Aeternus Temporal
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Joined 10-01-02, id: 275657, Profile Updated: 12-07-09
Author has written 44 stories for Humor, Friendship, Life, Love, General, Religion, and Fantasy.

I write terrible, terrible things and get away with it on the interwebsssss lol

I write poetry, mostly. I post it here in its semi-finished draft form for criticism and your entertainment. I like criticism and shit like that, so send me a PM if you would like to help me out, I will consider what you have to say if it is sound. I will sometimes make a separate chapter of each poem with a revised version, these chapters have no end. I want to improve my abilities as a poet and writer of fiction, and a separate eye is often the key to development in said endeavors.

Sound Criticism:
Word Choice, Meter, Rhythm, Word flow, Sound problems... shit like that.

Unsound Criticism:
"You suck". "I don't like your themes". "OMG DIS WUS SO BAD n STuf"

I write how I write, I have my own voice as a writer, and I will only change it so far as long as it benefits the creation (I rather disappear behind my work for the most part). I believe in compromising only to an extent. Some of what I write is complete shit with, perhaps, only a couple salvageable lines (and I often know this before you do). I experiment with writing, structure, themes, sounds (it's music to me), and content, so there is always a new idea in my head waiting to be written.

Update:
As of November 23, 2009, everything on this page is all that exists of the hundreds of poems I have written over the course of the past years. Everything else has been lost to a computer virus and there was a mistake in the back up I made. Stuff will come slower now.

Update:
November 27, 2009. Our Father's Sins has begun to write itself. I have only small ideas associated with the plot of the story since it is primarily written in a semi- Stream of Consciousness style. It has bad words in it and sexual themes. Have fun with it.

Update:
December 3rd, 2009. In my recent reviews of my poems, I have discovered many of their errors, sometimes my ADD kicks in and it becomes difficult for me to focus and then I write stupid lines and make stupid silly mistakes, which are annoying. It is also difficult for me to read my own writing with a critical eye when I am too close to it, or for a better way to say it, when I still remember what I was thinking and I see it on the page whether it is there or not. Therefor, I apologize for many of the errors in my poems, and soon revisions will be done on most of them, while some will disappear because they make me cry every time I look at them, because they are terrible.

Update:
December 7th, 2009. I am looking for an editor, someone with insight and a critical eye. Someone with experience in literature. Please send me a PM if you are that person.

