threat towards him. I can't say I would have actually carried out the threat, but I was considering it at the time.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 164 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/11/2003
Bruise reviews
A poem of sorts. This was written the day after he hit me, so you can still sense a lot of anger in it.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5/11/2003
Surroundings reviews
A series of short poems composed regarding the people I surround myself with...sort of a look at what my friends are like/were. Please review, because this is something new for me.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 305 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/11/2003
In My Head reviews
Sorry, my format keeps getting messed up. An explanation of why I held on to him for so long. Also for anyone who just can't let go...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 166 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/28/2003
Rage Rants reviews
I explain why I break promises to other people. It's my rage...just let it be. Disclaimer: Although I mean what I say, don't take anything the wrong way. It's just this rage within me...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 481 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/25/2003
One Hour Act reviews
I went with my grandma to church on Easter Sunday, and this is what came out of it. Everything has become artificial, because it's easier that way.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4/25/2003
A Meu Irmão reviews
Don't worry, it's in English... I had this dream that he died. This was written while I was still recovering from that one. It sounds like he's going to war, but that wasn't the dream. Then it turns into a reflection. Read...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 179 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/25/2003
HyperDistillation reviews
My little piece about Columbia- this is me talking to the researchers and scientists who were behind that mission. I didn't know what else to call it. Sorry, I know the rhythm is messed up, but read it anyway.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Tragedy/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/10/2003
Just For Show reviews
A new slam that I'm very proud of. Please read and review this one! It's similiar to Rag, but it talks about it in a different sense.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 193 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/2/2003
The Chemistry Song reviews
A completely true slam about how Chemistry CC is in our school. Rewritten in poem form for your enjoyment.
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 234 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/2/2003
Someone New reviews
Based on someone else's point of view (surprise!) which has now been proved entirely untrue. So don't rag on me for a disclaimer. A guy wonders why he's falling for someone else...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/2/2003
Untitled reviews
Another short one, based on someone I know falling for a guy I once did, too.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 4/2/2003
The Last Mile reviews
A poem that started out as some sort of analogy and ended up anti-war. Don't ask. Not a very good one, but interesting anyway.
Poetry: War - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/2/2003
Last Tear reviews
This one is a really sad, really personal one...maybe the most personal yet. When I read it aloud, the chorus and the end are sung. Please tell me how you feel about this one.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 377 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/26/2003
My Pledge of Allegiance reviews
I never say the pledge anymore, not just because of the war but also because of the hypocrisy and meaninglessness behind it.
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 62 - Reviews: 16 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/26/2003
Hush reviews
Third anti-war one. Really short but to the point. Please read and don't use my review board as a place to have a pro vs anti-war argument.
Poetry: War - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 83 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3/26/2003
Moving On reviews
Courtesy of the breakup. Yeah, I went out with him again. 4 days this time, not bad. This is also for anyone who just CAN'T LET GO.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 197 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/26/2003
To Julius reviews
Terrible, but personal.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 279 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/26/2003
He Knows Me reviews
Ever feel as if someone you love just knows you completely? This may apply to you...One of those 'monologues' I said I wasn't posting. Oh well.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 171 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/26/2003
Remedy reviews
My second anti-war poem, just in time for war. (10:30 pm 3 19 03) This one is more directed towards Bush than See What I See, and it talks more about home issues. It's actually quite short...read!
Poetry: War - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 94 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/19/2003
Rendezvous: A Monologue
A monologue. This was the third thing I wrote in a series of poems and monologues all about the same person. Sorry I'm not posting the other two-too personal...I guess this one is too.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 300 - Published: 3/18/2003
Special Things
A poem I wrote for someone, originally posted as "The breaking of I promise I 'never made' to you". I have no idea what I meant at the time, but I know how I felt.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 249 - Published: 3/7/2003
For Dad reviews
Happy Birthday, daddy...
Poetry: Family - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 154 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/4/2003
A Typical Page From My Notebook
This is usually what a page from my writing notebook looks like. There's a new poem and a song on here, so it isn't all bull...
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 220 - Published: 3/4/2003
What I Was Waiting For
Another song with one of my tunes. Just read it.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 190 - Published: 3/3/2003
See What I See reviews
My anti-war poem. I gotta have one to express what I think. READ THE AUTHOR'S NOTE BEFORE REVIEWING. review for the poetry, not the ideas!
