influenced by
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Joined 01-15-03, id: 326191
Author has written 4 stories for General, and Friendship.
Hi. I'm InfluencedBy.

I take time to review poems on Fanfiction (FictionPress). Sometimes I get bored, and try to argue with them. Don't take it badly, because I wouldn't be reviewing your poem at all unless I liked it enough.

I like poems that break free from what a lot of members of the Fanfiction (Fiction Press) poetry hive seem to think are neccesary subject matters. Depression for one. Being totally unhappy for another. Depression again for a third. You get the idea.

I dislike poems that aren't in the least way creative, poems that obviously haven't been read aloud before being uploaded (poetry is supposed to be an art of the spoken word ok?), and poems that are are just very badly written (*at this points waves hands enthusiastically*).

I really dislike it when people who try to rhyme a plural with a singular. For example.

Heart beating madly,
I ran for the doors,
Knowing my truelove,
Would be waiting for more.

Ok, that's not really a good example - but hopefully you get the idea.

And yes, I did try writing all of the above in rhyming couplets. Fortuanately for you, it failed. Not only that, but whilst attempting to do so I realised that I was being hypocritical about the poems I so love to be critical about on this site. Or I was doing something. Have fun.

Untitled by Kanatasha reviews
untitled until I think of a title any suggestions?
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 78 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 2/27/2003
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LUFC reviews
About the football team.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 150 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/5/2003
Goth Woman reviews
Describing frustration about ex-friend. R for implied sexual content and reasonable swearing - but possibly unneccesary.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: M - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 159 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/1/2003
Poet's Nightmare reviews
A complaint headed towards certain parties that expect great things of people who write poems like these...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 2/28/2003
TMNG reviews
Supposedly a happy poem.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 1/27/2003