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Joined 02-21-03, id: 343640
Author has written 17 stories for Life, War, General, Love, and Haiku.
Hey there, my name is Lorna and I am 19 years old. I normally only write poetry... but you never know - I do have a couple of good ideas for some fantasy type stories and fan fics - so watch this space!

I enjoy reading and would appreciate it if you would read and review my stuff because I value the feed-back and welcome constructive critsism

Alot of my poetry tends to be quite angsty, because, like most people I do my best writing when I'm down -its a good way of venting!

I hope you enjoy this little taster of who I am. =)
Best wishes in wherever life takes you - there are a lot of talented people round here - don't let that go to waste!

xx

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Dirty Green Rooms Through Stained Glasses by Joewhatever reviews
(place your hands on me, like concealer on my scars and bruises, kiss me and make it hurt as bad as cigarette burns)
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 737 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/21/2005
BLOOD by Chihuahua reviews
It's hard to summarize this without giving away anything... so just take it as it sounds, you may be right, or wrong.
Fiction: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,477 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/15/2003
Four Youths on Fire by epschwartz reviews
This piece is long...a little epic...but I think it's my finest work. And I think it's important. Please R&R
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,383 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/5/2003
Last Hope by Xaara reviews
A single soldier in Vietnam is forced to make an impossible choice.
Fiction: Historical - Rated: K+ - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,197 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 2 - Published: 5/30/2003
Absolutely Nothing by Nails For Your Crucifix reviews
About how life changes as you grow up. Follows the life of one girl from simplicity to complications. The world is not a simple place. Please R/R
Poetry: Life - Rated: T - English - Angst/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 919 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 6 - Published: 5/18/2003
White Porcelain by setsujou reviews
Dark song about bulimia. Not your standard run-of-the-mill ansty type song, so please don't shy away. *warning* heavy and dark. P.s... Yay for reviews!
Poetry: Song - Rated: K+ - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 165 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Published: 4/19/2003
Begin to Dream by True Illusion reviews
a lullaby...something u don't see written every day. i just had an urge to write a lullaby after attempting to sing one so i ended up doing it. the syllables may sound a lil funny but it sounds ok still when u sing it. plz r&r.
Poetry: General - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/1/2003
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Flirting with a pen and paper reviews
Short poem about the way I feel about writing sometimes - rated for slightly suggestive language, but it's not obscene or anything - I would really appreciate feedback as this is one of the 1st poems I have written in a while now...
Poetry: General - Rated: M - English - Poetry - Chapters: 1 - Words: 81 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5/22/2006
Want reviews
Ok, it has been ages since I have uploaded anything (been suffering from writer's block hehe) but this is just a little haiku I penned late last night - took me all of 2 minutes to come up with...
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: T - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5/22/2006
Stoned Romeo reviews
Rated for (not too graphic) sexual references and some mention of drug use. Im quite proud of this actually... it's alot different to previous poems i've written. please R&R!
Poetry: Love - Rated: M - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 454 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 1/30/2005
Innocent Tongues reviews
Dedicated to the person who taught me how to love... and how to loose. All I can say is I truly hope heartbreak is the kinda thing that can only happen to someone once in a lifetime.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 183 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 11/9/2004
Wild Card reviews
I'm not quite sure what I think about this one, and I am even less sure how others will respond to it when reading it out of context - so I would appreciate your comments. Also this is my first attempt at getting an extended metaphor going.
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 172 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 12/16/2003
Old Wounds reviews
Angst ridden poem about an ongoing problem in my life - I'm quite proud of it, so please R&R. (See my poem 'Forbidden Fruit' for background reading).
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Angst/Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 156 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 11/23/2003
Loss reviews
This is about what it feels like to lose someone important to you.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 15 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 8/18/2003
Dance reviews
I came up with this in a matter of secconds - I quite like it, please R&R!
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 11 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7/4/2003
Relief reviews
This is the first time I have ever attempted a Haiku, so I would appreciate your comments. It's about an immense feeling of relief.
Poetry: Haiku - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 14 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 7/4/2003
Blood Lust reviews
This one is kind of gritty, it's about a time when I used to cut myself. It has taken me a long time to realise it's not the answer. R&R please!
Poetry: Life - Rated: M - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 144 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/4/2003
Crimson Infatuation reviews
This one is kind of hard to summarise, but I like it alot. Pleae R&R!
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 120 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/3/2003
Forbidden Fruit reviews
What can I say? You can't help who you fall for. I would really like to hear other peoples take on this one, there is a fair bit of musical influence in it but I don't know if anyone will pick up on that aspect. (The rating is for swearing, once)
Poetry: Love - Rated: T - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 240 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 5/18/2003
Under The Moon reviews
Some people just seem to have this effect on you, they can make you feel so strong and yet so weak at the same time. Anyway I like this so please R&R, I'd appreciate it!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 132 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 3/2/2003
That Song reviews
This poem doesn't really have much stucture or anthing, but that is probably because my thoughts are a bit fragmented when it comes to this person. This poem makes me cry!
Poetry: Love - Rated: K - English - Romance - Chapters: 1 - Words: 130 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 3/2/2003
Tell me a Story reviews
A poem about my love of reading. This is one of my favorites so please R&R.
Poetry: General - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 129 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/2/2003
TERROR reviews
I wrote this poem when reflecting on the events of Sept 11th '01 at the time I was frightened and selfish, I was more concerned with my own safety than the people who were directly affected - I know better now.
Poetry: War - Rated: K+ - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 1 - Words: 100 - Reviews: 4 - Published: 2/27/2003
Teardrops Falling reviews
This is my first attempt at writing poetry, so constructive criticism will be appreciated. Be gentle though!
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 76 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 2/26/2003