Amrun
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Joined 02-01-03, id: 336458
Author has written 36 stories for Essay, General, General, Life, Friendship, Love, Nature, Family, Historical, Religion, and Humor.

I just recently decided to take a look back at this, reading my old stuff to see how much I've grown. Excuse me for leaving the few pieces I have on here up, because I know that they're terrible, but I'm leaving them as a reminder to myself. I may even post some of my new stuff, but I'm not sure.

I'm a published poet among other things, and I know how very crucial constructive criticism is. I implore you to leave good, well-thought out, helpful reviews of my writing, AND of everyone else's. Seeing "Wow thsi was GRT, ur a really good writter," may boost YOUR ego, but I personally would rather my work be torn apart if it will help make me a better writer.

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Erin by Adonia Chesser reviews
A spoof I did, I HATE LOVE POEMS!
Poetry: Humor - Rated: K - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/9/2005
Forgotten by Lucid Nonsense reviews
Beauty fades...
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 133 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/8/2005
tangerine girl by this is britt reviews
my friend wanted me to write her a poem. so, I did.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 216 - Reviews: 17 - Favs: 2 - Published: 3/19/2005
Jazz by these and those enormous reviews
I had forgotten how much I love jazz. It's amazing what it can do to the senses when you least expect it and what it can inspire you to write.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 240 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 2/20/2005
see you in the morning by this is britt reviews
in which i sell myself for used love.
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 615 - Reviews: 20 - Favs: 6 - Published: 2/15/2005
Pixel Town by Aeja Tsuki reviews
#1 We're named after pixels. #2 We like rolls. #3 You'd never visit our town, NEVER.
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Drama/Humor - Chapters: 2 - Words: 2,080 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 8/22/2004
Writer's Block by dreama727 reviews
An author struggles to overcome his dreaded enemy
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,771 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/22/2003
Unique by hidden.contradiction reviews
Tis about me... yes... i think it's boring... so read!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 114 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/20/2003
Shock by Serri reviews
This is sort of my testimony. It's a bit of a hodgepodge of thoughts, but it is not apologetics.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 6,609 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/1/2003
A Sallow Moon by A Jasmine Myst reviews
A young girl is traded into a better life as a geisha by her family. This is the short bittersweet story I write for my Creatives class that got raves (We had page req.). Please R&R!
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,918 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 2 - Published: 9/15/2002
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The Sonnet of a Wave reviews
Written November 'o5. Constructive criticism welcome.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 1/28/2006
Insomnia reviews
'Who can sleep/When dreams are at your doorstep'
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 8/19/2005
Monster reviews
"How can you lock a monster in a room with no doors"
Poetry: General - Rated: T - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 106 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 7/15/2005
Rejection reviews
Fear of a thing will prevent the joy of taking the risk and loving it.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 64 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 7/13/2005
Kiss Me reviews
I don't really know how to summarize this. For once, I think I might actually LIKEe this one. Amazing.
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Poetry/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 226 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6/21/2005
Best Friends reviews
It's a bit self-explanatory, thank you very much. Reviews appreciated and returned.
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 82 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/18/2005
Terminated reviews
Written on a request for a friend of mine. READER DISCRETION IS ADVISED, but hey, it's all in the name of humour, I promise.
Poetry: Humor - Rated: M - English - Humor/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 135 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/18/2005
Written on Treebark reviews
A series of poems inspired by ... you guessed it ... nature.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 5 - Words: 216 - Reviews: 10 - Updated: 6/17/2005 - Published: 5/31/2005
Where Am I? reviews
Where am I on the map of all the girls you've been through?
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 119 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/17/2005
Tranquility reviews
Just some thoughts I jotted down at the beach that happened to take poetical form.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 102 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/12/2005
Questioning reviews
A series of poems, each with a consummate unanswerable question.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 6 - Words: 248 - Reviews: 9 - Updated: 6/8/2005 - Published: 5/29/2005
Morning has a mellow taste reviews
Constructive reviews will be reciprocated.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 79 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 6/5/2005
Inside Out reviews
Constructive reviews more than welcome! The favor will be returned.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 6/4/2005
Lord, Thank You for the Fireflies reviews
Written in Summer '03. The title in itself is a bit self-explanatory. A poem expressing gratitude for the small things in life.
Poetry: Religion - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 97 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 6/4/2005
The Last Knight reviews
A short one-shot from 5 or 6 months ago about chivalry in midieval times (kind of). Atleast that was what I INTENDED to write about ... it turned out a tad bit different.
Fiction: Historical - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 378 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/4/2005
Arise reviews
Arise, my darling, and come away.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 61 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 6/4/2005
Swallow reviews
One way highway.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/4/2005
Shattered reviews
Worthwhile reviews will be reciprocated.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 60 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/3/2005
Hit me reviews
Nothing to say. Personal.
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 44 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 6/3/2005
Guilty
Not written for aesthetic perfection. This is total raw, personal feeling. Normally, I don't post things like this, but something compelled me ...
Poetry: Family - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 380 - Published: 6/3/2005
Let Yourself Cry
Constructive reviews please. They will be reciprocated.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Published: 6/1/2005
Nothing New reviews
This is how I cope with abandonment, basically.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 65 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 5/31/2005
Sweet Nothings of a Past Life reviews
Critical reviews, please. I'll return the favor.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 75 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/31/2005
Lust Meets Desperation reviews
My view of today's society's tainted version of "love."
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5/30/2005
Dogs reviews
It's a bit self-explanatory.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 5/30/2005
Trust Issues
How I've finally realized that I view life.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 50 - Published: 5/30/2005
Risk reviews
This is a poem I wrote to myself a long time ago, and just now found in a notebook.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/30/2005
Artificial Happiness reviews
Small, five-line poem. It's not recent; I have no idea when it's actually dated. Constructive criticism please.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 35 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 5/29/2005
I am reviews
Please give thoughtful, constructive reviews. I'll return the favor. Thanks in advance!
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 49 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 5/29/2005
You reviews
Written summer '04, posted as archive. Consructive reviews pleaded for!
Poetry: Friendship - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 494 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 5/29/2005
Girl Depressed
It only hurts because you've never known anything worse.
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 42 - Published: 5/29/2005
The Box reviews
A poem written for a school assignment about memories and looking back
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 141 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/19/2004
Cracks On My Ceiling reviews
The results of attempting (and failing) to sleep last night. ...Interesting, I must say. My right brain definitely had a big play in this one.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/22/2003
Normal reviews
James Bennet feels ordinary, sees himself as ordinary. Unfortunately, the world does not.
Fiction: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 623 - Reviews: 1 - Published: 7/20/2003
Nothing reviews
I felt this way once; it was the scariest half-hour of my life. One of my better poetry pieces, actually.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 98 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7/20/2003
Change reviews
Inspired by a phone call, here is my stupid essay on change...
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 935 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 7/19/2003
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