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Summer deceives our hopes. An Eliot allusion.

Yet another poem in Russian. Still about love.

Another reflection on how and when that verse bug gets into me.

Finally... I've been writing this for 4 months. It's a gloomy one, I'm kinda tired of this stuff, but I had to finish what I had started.

This one is reallt different from the rest of my poems. A girl can't get over the betrayal of the man she loves, and there seems to be one solution to it...

This poem continues the theme of 'I know that you won't listen'. Dedicated to solitude, as usual.

A story of a girl who finds out her ex-boyfriend had taken a strange picture of her...

A person with much experience sometimes isn't able to share it with others. It's written in the classical Italian sonnet from.

This one was previously known as Julie. An ironic story of a not-really-affair on vacation. Pretty chunky and needs worked on, but I think it's nice.

Same topic as "As I walk out of a door", but an opposite feeling. Read and compare!

"I'm a loser baby, so why don't you kill me" What one feels once they realize they're left behind. Btw, I'm not sure if laurel leaves grow on trees or bushes.

*UPDATED* A dark story, but things like that happen in real life. A girl's way of dealing with a loss in the family.

Moving from place to place makes you wonder if any of what is around you now will stay in your life. I wrote this one in America, it's pretty self-explanatory.

One more of my sobby love poems. Aren't you tired of these?

I wrote this one after my host mother said it was my fault people thought I was gay.

Something I wrote the other night when my host brother's friends were having stupid fun...

This one is about seeing somebody who reminds you of an old friend.

Nuh-nuh-nuh-nuh-nuh! Sticking out your tongue to a person who said you were hopeless.

That surreal moment when you still don't believe it's over. 4 stars.

Sometimes you get to a point in your relationship where you say "enough is enough, no more".

This one is about that desperate feeling you get when you are going through the hard times in your life and you need somebody to listen to you, but you don't really have any person you could talk to. 5 stars.

You know how it happens when somebody you've known for 2 weeks introduces you as a

Saying goodbye to people you grew close with, but you know you'll never see again. I wrote it after the Pre-Departure Orientaion I had with the other people going to the States for a year I made friends with.

A poem about taking new chances and accepting challenges.

The feeling of emptiness and lack of achievement one feels down the road. One of my better poems. 5 stars.