Poetry: War - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 464 - Reviews: 10 - Published: 3/3/2003
Lamentation
I couldn't think of a better title. I said I post everything, and that's true-which is why this one is up. It's just a basic verse with a tune I had stuck in my head. R&R.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Published: 3/3/2003
My Valentine's Day
Don't let the title scare you off. I wouldn't bore you with how my V Day went. These are just my views on the manufactured holiday we all love so damn much.
Fiction: Humor - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 214 - Published: 3/1/2003
Bring Me To Life reviews
My expansion on Killing Scene. I think I know where I'm going with this, and the title is from the song by Evanescence. Becky, a "selective assassin", is the main character. That's all I can say. R&R
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Drama - Chapters: 3 - Words: 1,666 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 3/1/2003 - Published: 2/8/2003
Rhyming Conformity
It's about conformity. It rhymes. I don't especially like this one but I usually post everything alright, so there you go.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Published: 2/27/2003
This Is Real reviews
Yeah, it rhymes, but in a weird way. I think you'll like it...please read and review. You won't understand unless you've been through the same, and even then...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/27/2003
First Time reviews
I changed the title because it doesn't matter who knows about it now. You should get it. If you don't, you've probably never experienced it, at least the way I did.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/25/2003
Ice reviews
An interesting yet possibly immature analogy. Read.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/25/2003
Taciturn reviews
A haunting start to my newest story. I was going to call it Silent, but I already had a poem called that. I'm not sure where I'm taking this, but please read and review.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 227 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/25/2003
It's Just You reviews
It's just him. It always is. Read.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 202 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/16/2003
The Girl reviews
A slam. Guys, I know slams are harder to read when written in proper form, but make the attempt. It's not that long. And I like this one.
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 168 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/16/2003
Justified Melody reviews
Weird title. See if you can guess what I'm talking about. I meant to make it confusing. r/r.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 116 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/6/2003
Someone Who Cares
Although I don't feel quite this way anymore, I am not a fan of taking poetry off my site. I post what I think is good, not just to get a message across.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 250 - Published: 2/6/2003
So Simple
Most of you can relate to this. It talks about how yesterday always seemed so much simpler, and how we can't get that back. Please review...
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 221 - Published: 2/6/2003
Misplaced reviews
What do you get when you cross a tall, skinny, black J-Rocker with a Walgreens cosmetics counter? Ha ha...you don't.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 96 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/3/2003
Disappointment
My song (yes, it has a tune) to someone I know that I'm not allowed to say is my friend. Can't you already tell how immature she is? My thoughts on one of her more recent plans.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Published: 2/3/2003
My Winter State reviews
Just an idea I had. Can't wait for winter state...
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/3/2003
We, Your Friends reviews
This was based off of things I am feeling and something that one of my friends said. Whoever needs to get it will get it. Otherwise, just look at it universally and review.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 444 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/3/2003
RAGE reviews
Something happened last night that caused me to write this, and a lot of other f***** up stuff, which I'm also posting. I really do feel this way, and it feels like it'll be the same all this week. Rated for swearing.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 2/3/2003
For You
I wrote this back in November, on the day one of my guy friends collapsed during lunch. This is only the third poem I have written concerning this guy- I didn't like it when I wrote it but I guess it's OK.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 184 - Published: 2/3/2003
Hypocrite reviews
Sort of an extension of how I feel about our reaction to the attacks. I know some of you will be offended, very offended, but I can't stop my views from forming. This is not bias or judgemental or anything, just how I feel. Rewritten in poem form.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 208 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1/31/2003
Where You Used To Be reviews
This is based off a freaky tune I kept hearing in my head, written in the first journal entry of a writing book I'm keeping. Pretty basic, but meant to be meaningful. At least to me.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/31/2003
Change reviews
Some mature themes. About what has been going on, and what I am trying to do. Debuted today in women's group, then slam. Now it's here for you.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 186 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1/28/2003
Let Me Fall reviews
About a new guy. Sort of exaggerated feelings on our relationship. I almost mean what I say. I would love to be under his power.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1/27/2003
Tell Me You Love Me
Two parts. Two completely different ideas. Both written in women's group. Read.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 239 - Published: 1/27/2003
