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I write terrible, terrible things and get away with it on the interwebsssss lol
I write poetry, mostly. I post it here in its semi-finished draft form for criticism and your entertainment. I like criticism and shit like that, so send me a PM if you would like to help me out, I will consider what you have to say if it is sound. I will sometimes make a separate chapter of each poem with a revised version, these chapters have no end. I want to improve my abilities as a poet and writer of fiction, and a separate eye is often the key to development in said endeavors.
Word Choice, Meter, Rhythm, Word flow, Sound problems... shit like that.
"You suck". "I don't like your themes". "OMG DIS WUS SO BAD n STuf"
I write how I write, I have my own voice as a writer, and I will only change it so far as long as it benefits the creation (I rather disappear behind my work for the most part). I believe in compromising only to an extent. Some of what I write is complete shit with, perhaps, only a couple salvageable lines (and I often know this before you do). I experiment with writing, structure, themes, sounds (it's music to me), and content, so there is always a new idea in my head waiting to be written.
As of November 23, 2009, everything on this page is all that exists of the hundreds of poems I have written over the course of the past years. Everything else has been lost to a computer virus and there was a mistake in the back up I made. Stuff will come slower now.
November 27, 2009. Our Father's Sins has begun to write itself. I have only small ideas associated with the plot of the story since it is primarily written in a semi- Stream of Consciousness style. It has bad words in it and sexual themes. Have fun with it.
December 3rd, 2009. In my recent reviews of my poems, I have discovered many of their errors, sometimes my ADD kicks in and it becomes difficult for me to focus and then I write stupid lines and make stupid silly mistakes, which are annoying. It is also difficult for me to read my own writing with a critical eye when I am too close to it, or for a better way to say it, when I still remember what I was thinking and I see it on the page whether it is there or not. Therefor, I apologize for many of the errors in my poems, and soon revisions will be done on most of them, while some will disappear because they make me cry every time I look at them, because they are terrible.
December 7th, 2009. I am looking for an editor, someone with insight and a critical eye. Someone with experience in literature. Please send me a PM if you are that person.