The Lady of Akai by RedLady reviews
A woman who calls herself a professional demon killer, a paladin, werewolf, vampire, and a necromancer must join forces despite their differences... Humor ActionAdventure story
Fiction: Manga - Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Adventure - Chapters: 55 - Words: 158,375 - Reviews: 412 - Favs: 43 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 9/8/2007 - Published: 6/19/2003 - Complete
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Lady of the Shining Sign
A poem I wrote when I was staying in a cheap hotel on the North Sea in Cuxhaven, Germany.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 256 - Published: 9/26/2010
By Design reviews
Here's your design!
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 262 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/2/2010 - Complete
Nothing to Extol
Title says it all.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 47 - Published: 6/2/2010 - Complete
Bright Future
We all have one, right?
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 142 - Published: 5/23/2010
There are Three
There were three in the primal days and there will be three in the end days. The idea is forever, it doesn't need us.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 115 - Published: 5/10/2010
The Maiden's Weeping reviews
Trying to find a voice.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/30/2010
Purgatory
It seems to be a purgatory, between release and damnation.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Published: 3/30/2010
Let Pass the Age
Make what of it what you will, but the truth of this piece remains set in stone. Chapter two is a previous version.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Chapters: 2 - Words: 483 - Published: 2/2/2010
Ash Tray
Feelings I cannot get away from.
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 157 - Published: 1/14/2010
Dark Conception
Semi-free verse poem with irregular patterns and rhymes. A poem about a half-demon half-human creation from darkness.
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Horror/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 229 - Published: 1/12/2010
When Old Convictions
Draft format right now. A comedy about Vulcan and his misery.
Poetry: Humor - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 145 - Published: 1/3/2010
Worshipped With Ease
Getting away with being a terrible person.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 66 - Published: 1/3/2010
The Show
An Apocalyptic poem. It's an older poem of mine that I ran across one day. It's been revised only a couple times.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/3/2010
When the Sun Comes Out to Play reviews
A life of fleeting nights. Second chapter is a revision/rewriting of the first version.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 2 - Words: 244 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 1/3/2010 - Published: 1/1/2010
Beautiful Soul
A series of sonnets to she who is named the Beautiful Soul. Each is in progress... for as long as it takes them to be perfected.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Published: 12/15/2009
Modern Beauty reviews
Is modern beauty really even modern? And how is beauty displayed? I think this will be the start of a new series of poems to satirize modern definitions of beauty.
Poetry: Humor - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 5 - Words: 660 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 12/15/2009 - Published: 11/29/2009
Religious Tyranny reviews
This has political and religious ideas. My views may offend those who desire an American pro-nationalistic theocracy with religious domination over freethinking people.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/10/2009
Religious Critique reviews
This is bound to anger the religious. Just a heads up to those who are easily offended by differing views.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 230 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 12/10/2009
Mr Despairenger
This is a poem about Mr. Despairenger, he is a sad, sad man. He is just like everyone else on this planet, except more sad... and stuff. Like, look at his name! He is really sad.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 162 - Published: 12/8/2009
Reductio ad Absurdum reviews
What a claim I have made!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/7/2009 - Complete
A Fair of Flowers reviews
This poem is about A Fair.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 184 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 12/7/2009 - Published: 11/9/2009
Spirit Lover reviews
Love that transcends life is not always... so serious.
Poetry: Humor - Rated: M - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/6/2009
Orion reviews
Orion in the sky with blinded eye, shoots arrows.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/6/2009 - Complete
Allow Me
This is what poetry is to me: double meanings, sensual meanings, spiritual meanings, etc... I attempt to figure out, in my own words, what it is to be human through this stuff. It's still in progress.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Published: 11/30/2009
Facebook is Totally Awesome reviews
This is a satire on Facebook and those who use Facebook. Revised version includes Twilight references! ZOMG! Along with twitter and google...
Poetry: Humor - Rated: M - English - Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 684 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Updated: 11/25/2009 - Published: 11/20/2009
Sonnet to Hel
For some reason I find myself attracted to Hel. She's a hottie in my opinion! This is a poem with wide genre coverage. Not just a supernatural romance between a mortal and an underworld goddess.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 112 - Published: 11/22/2009
Virtues of Mot reviews
Mot triumphs over life.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Supernatural/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/22/2009 - Complete
I Fear to Answer
Some kind of stasis from fear.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Published: 11/18/2009 - Complete
Friendship and Stones reviews
There is no difference.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Friendship/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11/16/2009
Was Muss Sein, Sein Muss
What has to be, has to be.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Published: 11/13/2009
Against Neinen
The choice in who to follow. Part of a greater monomyth.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Supernatural/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 210 - Published: 11/13/2009
Namus Anon
A sonnet about being no one.
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 127 - Published: 11/13/2009
Temporary reviews
A poem inspired by the existential ramblings of Mr. Compson in The Sound and the Fury by William Faulkner. It is personal, however, and in the future this will be extended to be more than just a fragment of a greater idea.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/9/2009
Thy Golden Hair reviews
It was pretty, but prettier in flames. 2 chapters included with an alternate line ending.
Poetry: Humor - Rated: T - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 192 - Reviews: 1 - Updated: 11/9/2009 - Published: 11/8/2009
Love on a Grave
A sonnet about a ritualistic, masochistic sex-murder on a gravesite.
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 108 - Published: 11/9/2009
Nec Plus Ultra reviews
Read aloud.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 170 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11/6/2009
Aeternus Temporal reviews
Time is Eternal.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Supernatural - Chapters: 1 - Words: 117 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11/5/2009
We Sit Alone Together reviews
Me an' my campfire.
Poetry: Humor - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/5/2009
I've Known Cheaper Whores reviews
Well, I have...
Poetry: Humor - Rated: M - English - Humor/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/3/2009
Faith and Loyalty reviews
Loss of faith and loyalty.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: T - English - Angst/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/2/2009
Pan reviews
Just a fun little poem about having a "pipe off" with the god Pan.
Poetry: Humor - Rated: T - English - Humor/Fantasy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 417 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/2/2009 - Complete
Companionship, Friendship, Love, and Nihilism reviews
The pointlessness of Human relationships.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/1/2009 - Complete
Love In A Restroom reviews
Man calls a number in a restroom to meet a girl for discrete sexual relations. Adult Humor and situations.
Poetry: Humor - Rated: M - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 233 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/20/2009 - Complete
Pretentious Piece of Poetry reviews
The best poem ever written. Truest story ever.
Poetry: Humor - Rated: T - English - Parody/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 304 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 2/6/2009 - Complete
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