Scars reviews
Still Alive, Still Burning Inside, and Nothing to Hide.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 113 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 1/27/2003
Rag
You do it all the time...bring me drag me down. Genievieve likes this one. So do I. It's a slam, written in original form.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 200 - Published: 1/27/2003
Transformation reviews
We expect things to change. A friend argued that it's quite the opposite; we want things to stay the same but they change.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/27/2003
First Slam reviews
First slam I ever wrote. Short. Read.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 73 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/27/2003
Poetry Is My Outlet: A Slam reviews
The second slam I ever wrote, this first I'm posting. I put this together with two of my friend's slams that they wrote for this occasion, and we presented it in Club. That woke them up.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 321 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1/20/2003
For Love of the Game reviews
A small town where a certain game is played for fun...and maybe for other things too. The question is, will the players be able to value their lives above their love for the game? Please review and tell me what you think. (Flames welcome)
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Suspense - Chapters: 6 - Words: 3,833 - Reviews: 6 - Updated: 1/8/2003 - Published: 1/5/2003
Here Again reviews
I think this is the second poem I ever wrote from my idea of a guy's point of view, and the first it was from the POV from my idea of a SPECIFIC guy's point of view. Is this important? Whatever, just read.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 261 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1/2/2003
I Come to Your Window reviews
I go to his window because I want to see him again.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/23/2002
Look At Me reviews
**This is a good one, in my opinion. Please tell me what you think. A sort of reflection with mixed ideas...to one of my guys. I understand a lot of things I didn't before, and in this I am telling him to look at me.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 286 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/23/2002
Diary Of My Soul reviews
The story of my lost notebook is revealed...well, not really, but this is a sort of angsty poem about it, written in a rhyming scheme that I can only hear in my head. Heh.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 169 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/23/2002
Second Writing Streak reviews
Reposted because I WANT REVIEWS ON AT LEAST THE FIRST ONE!!! These were all written within 20 minutes of each other on the events of..um.. some day, the date's on the poems...PLEASE REVIEW, IT MEANS A LOT!
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 4 - Words: 828 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/22/2002
Twisted Universe reviews
A twist on those poems telling you to succeed and all that fun stuff. Review...pleeeease!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/21/2002
Reflections reviews
This was originally written for one person, but as I was typing it I realized it could apply to one of two, or maybe even three people. Isn't that messed up. Please read and tell me if this hits home for any of you.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12/21/2002
It's A Little Too Late reviews
This is a weird one...it's a poem from my idea of someone else's point of view, but it's someone that I know very well. In the poem, this girl is talking to another friend that I know. Whatever, you'll get it.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 342 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12/17/2002
Seraphim and Terroth reviews
A poem I wrote about my personal demons that I have recently turned away from. Yes, I did make up BS demons for myself. It was actually kind of fun.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 147 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 12/17/2002
Cold, Lost, Broken reviews
Short. Just a few ideas thrown together, nothing much. There's a poem called broken promises that goes with this, but I don't like it too much so I won't post it.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/12/2002
You Told Me To reviews
This is one of the best I've written in a long time, in my opinion. Please read and review, it means a lot!
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 239 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/8/2002
The Weekend Without Him reviews
The question I ask in this one is whose fault the breakup is. I don't really think this way, I just thought I'd write about it. Please read and review
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 307 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/7/2002
Remember Me reviews
One of the few that does not pertain to me. I just felt like writing this after reading a few stories from Chicken Soup for the Soul. please review.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 199 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/6/2002
This Is Where It Ends For Me reviews
Yet another from the breakup. This is definetely more angsty. I'm posting this after the problem was solved-dated 12/4.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/6/2002
Forgiveness reviews
Short. I just needed to post this.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 57 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12/6/2002
Believe In Me reviews
Another one courtesy of the breakup. More of a reflection than anything.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 228 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/5/2002
So Distracted reviews
My boyfriend broke up with me today. It isn't permanent, I'm just having some issues, but breakups are supposedly a good fuel for writing.Still,it was a while before I could write this one...
