makkenjii
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Joined 12-25-02, id: 315186
Author has written 57 stories for General.
I live in Los Angeles, CA, and go to school in Oberlin, OH. I'm in LA for the summer right now.

My favourite poet is Federico Garcia Lorca.

I really appreciate critique in all its forms: I will love you if you comment on my work. And I'll comment on yours, too (I like it when people do me the same courtesy).

If there's anything else... you can always e-mail or IM me.

Oh, yeah. My name is Andrew.

Untitled 3 by Queenofrefuse reviews
new poem...r and r please!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/21/2003
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boilingwatercup reviews
It took me weeks to get this one finished! Please r&r - I'm rather fond of this one. All critiques greatly appreciated - thanks in advance!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 123 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7/26/2003
July reviews
"July" is the title in progress. I'm not sure if I'm gonna keep this one, but do let me know your feelings on it. All critiques are greatly appreciated, as always. Thanks in advance!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 202 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7/6/2003
Dance reviews
Couldn't think of a better title. Something different. Written on a plane. Critiques greatly appreciated, as always. Thanks in advance!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 84 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 5/22/2003
Slipper Glass reviews
Sequel to Cinderella. More about Ceniciento! Critiques are greatly appreciated, as always. Thanks in advance!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 131 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5/22/2003
Kindling reviews
The Birth series continues! Now I have to go back to the other character. As always, critiques are greatly appreciated. Thanks in advance!!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 162 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/5/2003
Solitary Hearth reviews
The Birth series continues! There will be one more Lady poem, two to follow Cinderella, and a couple joining them directly. Critiques appreciated as always (also on Amen!)! Thanks in advance!!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 207 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 4/20/2003
Amen reviews
Sorry about the recent dearth of entries - I was involved with a less-than-inspiring guy. Here's the second of two him-based poems (701 was the first).
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 273 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4/20/2003
Cinderella reviews
I decided that before I finish the "Birth" series I wanted to establish the other major character in the story. This is his beginning.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 162 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 4/1/2003
701 reviews
A weird night in a weird relationship. My second purely nonfiction poem to date.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 172 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 3/18/2003
Mirrorfelt reviews
I feel bad for people who don't see everyday life, be it good or be it painful, as somehow magical. Critiques are greatly appreciated as always! Thanks in advance!!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 195 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3/16/2003
Coal reviews
I think there are maybe 2 more poems left in this set to be written. Anyway, critiques appreciated, as always! Thanks in advance!!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 101 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3/14/2003
Paper Parasol reviews
Continuing from "Birth" and "Child." I feel like this is missing something, and I would appreciate any ideas of what it might be. Thanks in advance!!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 146 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 3/9/2003
Child reviews
This is kind of a follow-up to Birth. I think I'm gonna make a couple more in this series, which is daunting to me. Ah well. Critiques greatly appreciated, as always! Thanks in advance!!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 3/6/2003
lucky clover reviews
Ugh, I'm so sick. I wrote this last night in the throes of fever. Critiques as always greatly appreciated - thanks in advance!!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 143 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 2 - Published: 3/3/2003
Flicker reviews
Just another poem. Please read and review - thanks in advance!!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 107 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 2/24/2003
Vessel reviews
I wrote this while sitting at a table with some guy I hadn't been introduced to. It was kind of awkward. Anyway, critiques greatly appreciated - thanks a bunch in advance!!!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 7 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/20/2003
Barnyard reviews
I'm being downright prolific lately! I think I have found my muse. Read and review please - thanks in advance!!!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 72 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 2/20/2003
Mouthwatering reviews
Hmmm, now what could this be about? Hehe. Read and review, please! Thank you very much in advance!!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 2/19/2003
Aspect reviews
Read and review, please! Thanks in advance!!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 2/19/2003
Tapestry reviews
You'll laugh if I tell you what inspired this poem, but I will tell if you ask. Anyway, critiques greatly appreciated, as always. Thanks in advance!!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 52 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 2/17/2003
Courtyard reviews
This poem is much more like my standard style than Desert, Regret, or Throneroom. I'm really happy with it. Critiques are very much appreciated!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 2/16/2003
Throneroom reviews
Another one that doesn't feel quite like me, but it's closer than Desert or Regret, I think. Anyway, critiques are as always appreciated. Thank you in advance!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 55 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 2/16/2003
This Hot Feeling reviews
Another one of my poems with a theme of escape or release. What do you think this hot feeling refers to? I'd love to hear your thoughts and any other critiques! Thanks in advance!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 2/13/2003
Desert reviews
