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Joined 11-30-02, id: 302167
Author has written 26 stories for Life, Family, Friendship, Love, Song, Mystery, Fantasy, General, and General.

Jaclyn - Yes, that's me. I'm the author behind all these poems and short stories. I mostly write poems due to my procrastination and lack of creativity when it comes to short stories. I won't say I update often, because I don't. I only update once I get an idea for a poem and that is hardly ever. So feel free to browse through my current and older archive of poems and review. Thanks!

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The Girl Who by Wren Craven reviews
The girl who is gone because nobody noticed she was there... read, review and enjoy...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 207 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 2 - Published: 1/29/2004
Remember? by Jamie-Face reviews
Remember being a kid? r&r please
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 219 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/29/2003
The Earth Wiped Out by F4113N-4NG31 reviews
pg13 for swearing, bloodyness, and some romance- Kita, a girl of 19, has been trapped in an underwater labyrinth, and is transported to another planet. Will she find her destiny? please review :D I'm trying to post a new chappy every day!
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Chapters: 6 - Words: 10,928 - Reviews: 24 - Favs: 3 - Updated: 10/26/2003 - Published: 10/8/2003
Leaving me here by Wren Craven reviews
i don't know how to summarize this...it's about losing someone you were really close to...PLEASE R+R!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Reviews: 16 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/18/2003
Could you love me? by Jamie-Face reviews
This just expresses how I feel when I meet someone new that I care about..
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/11/2003
Rachael & Kate's Fan Fiction by mysticice1318 reviews
my first fan fic, sexual, profanity r/r let me know of any spelling grammer, which chapter they are in, its a long story so its kinda hard to catch all errors. THANKS TO ALL WHO HAVE REVIEWD PREVIOUSLY yall rock!
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 11 - Words: 26,046 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 10/4/2003 - Published: 12/30/2002
A Great Fantasy by neobabyluna reviews
This story is rated more than R, but since there's nothing higher--- anyways, this is a story i created awhile ago and it's based on the future in my life. it's pretty good. r&R PLEASE!
Fiction: Romance - Rated: M - English - Romance/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 8,787 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/27/2003
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A Thousand Tears reviews
A song about someone pleading for a second chance and how they could spare a thousand tears if they only tried again.
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 266 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/22/2005
Past Tense
Very short poem on how the answer was always there.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Published: 1/22/2005
You
A poem about being independent, not needing anyone to tell you what to do, what to say, etc. Basically, a poem about being PO'd at a person because they try to rule your life.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Published: 1/22/2005
Denial and Hope
A poem about how a person ignores the opportunity for love and then in the end finally takes a chance. But unfortunately by then, it's too late. Reviews would be greatly appreciated!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 249 - Published: 1/9/2005
Foggy Rejection
Amy gets invited to an old friend's birthday party and doesn't know what to expect. In the end, she learns a wise lesson in life. (I'm not good at summaries, so...yeah.) Just read it and review! :)
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 694 - Published: 5/15/2004
Forest of Dreams reviews
A short story/poem which is about my forest of dreams, my escape from reality and truth. Please R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Fantasy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 350 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/20/2003
Lovelorn reviews
This came off the top of my head one night...basically a poem about a hopeless love
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/7/2003
Okay
The way it feels to be complete strangers after you've broken up after being in a serious relationship...was insired by Whisper by Evanescence. I saw it in a whole different way..Please read and review!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 246 - Published: 11/29/2003
Behind Blue Eyes reviews
I sort of got this idea for a poem after listening to 'Behind Blue Eyes' but it's a poem about love...Please R&R!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 11/15/2003
Don't reviews
I don't really know how to explain this...but a lot of emotions were running through me when I wrote this. Please R&R.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 103 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/15/2003
Writing Therapy reviews
This sort of explains how writing is like a therapy for me.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 164 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/11/2003
Bracelet of Life reviews
A poem I wrote the day my mom gave me this one bracelet she had since she was sixteen...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 10/11/2003
In The Sky
A poem I thought up while I was swinging on a swing one time and was just thinking about random things...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Published: 10/11/2003
Fallen Star reviews
Basically a poem about inspiration. This originated from an odd thought I had...
Poetry: Fantasy - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10/11/2003
Sometimes reviews
This is a poem about how you're really angry at someone you're close to but you still want them to know that you love them deep inside, even though you may not show it at the moment.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/11/2003
Girl In The Mirror reviews
Sort of about that when you look in the mirror, you see things you would not normally see mentally and emotionally...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/11/2003
Silent Tears reviews
A poem about how all the moving experiences I've been through has changed me. This really came from the heart and I cried just writing it. Pleas be kind enough to read and review. Thanks.
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 395 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 10/9/2003
Golden Hair reviews
This is orginally a short story I wrote for Language Arts. A murdered girl is found with no suspects...PLEASE READ AND REVIEW!:) Thanks!
Fiction: Mystery - Rated: K - English - Mystery - Chapters: 1 - Words: 570 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 10/9/2003
Fantasy reviews
A song I wrote which is about when a girl was used by someone who she thought she trusted...
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 202 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/27/2003
Who Will I Be? reviews
This is sort of a weird poem that I jotted down and its a question as to who I will be one day...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 175 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/24/2003
Dark Hole
This isn't about me but its about someone whos been in an abusive relationship
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 184 - Published: 9/21/2003
Secret Star reviews
Everybody has their own form of inspiration...everybody has a secret star...
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 9/21/2003
Old Friend reviews
This is about a friend I once had who moved away and our friendship sailed away through popularity and new friends. Please read.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 317 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/6/2003
What Would Life Be? reviews
This poem is about what life would be without all these little things in life that we never really take out the time to think about.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 158 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/3/2003
Family Is There reviews
Sometimes when friends abandon you and times seem harsh, just remember that family is always there.
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/3/2003
A Perfect World reviews
This is a poem about what a perfect world would be.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 433 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/3/2003