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Joined 04-17-03, id: 350809
Author has written 4 stories for Fantasy, Supernatural, and Essay.

This site has basically -as of now - been abandoned. I am mostly writing under my other penname Clodhopper, but have posted the guide for reviews below. Please feel free to check it out, but realize that I will not be "returning the reviewing favor" if you read the stories on this page. I would love it if you would come over and take a gander at the stories I am working on with my cousin (HomeFry). It is possible that one day I will return to this page, but it probably won't be for a while since I am bogged down with Clodhopper stories.

Name: Mackenzie - or Mack.
Age: 18
Sex: Female

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Constructive criticism by Werecat99 reviews
Tired of the 'plz r&r my stuff' reviews? Read these simple guidelines to constructive criticism. Tips on how to get more reviews included.
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,032 - Reviews: 212 - Favs: 139 - Published: 2/24/2004
My date by BuffLie reviews
This is based loosely on a date I had. I've retold it through Sabrina, one of my characters. It's really rather stupid.
Fiction: General - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 3,865 - Reviews: 32 - Favs: 4 - Published: 2/21/2004
Thunderbolts and Lightning by Megami no Inazumi reviews
After the appearance of a strange boy in the god-realm, the goddess of lightning is hardpressed to hide a dangerous pendant.
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: K - English - Adventure/Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 2,577 - Reviews: 2 - Favs: 1 - Published: 7/24/2003
Wind by Aerial Dream reviews
A child telling the wind just what she thinks of him.
Poetry: Nature - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 99 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 3 - Published: 7/18/2003
Weather Report by Animagess reviews
A man's emotions are reflected in the weather patterns on the weather channel. Please review.
Poetry: Life - Rated: K - English - Drama - Chapters: 1 - Words: 319 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 6/14/2003
Dangerousity by ladyscar reviews
When life seems to not exist, Hailie tries to escape civilization. She's accompanied by her best friend, but is there anything else between them? Please just R/R ... rating may change in the future
Fiction: Young Adult - Rated: K - English - Romance/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 1,164 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 3 - Updated: 5/31/2003 - Published: 5/16/2003
Loser by Jeniveela reviews
Yeah, I know you’re gonna leave me, leave me and choose her/But you know what? I don't care/'Cause you're just another loser/Yeah, you're just another loser...
Poetry: Song - Rated: K - English - Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 375 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 2 - Published: 5/26/2003
Finger by Jennifer Jolie reviews
I didn't mean to give her the finger.... This is purely humorous by the way, and is not meant to be offensive.
Poetry: School - Rated: T - English - Humor - Chapters: 1 - Words: 137 - Reviews: 3 - Favs: 1 - Published: 4/25/2003
Stop Whining! by The Fiction Press All-Star reviews
Another dangerous poem by Rhino.
Poetry: Politics - Rated: K+ - English - Chapters: 1 - Words: 247 - Reviews: 6 - Favs: 1 - Published: 3/13/2003
A Family of Strangers OLD by skitzo krebstar reviews
We all struggle against bigotry, but some of us aren't allowed to. R for language cause I'm VERY passionate about this sort of thing. It's basically the story of my struggles.
Fiction: General - Rated: M - English - Drama/Angst - Chapters: 1 - Words: 947 - Reviews: 10 - Favs: 2 - Published: 6/1/2001
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Guide For Fictionpress Reviews reviews
This is Mack from Clodhopper. My cousin and I have been asked a few times how we get so many reviews. This is our response. I hope it helps!
Fiction: Essay - Rated: K - English - Chapters: 5 - Words: 5,744 - Reviews: 113 - Favs: 139 - Follows: 15 - Published: 8/7/2005
Dragon's Scale reviews
DISCONTINUED Three thieves, best friends since childhood, find themselves getting entangled in a truth everyone thought was a myth.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Adventure - Chapters: 22 - Words: 26,903 - Reviews: 232 - Favs: 22 - Updated: 8/31/2004 - Published: 6/25/2003
In Danger's Path reviews
DISCONTINUED It's sometimes safer to be in danger's path, which is where an elfin prince and his two best friends are headed. But with the clumsiness of an insistent pirate, they find themselves in more danger than they bargained for.
Fiction: Fantasy - Rated: K+ - English - Fantasy/Romance - Chapters: 4 - Words: 7,417 - Reviews: 70 - Favs: 13 - Updated: 10/23/2003 - Published: 9/15/2003
Storm of Dreams reviews
FINISHED Storms are created by dreams. A ghost who is not dead. A girl with a past she’s tried to forget. And a necklace that ties them all together.
Fiction: Supernatural - Rated: T - English - Supernatural/Mystery - Chapters: 26 - Words: 30,535 - Reviews: 347 - Favs: 25 - Updated: 9/11/2003 - Published: 7/14/2003