Elwing Elensar
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Joined 12-08-02, id: 306709
Author has written 45 stories for General, General, Fantasy, Religion, Family, Friendship, Life, Humor, Humor, Love, and Nature.

10/06/06

It's weird being back in this place. I've done a lot of changing and growing since. It was nearly this exact day in 2002 when I originally wrote The Endless Starry Sky, and suchis landmarkof an event which has changed my life.It wasat that timethat I discovered that I had a poetic voice, albeit imperfect and juvenile, and first tested it out. I no longer use needless commas at the end of every line, my word choice has become simpler, I’ve learned to use stanzas and dashes, can let one line stand on its own and have learned that everything and anything can be poetic. And yet, I still love using quotations, writing due to the day’s inspiration, and glorying in mountains, sunsets, and rain, forget how many people have written about them before. I have more self confidence and respect, I have a greater value for my friends, and I’m not so afraid of the future after all.

Thank you all for 4 good years of growth and progression!

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The Seven Martyr Daffodils by Bloo Heart reviews
Of yellow flowers.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 182 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 3 - Published: 3/21/2005
Tent E Gang: I'm eating what? by the-usual reviews
Just a little ditty about me and my friends. I'm going to go back in and edit it eventually. In the meantime, this'll help me appreciate how far I've come as a person and as an author.
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 508 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/29/2004
Painless by Cesy reviews
Something for a friend, one of my favourites, please read and comment.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 87 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/27/2004
Goodbye by Bloo Heart
It's a terrible, terrible word
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 77 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/10/2003
Twirl by Bloo Heart reviews
It's an entierly encompassing euphoria. . .
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 189 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/8/2003
Vampires by Inion Lugh reviews
Well, yeah, not a good title. But the story is your typical vampire story, most likely. A girl who was turned vampire looking for her love, the one who turned her.
Fiction: Romance - Rated: T - English - Horror - Chapters: 1 - Words: 9,110 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/20/2003
Just One Of Those Days by Bloo Heart reviews
Denial is an interesting thing, but it wavers and doesn't last forever.
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 905 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/3/2003
Angst by Bloo Heart reviews
The title sort of says it all. . .it must seem like I had one real bad day, or week, or month, but most of the unhappy poems were written inbetween the better ones posted below. I promise I'm not some psyco manic-depressive ^^;
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 158 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/24/2003
Familiarization by Bloo Heart reviews
I could say something about this, but it would bury me six feet under, so I'll just leave it as is
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 32 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/4/2003
Cold by youguessedit reviews
Define "Poetic." I couldn't think of a definition, but this one seemed particularly poetic for some reason. Written same time as "Sunset."
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Drama/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/3/2003
Closing Night Lovesick by youguessedit reviews
Closing Night: The lights go down and I'm just waiting for her to come.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/10/2002
Letdown by youguessedit reviews
If you've ever been in a school play, you'll understand that closing night let-down.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 62 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/10/2002
Night Bus by youguessedit reviews
I'm just so sure that everyone I know, even remotely, has something to tell me that they won't tell me. This was a real experience.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 56 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/2/2002
The Moment by youguessedit reviews
When two people experience something, and no one knows but them, what happens to that "moment?"
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 51 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/24/2002
Naive by Bloo Heart reviews
I wrote this a while ago and forgot to post it. . .worldly views and such. ^^;
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 393 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 11/15/2002
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Yellow Child reviews
The distraction of a yellow moth at midnight.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 10/6/2006
Not your fault reviews
Dedicated to Holly Anderson.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/21/2006
Letter'd Paper cut
it's good to be back
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 45 - Published: 7/6/2006
Retrograde Progression
My mom was really upset about a week ago with some family problems and I ended up giving her a comfort hug. It really altered some perspectives on our relationship and my respective maturity in such. Written at the same time as Car crash.
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 33 - Published: 3/29/2006
Car Crash reviews
Strangely enough this poem really has nothing to do with the tragedy of a car crash. Rather, it was written after a “shattering” event that recently reoccurred, and I’m forced to review it.
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 36 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/29/2006
Packrat
I am a packrat of not only stuff, but of anything saved to my computer. Looking back on some of them, they are not merely items, but memories.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Published: 12/1/2005
Twin Soul reviews
I have no excuse for this except that it is 1:30 am and I need sleep.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Romance/Spiritual - Chapters: 1 - Words: 41 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 11/7/2005
Out of the bag reviews
For Cameron. Based partially off of a recent IM conversation and partially to the underlying knowledge that there's something each wants to tell the other but can't or won't for some strange reason.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11/7/2005
Pearl Child of Sixteen reviews
For my cousin, a bride at sixteen. I hope she's happy.
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Spiritual/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 9/25/2005
One Eternal Round
Returning once again. Recent events have caused somewhat of a deja vu type feeling for me that has been met with mixed emotions. The quote is from Hamlet, and though the poem is not connected to the play in any way, it does fit.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Published: 9/23/2005
Static Electricity from HeavenShod Feet
My house is surrounded by mountains on three sides and they make lightning storms look awesome.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Published: 9/30/2004
Flattered reviews
A while back I had a guy who seemed to like me merely because I was nice to him when no one else was. It wasn't a very fun experience.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 9/23/2004
The New White reviews
Written after talking with my Cousin who is screwing up her life by justifying her wrongdoings and has been trying to get me to accept her views on life. not Happening.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 80 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/23/2004
Realizations of a Friend
How much things have changed
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 151 - Published: 9/23/2004
You'll never know reviews
And he won't. Mostly just to let myself bleed out my frustration with a once good friend.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 231 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 9/23/2004