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 198 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/4/2002
Story Intro reviews
Something I thought about before I went to bed. I don't know where it came from. I also didn't know what catergory to put this under, because it is sort of surreal. I happen to like this a lot, please read and review.
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 215 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 12/4/2002
We Saw It Coming reviews
The second of the two poems. More of a reflection on our friendship, really. Whatever, just read.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 238 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/28/2002
Do You Ever Wonder? reviews
The first of two poems to a sort of ex-friend. Read please!
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 126 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/28/2002
I Needed You reviews
'What's the fun of something if you know it'll always be there?" This was in reflection to a poem my friend Dabide wrote. PS Check out his stuff too! ;) R&R
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/28/2002
And Not reviews
Inspired by my best friend, who is mentioned, when she didn't seem to get what was happening. I know she did but I was pretty upset then. Written the day after that fateful Sunday, Dated 11/18.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 158 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11/26/2002
Mine and Yours reviews
Reposted...the reason I took it off is because people were about to find out what it meant...but now the truth is out and the damage has been done, so it hardly matters. An interesting one, about the events of two Sundays ago. Dated 11/17.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 345 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/26/2002
Daughter of a Murderer reviews
About the daughter of a murderer, hence the name, written in the first person. It gets confusing near the end but you should get it. 11/16/02
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 219 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11/16/2002
The Ringing Bells reviews
This one's short...it's about almost every teenager's high school experience, and my reflections on it. Or something like that. Odd form, please read.
Poetry: School - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 139 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11/15/2002
Alive reviews
A short poem I wrote after midnight on the 10th. This one is obviously about my boyfriend, the No More and My Boyfriend guy. Yep. Review, please.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 105 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11/11/2002
My Side reviews
A poem I wrote after midnight-I was feeling rather confused and I just took some aspirin. Nothing much else to say, you'll get it. Dated 11/8/02.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Suspense - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/9/2002
Just a Friend reviews
A song I wrote a long time ago. It isn't particularly good, but I could start singing this in Slam Poetry and it would apply to every girl in there. It was pretty fun...R&R please.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 250 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11/7/2002
Winter Break
A friend commented that a lot of my poems had to do with things no one else understands. I suppose this is true, and writing this one doesn't prove anything, but I wrote this for him, written in the 2nd person. review please...
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 143 - Published: 11/5/2002
Silent reviews
In latin, i got mad at someone and stopped speaking, but then i got all tripped out and it was like i COULDNT talk. i wrote this just before i got my voice back in 4th block. 11/4/02. please r and r
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 161 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/4/2002
Denying What I Know reviews
from my POV this time, to the same guy that 'only so much' is to. but i honestly dont know where it came from, because it doesnt have anything to do with the current big problem, only the smaller ones surrounding it. you know, forget it. just read.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 227 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/31/2002
Anime Club reviews
i wrote this in, well, anime club, after speculating on how much the club has changed since last year. it's upsetting, the situation i mean. i think ill go yell at those freshman-they dont even know what anime is.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 411 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10/30/2002
Pink Bunnies reviews
A friend in slam poetry club challenged us to write a happy poem 'about pink bunnies' since all our poems were dark and dreary. the next week, two others besides me came in with poems almost identical to this one. sort of a rant...
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10/30/2002
Angelo's Song reviews
another one from a guy's point of view, this one someone specific that i actually know, speaking about his ex. dated 10/16.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10/30/2002
All This Pain reviews
Maybe that isn't the right title, because it isnt too much of a depressing poem. I wanted to write this on the bus, when I felt awful, but I didnt write it until 4th block. Please R&R Dated 10/22
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 191 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10/23/2002
You'll Never Believe Me reviews
I would have to say that regardless of all those sad guy poems I wrote, this has got to be the most personal one yet. It's so personal, in fact, that I don't even know why I'm posting this. But enjoy it nonetheless...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 330 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/22/2002
Only So Much reviews
I wrote this in the library, after some upsetting events of that day. Not about the same guy as the other poems... Dated 10/9.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 207 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/10/2002
We Went to See Mama Today reviews
A narrative written from a little boy's point of view. He goes to visit his Mama in the hospital...