Not my usual style, but I enjoyed writing it. Read and review, please! Thanks in advance!!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 373 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 2/13/2003
Regret reviews
Sorry if I haven't been reviewing lots lately; I've been kinda sick. Anyway, the next two (this and Desert) are both kind of strange. I like the product, but it almost seems like I didn't write them. Read and review, please! Thank you!!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 2/13/2003
Our Lady of the Troposphere reviews
Same as always, critiques are greatly appreciated! Thanks in advance!! And question, should I continue labeling my work "General," or should I call it "Poetry?" Hmm...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 69 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1/31/2003
Secret reviews
I think I'm going to stick with easy titles like this one until I run out of them. I'm so lazy... Anyway, just another one of my poems; those of you who've been paying attention know I don't summarize or put my stuff in genres. Please read and review! Tha
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 92 - Reviews: 8 - Published: 1/24/2003
Thistle Garden reviews
Hmm... this isn't one of my favourites, but I still like the way it turned out. Please read and review! Thanks!!!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 1/21/2003
High Tide reviews
Woops, I meant to put this up back when I put everything else up but somehow missed it!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/20/2003
Clearing reviews
Hey, I finally figured out how to get the formatting to work! I'm so excited! As always, please read and review! Thank you!!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 121 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 1/20/2003
Birth reviews
I swear, two love poems within a week of each other, I don't know what's gotten into me. As always, please read and review! Thanks in abundance!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 1/15/2003
Miser reviews
As always, please read and review! Thanks in advance!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 154 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 1/12/2003
Lover's Whimsy reviews
Please read and respond, as usual! Thanks a bunch!!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 136 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 2 - Published: 1/9/2003
waltz for a memory phantasm reviews
I think it was originally "of," not "for," but I can't remember and the napkin is long gone. Read and respond please! Thanks!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 205 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12/25/2002
untitled 5 reviews
Read and respond please! Thanks!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12/25/2002
Untitled 4 reviews
I wrote this in a cluster with "Thief," "Spectre," and "Affection." Does it show? Read and respond please! Thanks!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 34 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12/25/2002
Thief reviews
Read and respond please! Thanks!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/25/2002
Tangent reviews
I don't know if it's really poetry... Read and respond please! Thanks!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/25/2002
Spectre reviews
Read and respond please! Thanks!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/25/2002
seduction reviews
Originally, this poem was just the third stanza. Which way do you like it better? Read and respond please! Thanks!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/25/2002
Prophet of the North
Read and respond please! Thanks!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 59 - Published: 12/25/2002
untitled 3 reviews
Read and respond please! Thanks!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 93 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/25/2002
Untitled 2 reviews
This was written in a history seminar when I didn't have anything valuable to contribute. Read and respond please! Thanks!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 90 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/25/2002
untitled reviews
This was inspired by the poem "Curva" by Federico Garcia Lorca, who might be my favourite poet. Read and respond please! Thanks!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/25/2002
pearly gates reviews
This is by far the earliest work I have up here. Read and respond please! Thanks!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 70 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/25/2002
Nocturne reviews
Read and respond please! Thanks! And if you don't mind, tell me what you think of using multiple parts in this piece. Thanks again!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 325 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/25/2002
impromptu metamorphosis reviews
Read and respond please! Thanks!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 215 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12/25/2002
I find myself reviews
Read and respond please! Thanks!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 89 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12/25/2002
grizzly reviews
Read and respond please! Thanks!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 221 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/25/2002
Glorious Madman reviews
Read and respond please! Thanks!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 67 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12/25/2002
Garden of Gardens reviews
Read and respond please! Thanks!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/25/2002
found poetry 2
This one is comprised of snatches of dialogue in one of my seminars. Read and respond please! Thanks!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Published: 12/25/2002
found poetry 1
I did this for an English class - it's based on Beloved by Toni Morrison. Read and respond please! Thanks!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 86 - Published: 12/25/2002
empathy reviews
Read and respond please! Thanks!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 12/25/2002
Dilemma reviews
Read and respond please! Thanks!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/25/2002
Bird's Eye View reviews
Read and respond please! Thanks!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 118 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/25/2002
Affection reviews
K... I'm new to this... um.. just read and respond, I guess? All critique is greatly appreciated.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 54 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 12/25/2002