The Order Of Men reviews
"It represents society as a whole"
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 9/23/2004
Surrealism
Old poem that I found when I was going through my notebook. I still like it though so now it's here for your enjoyment
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Published: 4/14/2004
Just dance
I was listening to some really awesome Celtic music a while ago and these two poems served the purpose of keeping me from dancing to it ;
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 2 - Words: 140 - Published: 4/14/2004
It really is you
Excuses, excuses.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Parody - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Published: 4/14/2004
Paper Daisy Petals reviews
Written on a crumpled piece of paper as I walked home today.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4/13/2004
For you, because you asked
I have a very dear friend who frequently asks me if there's anything I want to tell him. This is one of those things, written in a poem because there was no other way I could say it.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 175 - Published: 12/22/2003
City Dreams and Fears
A batch of poems I wrote a while ago and haven't had time to put up until now.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 8 - Words: 553 - Published: 12/22/2003
No crime can take my love from you
Just a poem for my friends telling them that no matter what they do wrong I will still care for them and no matter what they will always deserve my love.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 125 - Published: 10/13/2003
Dear Sir, reviews
About a week ago my sister and I went down to a city park and set up a yard sale with the things we had collected from cleaning our room. after three hours out in the bright 100 degree sunshine we only made 1.50 and I spent the extra time drawing and wri
Fiction: Humor - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 292 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/29/2003
Stalwart Recreant
I am confined by my own self-imposed chains.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 46 - Published: 5/29/2003
Wandering Players reviews
*Dances* I'm in a rather good mood today.^^; I have yet to decide if i want to keep the last stanza in this. I don't know if it really even fits with the rest of the poem. Any critiquing would be wonderful.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 104 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5/29/2003
One Drop of Blood reviews
This poem is really not as dark as it seems. The fact of it is that I have been having a lot of stress (school, family, ect.) put on me this past month. All of this it makes me feel like my life, my choices, my very blood is not my own but the worlds
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 200 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5/13/2003
Can you see through me? reviews
Ne. lets just say it hasn't been a very good week.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 152 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/13/2003
My soul's imperfection reviews
I don't have much to say about this one. its mostly about a certain person I know who always makes me feel naive whenever my opinions or views are faced with his.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 162 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/13/2003
Do you Dare? reviews
Do ya punk?
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 2 - Published: 4/3/2003
My pen's life blood reviews
This poem has a rather interesting meaning. I find that I have an easier time writing about angst, pain and sorrow than I do for happier things, and that's what I tried to capture.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 4/3/2003
Security reviews
I was talking to my dad last night about chemical and biological weapons and what they do. It was an interesting conversation but it made me uneasy. Most likely due to the realization that there are so many people with so little respect for a human life.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 62 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/23/2003
Fill me
I am often a sort of diary for my close friends. The constant conversations are always an interesting experience as they always have something to tell me. Their words are never more their own then when they are filling me with spoken journal entries.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Published: 3/22/2003
I know reviews
I got into a feud with my mom a week ago and this is what I wrote to calm myself down afterwards. Typical mother-daughter lecture I suppose. All I know is I can recite it with her whenever she gives it to me.
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 58 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 3/22/2003
Words reviews
I got the kewlest pen a few days ago and just had to write something with it. Here is the result.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 24 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/22/2003
Dear Diary reviews
This is, yet another product of my creative writing class. It has sort of a sad confined mood but writing it made me extremely happy. (I have no clue why.) This is one of my recent favorite things I've done.
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 6 - Words: 1,999 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 3/8/2003
Satan's Plan reviews
A rather unusual poem. It was partially inspired by my own thoughts and partially By C.S. Lewis's The Screwtape Letters. (If you haven't read it the poem might not make much sense)
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 274 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/2/2003
Inspiration reviews
Well there’s not much I have to say about this. Its really short but for some strange reason I like it. I would love to hear what everyone thinks when they read it as its highly metaphorical. If I get five reviews on this, I will tell everyone what it r
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Drama/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2/10/2003
Tari's Story reviews
A story partially written because I wanted to and partially because I have a project on it in creative writing. I am sorry for the lame title but I couldn't think of a better on at this point. Any suggestion on a title or how to end this quickly so that
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Adventure - Chapters: 3 - Words: 2,700 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/27/2003
thoughts reviews
I wrote this for a poetry competition and didn't even enter this one *sighs* it wasn't finished by the deadline. Its sort of different from my usual style as I was critiqued by some of my class members.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 1/21/2003
your love reviews
the insparation for this one was dream i had and i woke up right in the middle of it. i had planed to write a happy poem about it but somethings in life were simply not ment to be happy and I guess this was one of those things.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 263 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/19/2002
bittersweet tears reviews
a collection of 4 poems written yesterday when i was in a really bad mood (laidies and gentlemen may I present the understatement of the year!) anyways I am mostly over it today but i decided to put these up just because
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 4 - Words: 387 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 12/11/2002
Alone reviews
writen with fond memories of a dear dear friend of mine whom I drifted apart from
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 162 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/10/2002
Christmas lights reviews
For my mom I think this one is pretty self explanitory
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 347 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 12/9/2002
the endless starry sky reviews
I wrote this on saturday night when I was experiencing post play lettdown as it was the last night of our prefomance of the play taming of the shrew by william shakespere
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 85 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 2 - Published: 12/9/2002