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 319 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10/8/2002
Not Enough to Kill Me reviews
If you read most of my other things, you might realize this sounds a lot like Once. Same idea, same format. But I still think it's good...please read and review.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 422 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Published: 10/8/2002
Poser Boy reviews
Something I thought of in English based on a guy I was looking at. Very short, also 9/30
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 109 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10/8/2002
Dark Room reviews
A little something I wrote, the first two lines inspired by a poem my friend wrote. Dated 9/30
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 110 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10/8/2002
Letter to the Editor reviews
Can i post things like this under 'fiction'? Oh well. I wrote this and it actually got published in my town's newspaper. It was in response to a BS gym-is-so-educational article.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 467 - Reviews: 9 - Published: 10/7/2002
My Name Orgin reviews
An assignment I had to do for biology (don't ask)...contains the story of my name and all that. The 2nd of 3 I will be posting that was written in a certain style of writing. Please R&R.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K+ - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 568 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/7/2002
Uncommitted reviews
I suppose I could call this 'Uncommitted' but it's another one of my old poems and I never considered titling it until now. Another of the few that do not pertain to me, even though my Slam Poetry friends thought it did...please R&R
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 176 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/6/2002
Nothing reviews
Left my notebook at school...very p.o'ed but i typed this onto my computer. This poem was based off of a dream i had, where i read one of my friend's poems and i remembered the first two lines when i woke up. Please R&R.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 267 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 10/5/2002
I Was Wrong reviews
Short poem...written last June, i think. please r&r.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9/29/2002
They All End This Way reviews
I typed this one right onto my computer, cuz my notebook wasn't handy. I was upset and I made myself eat, hence the first line. I posted this before but took it off because it is the most personal poem i wrote about that guy. But i guess it's ok now...r&r
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 329 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9/28/2002
Maystorm reviews
A teenage girl struggles with choices after finding out her best friend is cheating on her close guy friend. Based on a true story. Rated for mild sexual references and swearing...i think.Read and review guys its my first post!!!
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Suspense/Romance - Chapters: 15 - Words: 9,559 - Reviews: 14 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 9/27/2002 - Published: 9/15/2002
Consequence reviews
A poem I wrote from a guy's point of view. Just an idea I had-it's short and i might expand on it someday, but who knows.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 122 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9/27/2002
What I Had To Give reviews
I like, just wrote this...it sounds better i think when it's read aloud. I know the rhythm is off but i usually dont pay much attention to that. This is one of my favorites, i dont know why.Written 9/21/02
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 202 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9/21/2002
Once reviews
A story behind this one-it was inspired by a person I met and liked at camp-thats where the 3rd stanza comes from. I posted this upon the request of my friend/therapist, who actually liked it. I thought it could be better, but here it is anyway.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 235 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9/20/2002
Monday Morning reviews
**I found out recently that this was written the Monday before September 11th. Thanks Katia! No wonder I didn't finish it... This is a true story of the events of what happened one Monday morning. I never finished.
Fiction: Humor - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,123 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 9/20/2002
Connection
Confusing. It's about the same guy as My Boyfriend and No More...but written before both of them, I think. Review please...
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 313 - Published: 9/20/2002
Children's Wing reviews
One of my 8 poems that I wrote on an unexpected writing streak after a slam poetry meeting-the only one of those 8 that i'm posting, in fact. See if you get it...
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/20/2002
Another Chance reviews
A poem written to my ex-best friend, written in reflection. Undated
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 191 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/20/2002
Best Friend reviews
One of my oldest poems and still one of my favorites. The thing about this one that is special is that it is one of the few I wrote that didn't pertain to me at all. Review please!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 260 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9/20/2002
I Smile reviews
I was depressed slightly when I wrote this, I guess. It talks about my main reasons for being upset at the time, so it's significant for me. I hope you like it...5/16/02
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 158 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/20/2002
My Boyfriend reviews
To my ex-he wasn't my ex at the time and I didnt entirely mean what I was writing. I think it came out pretty good though...tell me what you think.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9/20/2002
Where Are They? reviews
I suppose most writers have their own poem about September 11th. Well, here's mine, written one year later.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 229 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/18/2002
Darkness reviews
Um...I suppose that's a fitting title. No, there was no typing error; I really do say darkness that many times. Not one of my best, but it still can reflect my mood.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/18/2002